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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Today, misunderstanding about the contrast between competition and cooperation has become a challenging subject. Teamwork and competing have their own fans in this topic. In this essay, I will discuss the perspectives of these outlooks on different parts of our life, namely in our occupation career, at school, and in our daily routine. And then, I will intend to propose the importance of competing than cooperating.
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The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harm to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I uterly disagree with the claim that the major attention of news nowadays is a harmful action to the society. The following would explain the two main reasons detailedly.
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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What are the causes of this? What measures can be international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?

Throughout the world nesessity for food supplies become higher and higher. Personally I believe that overpopulation and intention to living in the more prosperous life in individuals are the main reasons for this case. To deal with such as problem, international communities should take some measures such as integrating new technoligies to the agriculture and creating sense of responsibility in the people.
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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

Nowadays,It is becoming more and more popular for schools to give an special uniforms to the students.As a matter of fact,the majority of schools may provide an appropriate clothes for their pupils.However,some students might not be forced to put on uniforms in some other schools.It is clear that there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of putting on uniforms for students in schools.In this essay,I will look at some benefits and drawbacks of using the same clothes for pupils.
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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many are of the view that tertiary students should read courses of their preference. A school of thought holds in perception that, programs that are relevant in the future should be thought. The essay will elaborate both views.
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Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has become a controversial issue regarding the tution fees of children, as it has been suggested that students should bear the expense of their education by their own because of having personal benefits instead of societal ones. However, I do not agree with the statement as I believe that leaving all the expense to children would not be an appropriate idea as it may affect their ability to learn and grow, rather it should be contributed by everyone including students, societies, and the Governments.
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#Essays #Task2 In some countries younger people are increasingly losing interest in teaching. Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation? Give reasons for your answers and include examples from your own experience.

It has been noticed that teaching profession is not considered as important, and increased number of students are not pursuing their career in this field. Losing interest in this profession can have a number of reasons, and to address this problem government should come up with significant measures.
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The exploration and development of safe alternatives of fossil fuels should be the most important global priority. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? Give reasons for your answers.

Fossil fuels have played one of the most vital role in progress, but these fuels are harmful for the climate. Some people consider that the Government should prioritise the search of new safe alternatives to them.
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Food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumers. Some people believe we should buy food from the local farmer to protect the environment and support local businesses. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, the transportations are evolving; so that, you can send all goods such as foods any where which you find the market very soon; however, a group of people have several idea. In other words, they believe that we ough to buy things from the local farmer, for these works migh protect the environment and support local businesses. while there are some benefits of buy things frome local bazar, In my opinion that these cannot overshadow the drawbacks.
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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,students are assessed by formal examination rather than other tests like project work.some people think it is the best way of remarking. I completely agree with this statement and will discuss it in this essay.
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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given plans illustrate information about the transformation of a harbour from the year 2000 until now.
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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given plans illustrate information about the transformation of a harbour from the year 2000 until now.
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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

Many high education people do not agree about scientificial research being done by our government rather than individual company with many people say the government can do it better. The writer of the essay completely disagree with the school thought and shall serious explain the motives of this ill action.
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Nowadays many people believe that children should be taught history in schools, however, others argue that children should learn subjects that are more helpful for modern everyday life. discuss both views and give your opinion

Many people around the world care about what their chldren learn in schools. It is concidered by some that history is an importent subject for kids . While, their is other who think that schools should keep up with modren life and teach pupils more usefull things. In my opinion, hiatory is useless subject and will not add anything in student life.
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Some countries have age 4 as a minimum requirement for admission into schools, whereas other countries believe that age 7 should be the minimum requirement. What is the situation in your country? What do you think is the right age to enter schooling?

Education indeed plays a crucial role in society. However, when children come age of four is the right time for school admissions in some nations while other countries believe that kids when turn seven that time only they should go to schools. In my country give enrollment for new primary student when they are turned five. I think the age of seven is the best time to enter schools. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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Living in the country where you must speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living abroad where, you have a serious problem with misunderstanding and miscommunication. This essay agrees with this idea. Because of this issues like, language barrier or everyday situations we had a major difficulty.
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Living in the country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this modern day,in search for better opportunities,it is main issue for people to live in a countries, where you have to learn a various language,I totally concur with this topic due to the fact that, if people do not know foreign languages, they will not find a well-behaved job.In that case,I will consider the reasons and open my own views.
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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

People ought to stop competing with each other in daily life and should start working in groups. Although, competition increase productivity, it has bad affect to social life.
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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or nagative development?

There are different foods and goods from worldwide in the supermarkets for consumers. This provides a partly true side for people, and also we will discuss positive and negative sides and summarize them.
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in some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your oponion about this?

In some regions of the America, teenagers are not supposed being out of their home especially at night time unless they are accompanied with adults. I will express my points of view about this in this assay.
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