IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 637

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Museums and art galleries should focus on works that show the history and culture of their own country rather than works of other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that the museums are the treasure banks of knowledge and showcases the evolution of the the country. It is constantly argued topic whether the exhibition galleries should display only national collections and artworks or include the works of international artists as well. I assert to the opinion that it should contain a mixture of all world art forms together with the local works. My viewpoint will be discussed in this essay with the reasons further.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

In many nations around the world, to own a house is most crucial for the people instead of living in a rented one. This essay will consider various factors behind this, and the negative impacts this situation bring in people's lives. The native people of certain countries have tendancy to purchase their own houses. This is because owning a house is considered as a prestigious thing and also people do it from an investment point of view. On contrast, people in my country often think a person is poor if he does not own a house. Another key reason, the population considers while purchasing a house is that - it will serve as an investment in the long run. For example, one of my friend has purchased two flats in India, just for the investment purposes. There are negative factors involved in owning a house rather living in a rented one. To buy a house, there is often heavy home-loan is involved. Because of this, people tend to pay large amount of hard earned money to book a house...

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

In many nations around the world, to own a house is most crucial for the people instead of living in a rented one. This essay will consider various factors behind this, and the negative impacts this situation bring in people's lives. The native people of certain countries have tendancy to purchase their own houses. This is because owning a house is considered as a prestigious thing and also people do it from an investment point of view. On contrast, people in my country often think a person is poor if he does not own a house. Another key reason, the population considers while purchasing a house is that - it will serve as an investment in the long run. For example, one of my friend has purchased two flats in India, just for the investment purposes. There are negative factors involved in owning a house rather living in a rented one. To buy a house, there is often heavy home-loan is involved. Because of this, people tend to pay large amount of hard earned money to book a house...

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative situation?

In many nations around the world, to own a house is most crucial for the people instead of living in a rented one. This essay will consider various factors behind this, and the negative impacts this situation bring in people's lives. The native people of certain countries have tendancy to purchase their own houses. This is because owning a house is considered as a prestigious thing and also people do it from an investment point of view. On contrast, people in my country often think a person is poor if he does not own a house. Another key reason, the population considers while purchasing a house is that - it will serve as an investment in the long run. For example, one of my friend has purchased two flats in India, just for the investment purposes. There are negative factors involved in owning a house rather living in a rented one. To buy a house, there is often heavy home-loan is involved. Because of this, people tend to pay large amount of hard earned money to book a house...

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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher other think that its depends on the attitude of the studnet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education plays the most crucial and vital role in building the minds and souls of children. The topic of role of student's progress after the education has been raising a lot of debates. A set of persons believes that this progress relies on the professional tutor. On the contrary, others insist on the opinion that it depends completely on a child, how he grasps and takes his learnings. Viewing from a general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpoints, I personally agree with the former for the following reasons.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

According to some people hosting international sports event in their country is good while other argue on the same point by considering it is not appropriate for betterment of country. In the following paragraphs I will discuss the both views and will conclude by giving opinion.

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As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

Both graphs illustrate the addmissions of overseas students and local ones in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.

There is a view that when asking people whether they choose between having a work-free life or getting a job that consumes the majority of their time, they would usually decide not to work. In my opinion, although having no work in life may have possible benefits, having a job is far more beneficial.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit places?

With the advent of advance technology in travelling n safer means nowadays travelling is no more that cumbersome than a decade before that's why more and more travellers like to explore unknown n new places . Tourists love to explore new places along with problems which they face are inevitable. I would like to discuss both of my viewpoints on this. Firstly , exploring a new place like Sahara desert or Antarctica is no more difficult thing nowadays with advanced means which can lead to ...

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Some countries today have passed law against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

Nowadays, smoking in public places has been prohibited in some countries, while others thought it was unnecessary. In this essay, I will discuss the both sides of this phenomenon, and give concluding view. On the one hand, critics of tobacco restriction in public places promote the idea that smoking is depends on personal choice. Citizens of those countries think that they should have freedom to smoke in anywhere they want. Moreover, some countries believe that smoke in public area can lead to economic improvement. Evidence from many statistic shows that countries, allow people to smoke in public areas sell more than other countries. On the other hand, supporters of anti-tobacco law claim that smoking in public places may infringe on the right of others to live a healthy life. Study of World health organization shows that cigarettes are not only harmful to smokers but also harmful to others. This is to say that if someone is smoking in offices and restaurants, people who ...

