IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 479

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many children spend most of their daily time attached to their phone. This trend happened because of the lack of presence of parents which can lead to a negative development for kids.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agre or disagree?

Many persons think that , helping for free in favor of others could be just benefical for kids.They believes , this should be mandatory for youths.I totaly agree with this ideea, and I think it is beneficial not just for kids but for community too.

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Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way.

Penalising and hitting children for their mistakes had always been a very common practice by the parents of older generations years back.However,with time it has been acknowledged to be an illegal act and is strictly discouraged.Both physical and mental abuse has always been considered to be against the legal rules in majority of the foreign countries.It is quiet unfortunate that a huge number of parents still come up with arguements in order to establish their rights over punishing their children in their own way.In my opinion,guardians can penalise their kids to teach them,but can never physically hit or abuse them as I will explain.

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Many people prefer to studying in different subject in different country , whats your opinion?

I am a graduate student of MA in English Language and Literature at the Azad University of Kerman in Iran. I am interested in being accepted for a second master position in Marketing Management, specifically Digital Marketing, because I consider this program as an opportunity to improve my professional skills in a place with superior professors and highly knowledgeable lecturers. So, my motivation for studying for a second MA is because, as the world of business become globalized, the need for young talented with extensive specialized skillsets is increased so a second master will deepen my knowledge, increase my career and will allow me to provide a great opportunity to challenge myself through critical thinking as well as communication and leadership, these are perhaps being the most obvious reasons why so many contemplating of pursuing a second master degree in marketing areas, although these two master, both very different, they complement each other well. Moreover, my real drea...

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the best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a good step and infact beneficial in order to control the fatal road accidents, which are occurring on a daily basis, due to the reckless driving by many truck drivers, that is to retake the driving test every year. While this procedure is challenging on practical grounds but, I am in a strong favor of adopting this approach. This essay will discuss my point of view in detail.

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In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployement will cause to the individual and the society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.

In several countries, nowadays, most teenagers commit to end their study, then majority of the fresh graduate student are looking it so tough to find occupations. This problem would cause the lack of workforces to fulfil certain position in the societies. There are some reasons why these problems occured and two solutions which can be used to deal with these matters.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or buildings they live in. What are the reasons of this? How can people research this?

Information about the number of hospital beds per 1000 citizens as well as the medium forecasted lifetime in various nations is illustrated in the graph and table accordingly.

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

With the fast development in recent years, children are having many different personalities. Some research indicates that these personalities and developments are influenced by the characteristics they are born with much more than their experiences. Personally, I consider experiences they have in their lives to be the major influence.

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Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social, behoviour ond lack of respect for others. What might caused this situation? How to improve it?

It is unfortunate that in the midst of vast progress in every field of life there is also a groMh in the antisocial behaviour and people have become less respectful of each other. This essay intends to analyze some causes of this phenomenon and suggest some ways to ameliorate the situation. Today, we live in an era of technology in which the whole Earth has shrunk and become a global village. Everybody is connected to everybody through telephone lines and the lnternet, but the warmth of relationships has taken a back seat. Most people have more than enough wealth, comfort and freedom, but their hearts desire even more. To satisfy their hearts greed people have become workaholics, and as a result have no time for family and friends. People have become selfish, isolated and indifferent. Each person is busy in his own quest for more. To add to it, the youngsters who are at ease with the new technology think that the elderly are good for nothing and that is why they don't respe...

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In many parts of the world, it is common for one parent to stay at home and raise a new born child while other works full time to earn money. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The upbringing of a newborn child requires a lot of effort and time from parents. Nowadays both husband and wife started earning for future endeavours, ,Moreover they are contributing equally in order to run their house ,However In spite of being the availability of caretakers, there are some parts of the world where a newborn child raised by one of the parents and the other one earns their living. This essay will discuss how the advantages overtake the disadvantages.

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Over the years, television has become an essential item in modern-day homes. That is said, a certain segment of individuals argue that TV set is becoming a threat to humans as they believe it creates lazy individuals and isolated habitats. Though some people stand against this affirmation, I stand with the people who support this affirmation. The following paragraphs will analyze two factors which contribute to the ideology as well as my opinion.

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Argument: International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Some people think that the problems caused by international tourism outweigh the benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At the present time, international tourism is a big industry. Meanwhile, whether this trend has more benefits or more problems is a frequent topic of discussion. From myperspective, international tourism is definitely beneficial in many ways.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

To begin, it has been a controversial debate among people who believe universities should foster students in a specific field in order to become dominant in all ins and outs which is related to their major whereas, opponents of this phenomenon claim that only professionalism in a delicate field that is recommended for pupils future job would be more adequate. therefore, in this ,essay we will articulate both points of view involve inclined to strongly support the letter prospect.

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More and more athletes are using drugs to enhance their performance. What do you think are the reasons and effects of this?

Sports careers become attractive for numerous people all around the world. Many athletes start consuming drugs to achieve a rapid result, while others practice regularly for developing themself. In this essay, I will discuss possible reasons and consequences drugs might have

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example through cellphone tracking and security cameras).In many cases,the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening . Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ?

Technology has changed the world a lot in recent times, with evolution of Sciences the life has become easier and better. But on the other side, the privecy is getting less. I radically disagree with this development. In this essay, I'll explain my viewpoint and lend my opinion.

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Advantages and disavantages of moving abroad. Discuss both and give ur opinion?

Nowadays, studying or working in a foreign country is done growingly by many people, especially by young adults, as living abroad is really an exciting adventure. However, everything comes with the good and bad sides. So, we need to think carefully before making any decisions.

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The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

I have many ambitions in my life. • But the one ambition that I am working on right now is to go for higher education in Canada. • Earlier I didn’t have any plans to go abroad, but a conversation with a friend who went to Canada changed my opinion. • He told me about the difference in the quality of education and the work opportunities available there. • So after completing my senior secondary education, I decided that it would be the best opportunity for me. • There are two main requisites to get admission in a good Canadian college. • The first is good grades in senior secondary education. • My grades are pretty satisfactory. So, I didn’t have to worry about that. • The second is a good score in English language tests like IELTS or TOEFL. • I learned that Canadian colleges give preference to IELTS and hence I am taking the IELTS exam. • For the past two-three months, I have been practicing for the exam. • I ordered the Cambridge books and started my preparation from ...

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Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays some people think extra budget and attention are paid to protecting wildlife. I totally disagree with this opinion because lots of animals, birds, and plants have extinction in recent years.

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Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Tradition is the best way to demonstrate nationality. Some people often believe that abiding by cultural rituals for teenagers can lead them to excellent parenting, while others believe that this can be the result of unsatisfactory manners. I think that in many situations, tradition can help to open the world to different views.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? To what extent you agree?

Some people around the education trust that starting to study a foreign language for pupils at primary school is a good idea. This essay will argue that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In my view, someone who began to learn additional language earlier can easily success language in the future and confusion with their first tongue, is not valid.

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