IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 640

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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others thinks that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

There are many criteria to examine people’s intelligence, but for some people the best measure is success. I think it is true, but only up to a point. Most people believe that an intelligent person is more successful than ordinary people. They consider that clever human beings achieve their goals sooner than normal ones. In general view, wise people are richer than ordinary people they know how to make decisions at critical situations. Based on research at school in Italy, smart students with high intelligence scores have better contribution to development of their societies when they grow up. As a result, intelligence is a key to success.

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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

These days, technologies is very develop all the world. Everyone have their own laptop and smartphone. It bring many benefits for people during this time. They can work from home with their computer. However, anything always have both sides. This essay will explain the pros and cons of working at home.

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Some people think that environment problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are many environmental problems around the world and the impact is extremely high. A major number of people are claiming that this issue should be deal with internationally; while others believe that it would be easier to deal with them nationally. In my opinion, there are many benefits with both national and international level in cause handle with the environment so if both are involved then there is a high chance of controlling.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The new devices and The Internet have influenced many activities in our daily life. To read, being one of the of the most extended activity around the world, does not scape to these transformations. For the above, it is agreed that in a future not too far, online content will replace printed newspaper and books. This change would bring benefits from both people and environment, analizyng the factors we'll explaine next.

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Nuclear energy is the better choice for meeting increasing demand. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The line graph gives information on how many people visited four museums in different countries from 1980 to 2015. Overall, the data reveal that the Louvre museum was the most popular, followed in second place by the Vatican museums whose number of visitors rocketed to almost the same figure for the former by the end of the period shown. On the other hand, the other two museum failed to attracted more visitors over this period than that of in the first year given.

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Describe a restaurant or a café you like most. Write an essay about 265 words

My favourite restaurant is in Ngoc Lam Market. It’s located near Song Hong and it’s also pretty big compare to other restaurants in the same road. The restaurant called Bao Lam restaurant because it is the name of the person who set up the business.

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Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

It is considered that most of the students left school without acquiring the knowledge of managing their funds which becomes an alarming situation in most of the countries. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, learning to manage money appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate on the problems along with remedial solutions and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Agree or disagree?

Many people considered money as a significant element to accomplish happiness. Although, others opinion is that money and wealth has no connection with delight in life. Some people say money can buy happiness.

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Some people believe that a part of criminals should work for government free rather than going to jail. I am totally agree with this idea about the criminals that government charged them with petty crimes due to some reason.

In my assumption some criminals such as murder and abductor is dangerous in community and they need to punishment and go to the prison to get a lesson and do not commit a crime again. But other criminals like shoplifting does not hurt someone. So, it is better that this kind of crimes provide a service free for the general public. For instance, if the criminals in society have chance of work in the community instead of sending them to prison they would understand the value of comfort and life better. Moreover, when a person who committed a crime and sent to jail he meet the new criminals with the same point of view then he will tendency to make more crimes.

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Nowadays because of our lifestyle and bad economic conditions people tend to working overtime, There are many people working harder than others in both school and the workplace. Some people believe that without labor, nothing prospers. But it is always a good thing?

A lot of students study for long hours because they want to compete for the entrance exam, some of them want to pass and do well the exams just because of the promote in their job position at work. But some others are workaholic and they are very passionate about their work. They are doing it simply without any compulsion. Moreover, there are many people who work in different companies with various shifts because of their financial problems. These kind of people don’t have any other choices...

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Describe a restaurant or a café you like most. Write an essay about 265 words

There are many kind of cafes that I really love. But I suppose the best cafe I have ever experienced is the Kafa cafe.

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"It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

In modern pedagogy, disputes do not stop not only about the appropriateness of the application of punishment, but also about who, where, how much, how and for what purpose to punish. There is no definite answer to these questions to this day. Some educators believe that it is necessary to punish more often, especially in preschool and primary school age, in order to develop correct behaviour habits. Others advise resort to punishment very rarely, in exceptional cases. And there are those who are convinced that true upbringing is upbringing without any punishment.

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are advantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Nowadays, it is common to find people from rural areas migrating to larger towns in search of better employment opportunities and to avail urban amenities. However, this trend can affect their adaptation to the lifestyle as well as the rising living cost. This essay will discuss both the merits and the demerits that are associated with this trend. To begin with, the principal reason for relocating to the cities is the ample placement opportunities available in towns. As the cities are centre of trade and commerce, they provide the people with easy employment and hence the people shifting here, can benefit by this trend. Furthermore, the urban amenities, such as the emergency health care units are a boon for especially the elderly people in the families. They can rely on them at any hour of the day. For example, my neighbours who shifted the town last month had an urgent medical requirement when the elderly lady in the house fell on the kitchen floor and had some serious injuries. ...

