IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 480

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems, Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourgae people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are many numbers of ready made food which are easy to eat and do not waste time and because of that they become popular and people are enjoying them, however, drawback of this matter is that sugar concentration levels of thoses food are high enough to cause some medical conditions. Therefore, some people hold the option that sweet products with high sugar level should be expensive not to induce the urge of consuming sugar for people. In my opinion, I disagree with this idea due to the fact that not only it will not tackle down this phenomenon but also it can cause unnessary problems.

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‘Social networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter are observed to have more negative effects than positive being more useful for the criminals than others. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Social media like WhatsApp, Facebook and Twitter are seen to have more wrong effects that right effects are more helpful for criminals as compared to others. I am agree with the given statement .

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Because individuals and countries cannot help everyone in the world who needs help, they should only be concerned about their own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Generally, there are certain population in every part of the world that needs help. Some believe that individuals and countries cannot help every unfortunate human on earth and they should only care about their own community and country. In this essay, I largely agree that it is impossible to help every individual in this world; however, there are possible ways to support those who are in need from all corners of the world. The main risk factor to unable to help every community on earth is that some hapless victims are unreachable especially those who are living in countries at war. There are many families who lost their homes and are in scarcity once after their territories are being attacked by dangerous nuclear weapons. For example, the people of Iraq, Ukraine and Yemen are being murdered and there has been bombing taking place every moment in unexpected ways. Hence, it is indeed unsafe for any social workers or volunteers to visit and help countries that are under nucl...

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As the world population increases, genetically modified crops are becoming essential to meet rising demands for food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Over the past decades, global food shortages had been a problem to many countries all over the world. Some believe that, with the increase number of population, genetically modified crops are becoming important to meet consumers’ demand. I largely agree to the statement, however, there is another system that can also be practiced to solve the issue. Modifying a plant’s gene by transforming its DNA could reduce the chances of the crops to be infected by diseases. For instance, seedling diseases are very common in plants such as corn and wheat and these conditions may cause marked reduction in the yield. When DNA of the plants that are susceptible to diseases are changed, more crops that are resistant to diseases are grown. Eventually, there is higher yield and the production may satisfy consumers’ demand. However, the availability and cost of genetically modified technology can be a concern in certain countries. The technology is handled by multinational companies such as ...

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, public health is a concern in many countries all over the world. Some believe that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. I largely agree to the statement, although, there are other better measures to cope public health issues. Increasing the quantity of sport facilities in the country may help to improve the health of the citizens. Presence of gym facilities around the residential areas for example may encourage the residents to perform exercises which may lead them to a better cardiovascular health. Theoretically, people may start using gym and sport equipment in order to get themselves active and healthy. In reality, without proper training and education, a person’s motivation may drop and the frequency of attending gym will reduce. Hence, it is clear that adding up the number of sport facilities may only temporarily encourage the population to participate in sports activity but not a long term fixation. It is de...

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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

There had been many turnovers in terms human’s lifestyle in many cities all over the world. It is believed that the quality of life is declining in many big cities. There are causes that lead to this problem and methods to solve it. To begin with, the main cause of the life’s quality being affected is due to noise and air pollution from the transportations. Nowadays, every individuals own a car and the quantities of cars on road had been rising significantly. The usage of these transportations may lead to increase in carbon monoxide gas which are detrimental to health especially the respiratory system. Moreover, the honking sound from cars are causing stress to mankind. There are myriads of solutions to tackle this problem and one of the methods is by implementing the usage of electric car and car pooling. Many modern technologies had created cars that uses renewable energies such as the electricity in order to reduce pollutions. When the amount of these previously stated...

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What are the problem of increasing city size ? What is the solution?

It is a fact that a majority of people leaving the rural areas and moving to the urban areas. There are several reasons for such a situation. There are two main causes of the problem is career opportunity and medical facilities. In this essay, I will discuss both the aspects in the ensuring paragraphs with possible solutions.

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People spend too much time on the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, the internet plays a vital role in daily life of everyone as it enables people to search for information, remotely communicate with other, get entertainment, and so on. However, many people including me believe that nowadays society spends over much time on the internet. In this essay, I will clarify what makes people spend too much time on the internet.

