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pie chart about electricity production in Australia adn france

The pie illustrates the the number of units generated by different feul sources in both of Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Overall, in 1980, half of the electricty production in Australia came from coal, while France used both coal and natural gas. However, in 2000, Australia relied heavily on coal for most than two-third of the production, converserly, Franece used nuclear power as the main source.
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The maintainance of public libraries is a waste of money because of computer technologies that have the same function.

Public libraries were seen as a brainstrom of knowledge in previous days whilist the usage of libraries are declining due to new technological facilities. Some people belive that renewing the library is waste of money. However I totally disagree the view and explain my opinion in this essay.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

I believe that living in a country where we have to speak another unfamiliar foreign language can cause serious social problems and practical problems too.
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The best way to solve the traffic congestion in the city is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

public transportation is basicly a transport that provided by the goverment. instance of public transportations are train, shuttle bus and etc. public transportation especially bus usually used for the short trip, for the train it's usually used for the upper 10 kilometers or usually we called medium trip.
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A large income is much more important than being satisfied at work. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is argument that high remuneration is important than job satisfaction. In my view, the satisfaction at work is vital than financial benefits. In this essay I will explain my view with relevent examples.
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Many manfactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which casues many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Sugar is widely used in prepared food which brings about a lot of side effects. That's why Health-conscious persons believe these products should have a higher price to limit their usage. I agree with this statement because the higher price affects the community's purchase power as well as the manufactures' profit.
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Financial education should be included as mandatory in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively to what estendto do you agree or disagree..?

Teaching about money management should be a standard part of the education system in order to get qualified and ready to make good financial decisions in life. I totally agree with this and I will discuss that.
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The carts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The chart compares the percentage of water used in six areas of the world. The six area settings range from North America to South East Asia and significant different between industrial use, agricultural use, and domestic use.
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What drives your interest in applying for the IISMA program

As a student in Indonesia, I feel that the education system here has many shortcomings. From elementary school to college, what is always emphasized by teachers and lecturers is just grades. For me, grades are not important; what matters is the process of understanding. Students often seek ways to get perfect grades without considering whether those methods are good or bad. I even daydreamed about whether advanced countries face similar challenges. From there arose my curiosity and enthusiasm to go to developed countries and learn more about the education system there. That is the basis of my desire to apply to IISMA, where there are many opportunities to delve deeper into culture, differences, and tolerance.
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Rain is our best friend. Do you agree or disagree?

Weather is one of important elements on earth since its influence to environments. Many people then, claim that rain is everyone's best friend. However, I disagree witht the statement. I believe that beside the benefits, too much rains give the drawbacks also.
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Nowadays, many people communicate using social media and the internet on a daily basis. However, this had led to an increase in online attacks and cyberbullying. What are some of the reasons why people take part in cyberbullying? What are the effects on the children and teenagers who are victims of cyberbullying?

I think the reason people engage in cyberbullying is because it's easier to get sympathy from others if they say something harsh. On the Internet, people who say harsh things tend to receive praise, so it's easy to hear people saying horrible things like bullying.
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Many countries raise fuel prices to deal successfully with problems of traffic and polluon. What effects do you think this move can have? What other measures do you think can be taken to reduce traffic and pollution ?

In the most part of the world, governments increase fuel prices to solve traffic and pollution problems. I believe such move brings a lot advantages especially it encourage more people to use public and electric transportation which dramatically reduce stated problems.
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In some place, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Older Adult is given a honorable in any distric, while in diffrent country young people is regarding meaningfull. Those generation are diffrent but it has the similar responsibility and role on community. In my opinion, I agree with this statement that those level of people have a position each other and combine the two level of age on organization will make a big integration.
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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrate the change of facilities which done in Grange Park in 1920 so far.
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Some people believe that the government should invest more in public transportation to reduce traffic congestion. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Someone thinks that the autherity should spend money on more in people transportation to dramatically decrease traffic jam. In my experience, I think the topic provide all of them is agree like that for three reasons. I will write four paragraphs Including introduction , two reasons and my opinion.
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“In some countries, criminal trials are shown on television for public. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?”

In several countries, courts open the process of judgement about criminals to the public in media streaming. I strongly believe this policy from the department of justice brings a lot of benefits to the society.
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Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Some people argued that traveling around the world would be destroyed the planet and should be prevented.I partly agree with this statement since there are few benefits of flying.I'll analyze both my agreement and disagreement explanations in this essay.
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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

some people believe that this world would be better if there were only single government for the whole planet rather than one government for each country. Having centralized policies would certainly give the population one specific culture and remove cultural diversity. First of all one government could give an expectation of diversity reduction. In every countries there are a lot of differences, for example behavior of each countries shows what the country is. Moreover, if every country is governed by one national leader means there would be a chance of cultural changing. thus, it removed its own icon.
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Some people believe that governments should invest more in improving public transportation systems to reduce traffic congestion and air pollution. Others argue that individuals should take responsibility for reducing traffic problems by using public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Transportation is increasing day by day with the icrease in population simultaneously increasing pollution. Actually public transport is not so active and easily available in India. Primarily, it is the duty of the government to make public transport easily available at working hours regularly. Secondary, public should also use less private vehicles for reducing the pollution.
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In your view, what is the most important thing for governments to spend money on: education, health, transportation, or something else? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

So many problems in a country that must solved by a governments. Education, health, transportation are cases that important to note. A government will be a developed area if a government always looking out for his people. In some cases governments must to know which problems that priority to solved first.
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