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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think this cannot be changes, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Man has ruthlessly misused mother earth. For his needs he has crumbled the lives of animals as well as plants without giving a second thought to the consequences which are accompanied with it. Some of the harm can be reversed while other is irreversible. Through this essay, I will discuss both the

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museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country Ruther than works of the other parts in the world to what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is irritable that, In modern world save our history to upcoming generations. There are museums and art galleries that should concentrate. On history and culture works, Ruther than part of other works of the globe. I agree with the statement. I would like to explicate at length in the upcoming paragraph.

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Reading is more educational than watching videos or TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most children have become more addicted to games and tv more than reading.lt is believed that children who read learn everyday faster than playing games and watching tv. I somewhat agree with the statement.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Transportation is an essential means to convey people and goods from one place to another. Certain individuals in different nations state it is vital to use substantial capital for the construction of railway station for extremely movable trains in urban areas while others suggest the money should be utilised on working on public transport that are already in place.

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Many people think that too much attention and resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

Animals are beautiful creation of god. Presently, an argument has been put forward that a myriad of efforts and resources are spent on the conservation of wild species. In my opinion, saving the existence of wildlife is beneficial for mankind.

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Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. Other people believe that children should be taught this at home. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary era recycling is debatable topic. Some individuals opine that provide the knowladge of recycle things and avoid waste in school, while other deemed that home is batter for learning that things. this essay intends to analyse both perspectives before give my opinion. I, however side with latter view.

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Write an essay to describe a sports player you like most

Even though I am not a big fan of football like my grandmother and my brother, I still know about Cristiano Ronaldo – a professional footballer. I can say he is the most favorite sports player of mine till now.

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Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care about them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that it's important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show for them our care. Other think that there better ways to show that we are care them. This essay will discuss both views and I will explain my personal opinion.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions?

These days, many older people are competing with youths in job market for the same position. To enter into an experienced club, one has to start from entry level but when older people participate for entry level as youths, it creates problem for younger generation which we will discuss in this essay with solutions.

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Some people think in order to continually improve the quality of education high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers.Others feel that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Feedback on education system is the integral part for school peers and future generations in their career perspective.However , there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently views that teachers should be adviced on their competency while others emphasis that it is not a fair notion to de-evaluate the educators.

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Some people believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

It is often said that advice from elderly people is better than that from youngsters. This essay discusses why I think that older individuals could aggregate more with their pieces of words.

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some people argu that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentantion be justified?

There have been discussions about the use of animals for testing purposes in order to achieve scientific discoveries.

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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Language has a pivotal role in our day today life. Every language has its own importance. People give high priority to their mother tongue, due to the easy communication. While living in another country people may communicate with their language, it can be lead to some serious issues, therefore, this essay totally agree with the statement that speaking foreign language in a country can cause adverse effects .

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some people think governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and hosing problems to help people to prevent illness and disease. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, it is general that to face misbehaving students at school. it happens for various reasons. Nevertheless, proper measures exist to alleviate the problem

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Some people say showing program such as Olympics, cricket on television is the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Some say that there are some other ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Exercise makes a man healthy and fit.Using help to guide the public through television or such channels is a good source of teaching and motivation. While there are some contradictions to this statement that many folks have different thoughts on the same point. They feel that there can be other options for such encouragement. As both have different viewpoints so I will try to discuss some opinions in the following section.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What reasons can be for lack of sleep? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Sometimes you might know that your friends were really drowsy while they were working however they were insomnia on late night. Sleep insufficiency is the most dramatic problem due to it will affect your efficacy work. Sleeping pills are not the best way to solve it.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Growing tourism industry has contributed to the economic development of many countries , but often faces some issues as well and difference between customs and behaviors of tourists and natives is one of such issues. While one school of thought agrees that local customs and behaviors should be followed, other one believes that foreign culture should be welcomed. In this essay, I will discuss both the views followed by mine.

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental Problems owing to the overconsumption of fossil fuels can be mitigated in a variety of ways . However there is a certain fraction of people who believe that raising the fuel prices is one way to go about it . In my opinion , this is not the most efficient manner on how to tackle this issue

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many successful sports professionals earn more as compared to people working in other professions. While many agree that comparatively higher earning capacity of sportspersons is justifiable, others tend to differ. In this essay, I will share my views on both school of thoughts and share my opinion.

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Prison is the best punishment for criminals. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world evil rapidly growing all over the place. A number of people think that whoever committed the crime they have to be in lock-up. while I am completely agreed that, criminals should be in a lockup.

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