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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Helping others is one of the greatest virtues and rich countries can do help of poor countries in a different ways. Presently, an argument has been put forward that economically stable nations assist developing nations with financial support but it does not solve the primary issue of poverty. That is why other kind of help should be given to undeveloped countries. In my opinion, rich countries can provide healthcare facilities, advanced education system to poor countries.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.What is your opinion about this?

Every individual on this planet has different perception - rules and policies - on how to manage and keep their dwelling and work place. Some opine that it is necessary to keep both places clean and systematically organised while others do not think so. In my opinion, it is important to keep both places neat and organised.This essay will discuss the benefits of doing so, followed by a conclusion.

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

A segment of society believes that the upbringing and caring for children is one of the most significant duties among any community. Owing to this fact, it is advised to have training on parenting to become an excellent guardian. I disagree with the statement along with a couple of reservations and reasons for the same will be discussed further.

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In western countries people spend a lot of money on their pets.What are advantages and disadvantages?

Irrefutably , pets are true companions of humans.People in western countries lavishly spend on their and many people have more than one pet.It is also status symbol of filthy rich people to have a petbof superior breed.As every coin has two sides having a pet also has merits and demerits which are discussed in the following paragraph.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

The regular consumption of several nutrients of the average American people has been illustrated by the given pie diagrams in the form of a percentage. Excessive eating of any one of them can cause serious health issues.

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Nowadays international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tourism is vital for the development and success of the economy all over the World. currently, worldwide tourism is one of the largest businesses in the world, however, it arises uncertainty among the individuals instead of them knowing. In this essay, I will discuss the argument that different cultural gives rise to uncertainty among each other.

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Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their chuldren’s Study. On the contrary , those online games have produced a lot of negative effect on their mental and physical development. What is your opinion

The bar graph illustrates the percentage of people in Charlestown having four differents weight measurements in 1995 and 2015. Information is divided into five age groups.

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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.

The amount of used oil and gas are lifting up on alarming rate causing the need to discover intact areas of the world. I strongly disagree with that statement since oil and gases are limited sources of energy, moreover, they might cause severe harmful effects on the Earth.

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Most People today prefer to socialize online rather that spending time with their friends in the local community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is irrefutable that in the contemporary era, it is a tendency for people to socialize online eventhough they have a time to meet domestic crowd and mutual friends. I, however deem that advantages of extroward outweight online time spending with people.

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Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that the government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

It is true that some commentators argue that everyone have the right to access to university education, and authorities should make it free no matter what their financial background. I completely disagree with this point of view, despite some arguments for doing so.

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Some people tend to believe adventurous sport should ban .while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity..discuss both and give option.

In recent days ,there is an agreement regarding the necessity of adventurous games.some people tend to believe that authorities should prohibit such kinds of sport activities while others believe, every person has the right to choose their favorite sport instead of it risk.I am going to scrutinize on both the aspects in further paragraphs before forming an opinion in the last.

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Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do any sports ..discuss both view and give opinion

Rrcent days ,there is an agreement regarding the necessity of adventurous games.some people tend to believe that authorities should prohibite such kind of sport activities while others believe, every person has the right to choose their favorite sport instead of it risk.i am going to scrutinize on both the aspects in further paragraphs before forming an opinion in the last.

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Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports,while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity.discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Recent days ,there is a agreement regarding the necessity of adventurous games.some people tend to believe that authorities should prohibite such kind of sport activities while others believe, every person has the right to choose their favorite sport instead of it risk.i am going to scrutinize on both the aspects in further paragraphs before forming an opinion in the last.

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In some countries the lifestyle of people is changing rapidly, and this affects family relationship. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

It is irrefutable that in contemporary era, The lifestyle has changed a lot due to various reasons. Although changing lifestyles of people have brought closer in some ways, However, I still deem that its disadvantages outweight the advantages.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is a difference of opinion regarding accepting a non-favourable situation and accept it as it is or amending it accordingly in your favour but I agree with the second idea that is moulding the situations in our favour and therefore this essay will discuss both the opinions discussed in the question prompt.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Most of the people belive that learning a new language is for traveling or immigrating purposes. However, some resist that, learning a foreign language have different reasons and it is not only for working and studying goals. This essay will discuss both ideas. In my idea, I agree with the second group.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Most of people belive that learning a new language is for traveling or immigrating purposes. However, some resist that, learning a foreign language have different reasons and it is not only for working and studying goals. This essay will discuss both ideas. In my idea, I agree with the second group.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourist as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Discuss about the problem solution.

In the midst of this technology-driven global world,tourism has a significant role in economic system of a country.In most countries,main income is generating from tourism.However, if it is mismanaged or not managed properly,it can results in more issues. In this essay,I will be discussing the several solutions for this issue.

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Many things used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines .do this bring more advantages or disadvantages ?

Modernization plays a huge role in the development of advanced technology which helps human beings to fulfil their task in their respective field. It is believed that nowadays most of the work in the homes are done with modern machinery rather than the human beings themselves. This essay will discuss both the pros and consequences of the statement.

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Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes.

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