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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Most people would say that the present time is the best time to be alive despite of others thinking that the best time was far far away , in some century in the history. In my opinion, nowadays, the humanity has a lot more to do comparing with our grandparents, which has less attribuition to do. This essay, it will discuss the most interesting things for living today and compare with an ancient time.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion

It is irrefutable that some individuals tend to believe that accepting a bad position is a good thing. However others argue that the crowd should try to improve such problems for progression. Therefore, I will discuss both viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Developments in healthcare has increased it's accessibility and availability to all people, regardless of characteristics such as income or age. A discernible trend that has emerged, is the increase in the numbers of elderly people, whom require special or extensive care. The rapid expansion of this age group may result in certain dillemmas in today's society.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Since humans are prone to violence, many shows breaking laws are growing drastically. In a lot of countries, crime books and TV dramas including offences are becoming more and more celebrities. In this essay, I will explore the reasons for the popularity of murder fiction and dramas and then explain why these publishments should be banned by authorities.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a discussion among the people whether boys and girls should receive their education together in the mixed schools or separately. In the following paragraphes I will discuss both options and express my personal opinion on the best way to receive education.

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SOME PEOPLE SAID THAT MOTHERS SHOULD STAY AT HOME TO TAKE CARE OF THE FAMILIES, WHILE OTHERS PEOPLE BELIEVE IT IS THE RESPONSIBILITIES OF BOTH PARENTS. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

It would be argued by some that housework is the responsibility by the wifes. In my opinion, however, it is in charge of both parents.

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Government should spend money on railways than roads

I cannot say not to spend for any roads development but, the railways need to be developed and supported by government more than roads. To develop and step up in technology, the money should be spent on railways rather than roads. I wholly agree with this argument, and I will explain why.

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you friend has been offerd a place on a course a the university where you studied. He would like your advice about a place to live.

It was nice to hear form you. I am so happy that you start your college next September. About this time the weather is more confy. However to find a place to settle is a bit challenge. But I am sure that I can help you with some tips.

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Major companies use sports events to promote their product. Some people think it has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Leading companies prefer to use Athletic competition to advertise their products. Some opines that this creates a bad effect on sports games. This essay strongly disagree with this statement because of these adverts organisers such as sports Acadamy, sports commission and etc, gets astonishing amount of fund and more number of events will be organised that makes the fans happy.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Some people said that it is unpreventable due to advancements in engineering sciences, and conventional customs will be disappeared because science and heritage are opposite to each other. I fully agree with this idea and in this essay, I will explain all this along with illustrations followed by a lucid conclusion.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to admit adverse circumstances in life or to endeavour to improve the condition In this essay, I am going to examine the given question from both points of view and then explain why I believe that the position can be changed with the passage of time depending on the determination and hardworking in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society, like scientists and teachers, are more successful.

Certain individuals insist that people who are wealthier are the most successful person in the world. Whereas, on the other hand there are some individuals who belive that teachers and scientists are more successful as they contribute to society. In my opinion, to some extent I agree with this statement but the other one is quite logical and suitable that I will explain further in the essay.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Television is flourishing by leaps and bounds and providing us with 24/7 entertainment services, which undoubtedly keep the majority of the people engaged in their spare time. Therefore, resulting in fewer time spent with relatives and friends. This essay completely agrees. Firstly, Due to the latest launch of a new feature where you can talk to celebrities live has impacted the interaction with family. Secondly, Television shows with poor content influence the person to behave in the same bad aggressive and distorted way with friends without even realising it.

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Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the Advantages and Disadvantages of Television for the children

These days, there is an ongoing debate among folk about watching tv shows extensively for kids In contrast to the past While it is possible to petition that owing to numerous upsides such as enhanced mental growth and learning the lessons by watching movies My view is that demerits outweigh the merits. In this essay, I am going to examine both sides in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience .

These days using the internet change our daily basis and becoming controversial. While some claim that the internet cause drawbacks in life, others believe there are many benefits from automation. I agree that social media and the internet have more benefits. This essay will examine the reasoning behind my opinion.

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Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater that it used to be. Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to do so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether youth are more expert and qualified as compared to the ancient time owing to the quality of education In this essay, I am going to examine the given question from both points of view and then explain why I believe that diverse learning and employment accessibility in the modern age enables the youth more qualified in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Increasing travels between countries enable people to learn different cultures or to increase tension between people from different countries?

In 21st century traveling from one country to another is an easy way to have a better understanding about other cultures and religions. But some people believe that different social backgrounds can create conflicts between tourists and local people. However, I strongly believe, on some compelling reasons, that despite the minor tensions between people, global journey can help us to know other people better and get us closer to each other.

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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not be pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether citizens should pay taxes to the government on their income or not. There is no denying the fact that states spend all aggregate taxes collected from the folk on the well-being of the nation.I firmly disagree and notwithstanding the given notion. This essay will further elaborate on my visions in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed. But it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problem associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

With invention of internet the world transformed to a village globe because the communications and transforming data are easier than before. In fact, it can be said technology revolutionized in the world. Although each revolution has impacts on environment. One of the main reasons of internet is related to identify theft and another one is related to time waste. The best solutions are related to managing works and police duties

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In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you Think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is known that many people prefer to live in urban or large areas because of the high standards of living. However, there are many problems in these cities that are likely to be a major cause of their impact on people. Therefore, some solutions will be presented in this article that can solve these problems.

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