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Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Due to globalization, the number of people travelling overseas for tourism is gradually increasing. Some people claim that authorities should collect more fare from them than local citizens when they visit monuments and sights. I disagree with this viewpoint as it not only creates financial burden on visitors but also leads to discrimination.

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Some people argue that it is the governments responsibility to transport children to school while others believe that parents should do that discuss both views and give your opinion.

Evidently it is true that both the government and parents are responsible for transportation of school going students. However, I give my opinion in favour of letter view. I will express my perception in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

A considerable number of products are being imported and sold by the shopping malls from other countries rather than buying from it locally. I believe this method has several reasons, such as high profit, range of products and availability for the supermarkets, and benefits, namely range of the product for the customers, huge customer's crowd for the malls.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands ofclothes, carsand other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The line graph depicts the proportion of US citizens who have seen cinema in different age brackets from 2000 to 2011.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increasing number of people move to urban area for seeking opportunities for better lifestyle. However, living in metropolitan areas is challenging, authorities should take actions to address problems.

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Compare two pets and give examples how they help people in their life.

Cats and dogs are the most popular pets in the world. Despite having some comparable features, they are two different species. Their dissimilarities are the one and the only reason why people choose which to raise. Firstly, talking about similarities, cats and dogs support their owners in many ways. For instance, they help the possessors release negative emotions such as anger, anxiousness or loneliness. On the other hand, dogs and cats can also provide special assistance for those having difficulty. For example, guiding the blind or the senior with health problems. In contrast, their behaviours are typically opposite to each other. Dogs are described as honest and with integrity, yet the furry creatures' responses rely on each individually. Because of that, the canine and humans are companions, but the cats' owners are virtually their servants. Dogs generally never fail to complete any demand effortlessly, though cats always expect rewards before making any movement. After all, ca...

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Some people prefer activities and lifestyles in hot climates while others prefer ‎activities and lifestyles in cold climates. Discuss both views, and give your ‎opinion.‎

The bar chart illustrates the investigation of Australian people's habits of consumption of coffee and tea.

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, people more concern on abortion since get increas rapidly also becomes a controversial topic, so some people believed the abortion must be legal in law but the other against it. In my opninion it is the bad decision ever in law or government if they make the abortion to be a legal. On the one hand, people think if the abortion is good way to environment. For example, the main problem of many countries is increased of population very significant, so the best choice to reduce that is abortion. Much people who does not have permanent job also poor, they think to abortion the baby can save the life of their babies because if they birth to the world, they can not give the happiness to their children due to poor situation. On the others hand, several people think if anyone wants to arbotions it is the big fault because is same like kill the human, and did not give chance to the babies know how live in our world. For instance, woman who getting pregnant might be by acci...

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Some people feel governments rather than private companies, should be in charge of medical services To what extent do you agree or disagree

Wellness is the first factor that should be considered in our society today, so certain individuals think the authority should be in control of the health sector instead of a one-man organization,However I feel the authority should be in charge of public wellness.

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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand , it is also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. To what extend do you agree or disagree with these statements?

There is no doubt that these days, the internet is siginificant in our life even though, it provides us information without internet we can not working completly. The question is, the network makes us to stay connected with each other no case where we are. On the other hand, it is furthermore, isolates us and support society not to socialise. In this ,essay I am going to discuss my opinion.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the problems of playing computer games and what can you suggest to minimize the bad effects?

In our modern world with advent of technology and the internet a large number of human beings spend a lot of time playing online games,including teenagers.In this essay,I will explore the problems associated with addiction to phones and computers and suggest possible solution for them.

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Limited money should be spent on computer equipment or good teachers. Discuss both views and state your opinion

It is vital to invest the optimum amount of budget on the electronic instruments that we use daily and also, on teaching professionals. In this contemporary, many debates that it is not a great idea to spare more currency for computer or quality tutors. However, in my opinion, there is always a return benefit for the people who spend more money on computer hardware or experienced lecturers. I will be discussing both viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs. Firstly, having quality electronic machines always provide you with several benefits such as durability, reliability and amazing experience with minimal issues. One who would think about the long term they always invest in high performance products as such items do not trouble the users and additionally, those are more user friendly. Since the quality of the material is mostly depends on the price, it always a viable solution to invest more money in the such type of setup. For example, many software and service prov...

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