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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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THE TWO MAPS BELOW SHOW ROAD ACCESS TO A CITY HOSPITAL IN 2007 AND IN 2010.

the two maps give information about the modification of the city and hospital road that access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. overall, more space for packing and the new bus station was built.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

It is argued that nowadays a major section of the society is engaged in their work for a longer period of time and spare considerably less time for recreational activities. This phenomenon has more demerits than merits. While it might improve a person’s financial status, it also hurts their mental and physical health and family life.

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is common belief that discovering new sources of fossil fuels in intact and isolated areas of the Earth proves indispensable in regard to increasing demand for them. Although finding a new origin of gas and oil has many benefits, the drawbacks involved are of importance to be scrutinised.

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The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about measures to ensure road safety. However, whether imposing stricter penalties for driving offenses is the only way to protect people is still a controversial issue. Although I agree that harsher punishments can act as an effective way to deter people from committing road offenses, I believe that there are better methods to protect the welfare of road users.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

These days, there is an increasing inclination of people towards self-employed instead of being staffs of certain companies or organizations. This is possibly because the independence they can enjoy when working for themselves or the opportunities to earn more money. However, there are certain drawbacks of this option such as working without any profit, more responsibilities and the risks of bankruptcy.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays a large group of community have an opinion that goverments should work hard and put a huge fund on investing railroads rather than highways.To a certain points, I would agree with this statement,because railway networks are more portable, safer, economical and environment_friendly.

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Some poeple say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Cleanliness is next to godlinesh. Although, it is sometimes thought to keep home neat and clean is important and it can be done by organizing things in the correct place. In my opinion, I considered that home and workplace should tidy as it provides immense benefits.

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It is better the students to live away from the home during their university studies rather than staying with their parents. To what extend you agree or disagree?

University life is one of the phase that students look forward to after completing high school. During the university days, some students choose to move out from the residence while some of them decide to stay back with their family.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

it is believed that the government spending on craft is a waste of money, and it can spend somewhere betterhood, in my opinion, art is needed to fund financially as any other sector.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Schools from different countries may face problems with student behaviour. This essay will explain the reasons for this and suggests some methods to solve the problem.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

It is that nowadays, web series is based on the novel, for ,example scared games is one of the most popular novels which is written by the great novelist Vikram Chandra it, describe everything on it based on crime, romance and gang war and also the most highly rated tv crime program. now, why this tv appearance is popular the reason is in India people love to watch crime web series based on novels it makes the program more interesting. According to my opinion, it also has a negative impact on the individual. while some people try to intimate the felony after getting inspired by the display.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

It is true that the progressing of farming makes us have more food to enjoy. However, there are still many people starving.

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In many parts of the world families were larger in the past because people had more children.Do you think they were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of a larger family in the past.

It is true that in the last century, many families around the world formed a large family because of the large number of children. While I understand that critics may see this as family integrity.I believe that there are more drawbacks than benefits.

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Nowdays, people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy. Do you think its advantages outweigh disadvantages ?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's globalised world is inexpensive goods.In the modern epoch , individuals live in a community , which provides affordable goods to everyone . There are both benefits and drawbacks to this notion . Howbeit, I'm of the opinion advantages of cheap consumer things outweigh the disadvantage.

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Children should never be educated by parents at home

Some people think that it is not good for children to be taught at home by their parents.

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Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that the government is responsible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The importance of cleanliness should be applied everywhere not only where they stay as well as the place the city where individuals life, now this has always been debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of fast life people forgets to do what is their responsibility as a good citizen keep surrounding hygiene has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. It can be agreed that residents are responsible to clean the city neat and tidy. It can be agreed

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In this day and age, the percentage of young people to some extent has increased in comparison with older ones in some nations. Although having a young population has many benefits for society, the drawbacks are of importance to be scrutinised.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The importance of staying alone when you are old is who will take care of you once you get old is there any charitable funds old age home come forward to help yes they often help old people. even government also fund this charitable organization. some believe old age is a curse but, to be honest. I really do not to apply it is a blessing seeing your family fully grown before you leave the planet. According to, I believe government should take responsibility because they are the ones who paid taxes the rest of their life.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diasgree with this statement?

In today's era, technology has become an indespensable part of every person life. Although, it is sometimes thought people will prefer e-news and e-books. In my opinion, I considered that electronic reading sources have immense benefits and in the future everyone wants online news as wll as books.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people' salaries to pay for public services such as roads and schools. Other thinks high taxes are bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that it is necessary for the government to take a large amount of taxes of people's salaries for constructing roads and provide services. This essays will discuss both views but believes that high taxes are bad.

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