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The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?

At the present, an excessive number of people are anxious , as the cruelties that are presented by music lyrics , video games and movies impact adversely to youths. We will discuss most principal problems arising and also two following remedies which can reduce this anxiety. Argueably the gravest problem of violent in entertainment promotes aggressive emotion;consequencely , youngsters are unable to handle their depression or forceful feeling , and it is cause of suicide and offences. To illustrate, Most teenagers have problem that associated with peer pressure or depression this situation may lead to the preperence for rap and heavy metal music genre that describes suicide , sexual forcefullness or other cruelties ; as a result of this, some of them can not handle their feeling and it is being cause of suicide , accidental murder or ravishment. A further serious impact is this gente of contents diminishes timidity of death or delinquency. In fact , According to the young...

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Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this? Suggest possible solutions to control this.

In recent years,poor eating habits becomes a terrible issue all over the world.On this account,a large number of people are observed to be negligent of their health and damaging their selves by eating unbalanced diets without any control of their bad eating habits and they are dealing with being overweight and other unsuitable well-being.Besides this difficulty,eating quickly,eating too much junk food,eating food without any time planning,eating without any diet are some critical reasons which lead to unhealthy people.This essay delves into the requirement to set up reasons for this poor habits and to develop various solutions to tackle this problem.

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Several people believe that companies should move from developed cities to regional areas. This essay suggest that advantages outweigh the disadvantages because it will increase the jobs and will help in the development of

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Teenage is a growing stage and different phase in everybody's life. We cannot understand and what they want and how they want.Therefore a fair amount of people believes that teenage guys are frequently arguing with their parents for no reason and I would like to express my viewpoints on the same.

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In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, everything is quicker than ever and this acceleration also reflecting in lifestyles. Today's all opportunities and advancements in every field, people tend to change their job and location easily. Although it may affect family relations, it makes sense of keeping pace with life and embrace new opportunities. This way, our time will be more valuable and not wasted. This is why I found this situation beneficial in every respect.

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In some countries, girls and boys are studied in different schools rather than in the same schools. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this.

Education is the fundamental element in the growth and development of every children. Therefore, the educational environment, is an important aspect that parents need to analyse for their children. Co-education has been a debatable topic even today, in many parts of the world. In this essay, we will analyse few crucial points that supports both mixed gender and solo gender education.

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Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, numbers of students that pursue their education in other countries has increased.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern society, a tremendous advancement is manifested in all sectors due to the technology. There will be a vast majority of autopilot vehicles can be seen in upcoming years. There are both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles and this essay will give an insight to the points.

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It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?

It’s commonly believed that the old crowd give better guidance than the younger crowd. However, in some cases, you may have to ask for some suggestions from the same age folk or younger than your age. I completely disagree with this statement and the reasons will be discussed in the following paragraphs. The first and formal reason is technological advancement. During these days mobile applications are prominent. Some old persons are unable to adopt that this could lead to time-wasting for example if we are still doing financial transactions at the bank then it would waste your time. Although we should adopt online official bank websites. Another clear reason is the generation gap. Due to differences in working culture. Sometimes old crowd unable to understand and evaluate problems. They thought and relate that problem according to their experience. However, that could not be the best fit for now for example going out for dinner. Old people prefer to eat at home. They sti...

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In some places, teenagers are encouraged to get part-time jobs while they are still in school. Do the advantages of teenagers working outweigh the disadvantages

Many people argued that having a part-time job while students are still in school are a huge advantage. While there are benefits to students, there are also goods reasons why it might be beneficial to students with experiences getting from practical jobs. Whereas, others considered this might cause some problems and issues for their studying. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend, I would argue that these are outweighed by the advantages.