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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

Nowadays we can notice that the discipline of students in school is much worse than before. Sadly, this tendency is getting even more actual day by day and we are obliged to search for solutions of this problem.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Nowadays someone believed that they are buy some unnecessary thing by effect of the advertisement but some other one said advertisement help them to find new products can improve their life, I totally agree with the second view, which has support me to find new product may have change my lifestyle during the time.

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Many people think that to become a successful specialist it's better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. To what extent do you agree with this view? Support your opinion with relevant examples.

It is true that some people start their job from an early age. They get satisfaction for their career the rest of their lives. Also, they are not willing to change it. I completely agree with this approach which having experience leads to becoming an expert. In this essay, I will debate two sides of these points of view.

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the average amount of money spent by the British parents

The first line graph illustrates the average amount of money spent by the British parents on sports activities and graph two represents the further breakdown of these activities, highlighting the participation preferences between Football, athletics and swimming for the years 2008 to 2014.

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Some people believe that universities should only accept students with high marks. Others think that students of all ages and abilities levels should be able to attend universities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A highly controversial issue in the contemporary age relates to whether the institutions should enrol the talented pupils or average tutees In this essay, I am going to examine the given question from both points of view and then explain why I believe that higher education should be accessible to all age groups and all level of talents in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Behaviour in schools is getting worse Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions

At present, conduct of students in schools, gradually poses negative consequences to school and peer groups. This essay will elaborate on the reasons, effects and possible solutions to the problem.

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Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers, while others disagree. What is your opinion?

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need.Other say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holiday. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages ?

some companies always want to be in touch with their employees around the clock, even if they are on vacation. This kind of work practice always bring negative effect in company's work culture then the positive impact. This essay will discuss some disadvantages of this kind of companies little advantage for both employers and employs.

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Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most people in today's generation waste money on frivolous items and have no control over their financial statements. People spend a lot of money on luxury goods for advertising. The community is unable to articulate its desires and needs.

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Government should spend money on Railways rather than Roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people belive that Goverment should focus more on development of Railways insted of Roads. I am not complitly aggre with it. Both have it's own importants. In essay we will discus some points about importants of heighway and different purpos of both.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music is a special language of the world. It is often claimed that music can connect people with different cultural background and age group. I completely agree with this statement. The reasons are what I will be looking at in this piece.

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In some countries, there is an increase in a number of parents choosing home education for their children. Do the advantage of home education outweigh disadvantages?

It is believed by a few nations that most of the guardians prefer to provide self-education education to their offspring rather than sending them to the academy. I considered that it has more cons than pros which are basically justified by the given opinion.

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Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis.

Health professionals declared that routinely walking is considerably the best way to exercise. Unfortunately, vast majority of individuals

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In the past, people ate local, in-season food, but now, people tend to consume out-of-season food from different parts of the world. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

THE IMPORTANCE OF FOOD WHICH WAS ALWAYS DEBATABLE HAS NOW BECOME MORE CONTROVERSIAL WITH MANY PEOPLE CLAIMING THAT IT IS BENEFICIAL WHILE OTHERS REJECT THIS NOTION.THE SUBSTANTIAL INFLUENCE OF THIS TREND HAS SPARKED CONTROVERSY OVER THE POTENTIAL IMPACT IN RECENT YEARS. IN MY OPINION,TRADITIONAL FOOD APPEARS TO BE MORE RATIONAL.THE UPCOMING PARAGRAPH WILL ELABORATE ON MY VIEWPOINT AND THUS WILL LEAD TO A CONCLUSION.

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Some people say that television is a very useful tool when it comes to education. Others argue that television is a much overused ineffective teacher. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool.

It is argued that whether a TV set is a fruitful device in the field of knowledge, it is waste of time and also an inappropriate teacher for students. The main use of television is it gives a wide range of information about numerous things as well as sees things visually. The most common problem faced by people is they are unable to decide the program which they actually want to watch that's why they lose too much time.

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Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers, while others disagree. What is your opinion?

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether online adverts are advantageous for the audience or not. There is no denying the fact that commercials are enhancing a person's knowledge in numerous aspects. I firmly agree and withstand the given notion. This essay will further elaborate on my visions in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, there has been a growing trend that people tend to buy things on the Internet. This present both pros and cos, however, in my opinion, its benefits are much more significant than the drawbacks.

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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Most people would say that the present time is the best time to be alive despite of others thinking that the best time was far far away , in some century in the history. In my opinion, nowadays, the humanity has a lot more to do comparing with our grandparents, which has less attribuition to do. This essay, it will discuss the most interesting things for living today and compare with an ancient time.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion

It is irrefutable that some individuals tend to believe that accepting a bad position is a good thing. However others argue that the crowd should try to improve such problems for progression. Therefore, I will discuss both viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Developments in healthcare has increased it's accessibility and availability to all people, regardless of characteristics such as income or age. A discernible trend that has emerged, is the increase in the numbers of elderly people, whom require special or extensive care. The rapid expansion of this age group may result in certain dillemmas in today's society.

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