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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present.

I am writing this letter to congrats your child’s birth and I hope you and your kid be in a good health. It was great news when I heard that your lovely girl was finally born.

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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is convinced that people are increasingly relying on private cars as their primary vehicle of transportation. This issue can ascribe to a host of factors, and I believe it should be addressed by both individuals and the government. There are two problems which are acted as the main culprits by this trend. First and foremost, this problem has the potential to pollute the environment due to vehicle emissions. Furthermore, having a large number of cars in traffic can cause traffic jams duri...

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

University subjects are very debatable. Some people consider that all the university students should opt to what they want to study. While the others think that they should only study the subjects are thought more beneficial for the future, such as linking to science and technology. This essay will discuss both views of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why students' their choices are superior.

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Some people believe that song lyrics which glorify violence and criminal lifestyles should be banned. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such a ban.

Nowadays song lyrics become very flexible and freedom. Songs can have vairy kids of jungles and different types. Therefore, this comes out some issue. Some people think that lyrics that are written in some violent words or others criminal thinks should be removed. This essay discusses the benefits and drawbacks of this type of issue.

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The increase in the number of privately-owned cars is having a negative impact on both our towns and the environment. What can individuals and the government do to reduce this problem?

The technology in the mode of transportation has been improved significantly over the past few decades, this has made many of us show interest in buying new cars. It is the duty of each person and the ruling party in the nations and cities to take care of mother earth.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People who are immigrating to the foreign country need awareness of country's regional language,,otherwise it can impact on society, I agree.In this essay, I will outline different practical problems.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Technology has revolutionized the whole world. It has also become so obvious part of the education system that people start to think about that, whether it is going to replace the teachers. This essay will enlighten how technology is overtaking the education system and whether it is going to replace the teachers in the near future or not.

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In many societies around the world, populations are aging rapidly, leading to unsustainable increase in public health costs. The population of country must pay for health care in the future. Do you agree or disagree with statement?

In many countries across the globe aged population is growing quickly which leads to unsustainable growth in public health care funds. The people of that country should be responsible for their health care support in the upcoming time. This essay completely agrees with the statement because the shortage of government funds and medical support staff services leads to increase in public health care costs.

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Success if often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

The maps illustrate the change of a city named Islip before and after its reconstruction. Overall, lots of new facilities will be built along with the modification of a city plan, including bus station, shopping centre, carpark, and road infrastructure.

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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Sound is everywhere in daily life, from the path you way home, to the restaurant’s background music. Depending on the situation and the time, sounds can be gorgeous and make people delightful. On the contrary, it may cause some pressure to mental health. This essay will discuss both sides and what can be accepted.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places.

Nowadays, a lot of museums and historical site are opened more and more throughout the world for commemorating the herosand kings in twenty-one century passed. And they attract lots of tourists, especially in foreign visitors. But the things is mostly local people are not visited these sites. So what are the reasons about this strange case. Let's see.

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Modern lifestyle means that many parents have little time for their children.Manage and run do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. do you agree or disagree?

It is said that many parents nowadays do not have much time for their children as a result of their busy lifestyle. Manage and run do not receive the same level of parental attention that children did in the past. While this may true to a certain extent, I would argue that there are other different parents. On the one hand, it is understandable why some children do not get enough caring from their parents. The main reason that leads to this situation could be the high speed of developing th...

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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eat meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people get hold of the idea that meat should be substituded by vegetables in everyone's diet, as it can cause health issues. I, however, believe we should consume a ballanced diet which includes both meat and vegetables to provide all essencial nutrients for our body. Also, veggy food may not be suitable for those who suffer indigestion.

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Some people believe that taxing companies ,which cause it ,is the best way to reduce industrial pollution while some suggest that there are several other ways to solve this trouble .Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Many people think that companies that produce pollution should be charged high taxes to let the volume down of the industrial waste and pollution while others believe that there are other certain ways which can be more effective than that to resolve the actual issues.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects.Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In this 21st century , education plays paramount role in the development of children where some people reckon that, history is one of the main subject where one can know about the importance of culture and tradition but others think that, subject s such as science and technology plays fundamental role to make better future which I will disscuss in my upcoming paragraphs

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In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In some countries, a growth of economy should be considered as the first priority for the policy makers. The main benefits of this are lower unemployment rate and the development of international trade. However, the key drawbacks are unfriendly environment and unhealthy lifestyle.

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It is possible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to globalization, a communication between different countries never been easier than the present time. However, one aspect in particular, is highly concerned which is politic. It is a sensitive topic and there is an argument whether governments should focus on their citizens or not whcih will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people believe that women should be able to join their country’s army and police forces. Others think that only men should be allowed to work in these areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Most people expect that only specially trained men are allowed to work in the army industry. In the modern army system, it is not dedicated only to men but also women should be able to join any position in this field.

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we are becoming increasingly dependent on computer based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Using computers has become a normal part of everyday life for many people. Over the recent decades in particular, computer science has been gaining popularity and as I believe will develop and progress rapidly during the next several decades. Although there are some disadvantages concerning this trend, to my way of thinking, the positives outweigh the negatives.

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the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The bar chart illustrates the value of one country’s exports in several categories during 2015 and 2016. The table, besides, demonstrates the percentage of changes in each group of transport in 2016 in comparison to 2015.

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