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Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement.Discuss both sides & give your opinion.

Looking towards highly socioeconomic disparity, there have been efforts made by professionals by implementing uniforms for children at school. While some says school uniforms infringe upon students’ right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behaviour and academic achievement. In my opinion, some set of rules to avoid discrimination on demographic basis are rather worth than need to express individuality.

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Currently there is a use of alternative medicine. However at the best these methods are ineffective, and at most they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer. These days there is serious concern about obesity worldwide, but especially in wealthy countries. I believe that there are two major issues, which are Fast Food and a lack of exercise. However this essay also proposes possible solutions to each of these issues. First of all it is clear that Fast Food is the main reason for obesity. Almost every bigger city in the world has a Fast Food restaurant, which makes it easy accessible and promises a quick feed. The result is a considerably high amount of health problems, which might be diabetes, liver problems and a high blood pressure. Nonetheless, a possible way to solve this problem are health education and programs. For example advertisements on the TV about how to cook fresh meals in a short time. Secondly, there is little doubt that a lack o...

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Describe a restaurant or a café you like most. Write an essay about 250 words

As an introvert myself, I am not keen on going to crowded or noisy place to socialize with others. Therefore, I often find to quiet places to have small conversations with my friends, or listen to some music. It is also how I found my favourite coffee shop near my school.

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While mobile phones have many advantages a number of problems have also resulted from them or the ways in which they are used. What are some of those problems? What solutions can you suggest for solving these problems.

Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages? Nowadays, there are many different school systems around the globe. Most systems operate test or point based, while some like waldorf education believe tests and notes are no beneficial for the children’s education. However, this essay will show that the advantages of a test based school system eclipse the disadvantages. Firstly, it is clear that a test enables children as well as teachers to know the skill level of the students, which gives both the opportunity to work with that base. Therefore a teacher can base the lessons on the exact skill level of their students. A weakness in mathematics, for instance, can be easier erased, if the teacher knows about the difficulties. Additionally, the student has the opportunity to join a further course to extend skills in a topic he is successful in. Further...

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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while other think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer. These days there is serious concern about obesity worldwide, but especially in wealthy countries. I believe that there are two major issues, which are Fast Food and a lack of exercise. However this essay also proposes possible solutions to each of these issues. First of all it is clear that Fast Food is the main reason for obesity. Almost every bigger city in the world has a Fast Food restaurant, which makes it easy accessible and promises a quick feed. The result is a considerably high amount of health problems, which might be diabetes, liver problems and a high blood pressure. Nonetheless, a possible way to solve this problem are health education and programs. For example advertisements on the TV about how to cook fresh meals in a short time. Secondly, there is little doubt that a lack o...

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Test and examinations are a central feature of school system in many countries. Do you think educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages? Nowadays, there are many different school systems around the globe. Most systems operate test or point based, while some like waldorf education believe tests and notes are no beneficial for the children’s education. However, this essay will show that the advantages of a test based school system eclipse the disadvantages. Firstly, it is clear that a test enables children as well as teachers to know the skill level of the students, which gives both the opportunity to work with that base. Therefore a teacher can base the lessons on the exact skill level of their students. A weakness in mathematics, for instance, can be easier erased, if the teacher knows about the difficulties. Additionally, the student has the opportunity to join a further course to extend skills in a topic he is successful in. Further...

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems.

Nowadays our world is getting borderless due to the results of the globalisation. However, some people still consider moving to another country where one should get used to speak a foreign language on a daily basis to be one of the most significant reasons for that person to go through a hard assimilation process causing numerous problems with new society, as well as mundane problems. From my point of you, such opinion cannot be viewed as a credible one today as the modern generation is extremely flexible, being capable of living under a great variety of circumstances.

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others thinks that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

**These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?**

Some people think that environment problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nuclear energy is the better choice for meeting increasing demand. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Describe a restaurant or a café you like most. Write an essay about 265 words

Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Agree or disagree?

Some people believe that a part of criminals should work for government free rather than going to jail. I am totally agree with this idea about the criminals that government charged them with petty crimes due to some reason.

Nowadays because of our lifestyle and bad economic conditions people tend to working overtime, There are many people working harder than others in both school and the workplace. Some people believe that without labor, nothing prospers. But it is always a good thing?

Describe a restaurant or a café you like most. Write an essay about 265 words

Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are advantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Currently there is a use of alternative medicine. However at the best these methods are ineffective, and at most they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Describe a restaurant or a café you like most. Write an essay about 250 words

While mobile phones have many advantages a number of problems have also resulted from them or the ways in which they are used. What are some of those problems? What solutions can you suggest for solving these problems.

Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while other think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Test and examinations are a central feature of school system in many countries. Do you think educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems.

These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?