IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 637

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people argue that government should make laws regarding people's nutrition and food choices to improve public health while others Contend that this is the freedom of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The issue of whether government must formulate policies with regards to what people eat in relation to nutritive value in order to promote public health , or give it's subjects power to choose and be responsible for what they eat is a debatable subject.

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Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government.while others believe that individuals should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is generally considered that health is the most prominent factor for every individual. Many masses ponder that authority is responsible for people's health, whereas, others believe that it is the responsibility of individual to be healthy. I shall highlight all my points in further subsequently.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people hold the view that athletes deserve to be paid more while others argue that there are other more important professions in which people should be paid more. I more inclined towards the latter. On one hand, sports professionals have to do a lot of strenuous activities to earn money. They did not earn the fame overnight, they did tremendous efforts, worked then fingers to bones, to reach the extremity. I am convinced that not hardwork but fame is what brings them more money. Common people worship and are intrigued by sportman. Their popularity helps them to endorse in several campaigns and advertisements. One the other hand, scientists and people in the healthcare industry dedicate their lives for the betterment of the society. Scientists spent night after night in laboratories to invent cure for several diseases. From increasing our longevity to making transport easier, they have helped us in various ways. Similarly, doctors and other healthcare workers prior...

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by some that advertisement has enormous success in persuading us to shop products, however others argue that a large number of advertising activities has made people insensitive to it. In my opinion, advertisement has remained exponentially successful in making us buy things we do not really need them. I will discuss both views in my essay.

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Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses. Nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own ways. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illnesses or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, with the emerge of new technologies in the medical field it has become easier to diagnose and treat mental illnesses. However a large number of the population disagree with the idea of mental health being a disease that could render people disable. Hence they are more accepting of physical illnesses. I strongly agree that, the psychological illnesses are ignored despite, in the advancements in both education and technology.

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Topic : Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

Nowadays, in many countries, land can devided to many kind of land suchas developed and developed areas. The skyscrapper may built for a lot of people in some city that has limited land, while the others give their population a house with huge area aroud it. In the following paragraph, both of these solution will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

It is true that we are having the biggest problem of global warming today. Although this is a serious problem, it can be solved by the goverments and individuals making effort from small things.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed becaused of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

It is evident that technology has changed the ways of communication and influenced relationships in a various. People often debate whether this phenomenon has any negative or positive development on relationships. In my opinion, even though this advancement may have some positive impact, its influences are mainly negative. To begin with, the principal way in which a relationship has been affected by technology is that they tend to be far away rather than face-to-face. This is because the internet is now available in many parts of the world and thus, people can communicate with their friends, families, and clients scattered across the world no matter the distance. Therefore, it would be more convenient for people to interact on the internet. In addition, the dominance of online communication can help us meet new people and expand our friend circle through various social platforms. For example, Facebook, one of the most successful social networking website, has a feature that...

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What are the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective in reducing crime levels?

In many nations, committing a crime has been increasing among teenagers. Primary causes are paying less attention to youngsters and being under threat. However, the situation could improve if parents and government pay more attention to adolescents.

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Please outline your immediate plans upon returning home and your longer term career goals

I really say thanks you in advance to all of involving individuals of the Chevening program taking me a great opportunity to studying master in the UK. This essay will indicate that the three steps of the planned consequences after the postgraduate courses including an immediately plan, a middle-term plan and the ultimate goal.

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Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is thought by some people that the job satisfaction more essential than security work. Some peolpe might think that adventage of working for permanent job is more nescessary. In my opinion, I believe that a satifie job could be more benefitcial.

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Some people say that e-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The provided diagram explains the process of recycling the domestic and industrial waste in liquid form in a European Country.

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Some people think that uniform at school is unnecessary and should be banned.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certain individuals argue that having uniform at school is not important and should be discouraged.In my opinion, uniform are necessary for specific school identification and this essay is going to explain the importance of school uniform.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Environmental causes various problems in the world. Many individuals think that these issues should be resolved globally while others criticized and argued that these problems should be solved individually as a country. Both this view has its pros and cons. However, both these arguments would be examined further before commenting on my own opinion.

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In many countries, schoolchildren are required to wear school uniforms. What are the advantages and disadvantages of enforcing uniforms in schools?

Uniforms are the student's identity that has been enforced on schools. While in many countries, school uniforms are suggested to wear on the school campus, as this practice is suitable for their safety and can improve their focus. Yet, it is also believed to have cons like limiting students self-interest and can be expensive for parents to buy every year.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Thesedays an enhanced medical treatment can leads into great results for longlife expectancy through whole generations.

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Please explain how you build and maintain relationships in a professional capacity, using clear examples of how you currently do this, and outline how you hope to use these skills in the future.

The world has gradually changed by human beings over the thousand years. In general, People actually are associated with each others for a number of reasons including living, business and socialization. In my opinion, having good relationship is a great fulfillment in my life and meaningful throughout the lifetime. This essay will discuss how relationships are built and maintained with adaptations in the future.

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Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future.

Regarding the postgraduate study, I am a keen interest in specializing in international business management. This is appealing to understand insights into the fundamentals of work operations across the countries. I also will learn about the international economic environments and keep up with the complex and ever-changing global marketplace. This field is really exciting and attractive to me. Over the years, as of my graduation in Economics, I obtained a lot of basic knowledge in the econo...

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuel should be the most important global priority today. TO what extend do you agree or disagree?

Let's introduction with fossil fuel, In nut shell, The liquid materials which are being used to run the vehicles that is petrol, diesel and coals are examples. Theses materials come under petrolium products. When petrolium products burn, they discharge harmful gases and these gases do adverse effect on the envirnoment and human health. I do fully agree that the subsititue of fossil fuel should be urgent priority in current era.

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars. To what extend do you agree ?

Prisoners have always had a bad reputation by society. They are deemed to be failures and should be punished for their mistakes by being locked up in cells and seperated from community. I do not agree with this notion as I view that doing unpaid community work has more advantages for the prisoners and the prison system than punishment.

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