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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some professionals opine that any additional increase in economic wealth of a nation that is already rich does not translate to happiness of its people. I totally agree with this statement as there are some other issues that take away happiness of the public, and this include gun violence and high cost of real estate.

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Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that travelling has become one of the most popular activities to do in the leisure time. It is considered by some that a travel can be the memorable experience which enriches people’s lives, while there are others who think that it is time-consuming and requires a considerable sum of money. I believe that benefit, which travelling experience provides is immense.

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Write an essay to describe a sports player you like most

Even though I am not a big fan of football like my grandmother and my brother, I still admire Cristiano Ronaldo – a professional footballer. I can say he is the most favorite sports player of mine till now.

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Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

These days, the list of optional subjects has become wide than in the past. But there are still mandatory and difficult lessons like mathematics and philosophy, which are hard to absorb concepts, are taught to children. Many adults think that these difficult subjects should be able to opt. This essay will discuss why these subjects should be able to opt and I will explain in detail my conception about this idea.

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Today the high sale of popular consumer goods reflects the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Advertising is one of a key requirement of any business, and nowadays there are different advertisements that attract people and increasing the number of sale figure, seems people do not need the product but attractive advertisement encourage them to buy products.

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Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The incremental usage of computers and mobile phones for communicating are thought by some to negatively impact the reading and writing artistry of young people. While I believe that the youngsters positively impacted by using such electronic devices, I agree that they have had a negatively impacted on academic dexterity.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Today with an advent many social media network and most people using in all ages, and it is become an integral part in most life of people. With these developments in social communication, some issues and problems have emerged. although the negatives associated with social media, I think that advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss advantages and disadvantage of exist social media in this era and put forth my opinion.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is believed that amount of business find their employees who joined the company and have less interpersonal communication skills. This is a serious issue to the businessmen who runs the empire. However, there are various causes that find difficult for the business. This essay will include possible views and apropriate solutions with examples for this subject in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only; others, however, feel cell phones should be used mostly for work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that smartphones should be used only for personal purpose, while others say that they in most cases uses for work. In my opinion, cell phone mostly should be for personal use and sometimes for work.

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Why Torurist visit the museum but loacal people dont visit and what can be done to attract moe people in museum

Museums are the historical places, we can preserve the memories of our ancestors, so that it can be very useful for our next generations. But now a days only tourists visit to these places but hardly local residence of that city visits the people, for that there are so many reasons.

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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Involving the live classes plays a very crucial role in the children life, as they tend to grow they will their learning power will increase. Physical education classes help the children to comprehend the things which are being taught at the school in an efficient manner.Skills play a significant role to get a job or earning money.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather that secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's most developing world and rapid-growing world learn something new such as a western language is necessary for part of each and every child. A number of people believed that, children should gain some other language knowldge in primary school instead of higher school. while I still believed they are more benefits if children understan other accent during the secondary school.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.What is your opinion about this?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is organization of our environment. It is undeniable that a home and a workplace are an essential part of our life, therefore, some people tell that these places should be tidy. In this essay this tendency will be scrutinized and I will give my opinion regarding this one.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged .Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more more useful adult's. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Some folks are of the opinion that children who are home-schooled develop better than their counterparts who attend conventional schools. The merits of both methods of formal education and my opinion will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newpapers or books because they will be able to read everthing they wantonline without paying.

Newspapers and books are considerably used to learn about topic that a person fascinate in past. In the present, the world has many facilities to comfort people, for instance, blog, electronic books, application, and anything else. I agree that people will use internet rather than every kinds of paper printed in the future.

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In order to change their appearance people often turn to plastic surgery. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such an approach.

we are seeing that many of people are involving to plastic surgery and this take place has several resons and this essay present advantages and disadvantages this issue.

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In many countries, women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are abale to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the world, the rate of single women is increasing and it more and more get independent more than in the past and plenty people suppose that having a financial authority for female no longer need to get married, This essay would be presented agree and disagree.

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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that academic subjects act as a key role in the future career that they should be laid emphasis on teaching at schools. However, others believe that art and sports education is also of the essence to students in terms of physical and mental health. In this essay, I am going to explain understandable justifications for both two views and give my solid motives why I reckon that both of them should be equally concentrated on.

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In the past 20 years, there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT). However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future?

In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the world wide web and communication by email. However future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positives .

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In some countries, people buy clothes and choose hairstyles according to the latest fashion. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

I think we have two options why people buy clothes and choose harisyles according to the latest fashion. And this options are big problems of our society. Why? Now I will explain you. Let`s start from options. I think he first is positive and second one is negative:

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