IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 654

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

These days, advertising plays a big role in our market activities. Some people feel that it is usual and has no impact to our preferences. However, it might unconsciously influences our economic behaviour, and makes tremendous effects in our purchases.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

In this modern era, we might know obviously that internet have a big impact in shaping our culture and behaviour. Actually, reading habit is not an exception; while everything could be browsed and read by online and free, some peoples think that nobody would buy physical books or newspapers anymore in the future. I partially disagree with this notion that it would totally change all peoples’ behaviour.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.

Nowadays, having a place for live is credited to one of the most important basic need in our society. While people in some countries believe that owning a home is a great deal, it might be a contentious issue for some people who live in the big cities considering the payment that absolutely higher than renting for it.

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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

Nowadays, having a place for live is credited to one of the most important basic needs in our society. While people in some countries believe that owning a home is a great deal, it might be a contentious issue for some people who live in the big cities considering the payment that absolutely higher than renting for it.

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Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. Do you think this is a good or bad Idea?

The figures represent the number of owned vehicles per thousand people in China between 1987 and 1999 years, inclusive. Overall, the bar chart shows an upward progression; additionally, the rate of increase varies significantly according to the individual years period. Turning to details, the smallest number of cars per thousand was in 1987 which amounted to considerably less than 500. The number of vehicles was rising gradually from 1987 to 1991 and became twice as many (just under 1000) as it was in the beginning. However, the changes in cars number were insignificant for the next years and remained approximately the same; additionally, it almost reached 1000. Furthermore, by 1995, the number of vehicles doubled (about 2000) in comparison with the previous time. It started uplifting rapidly; in addition, the number of cars in the next years accounted for just below 3000 and by 1999 it increased by almost 2000 (reached just above 4000). The figures represent the number of own...

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Some people think that the government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree?

Fast foodstuff on the plates at every meal is not only a habit but also a status symbol nowadays. It has been argued that the government must raise tax on such kinds of cuisine items to galvanize the public to initiate eating fresh and healthy. I am totally agreed with the aforesaid notion because it would help individuals to get rid of obesity and related diseases, in addition to that, it could also enhance physical as well as mental fitness. This essay will dive into the detailed advantages of it in the upcoming paragraphs.

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some people think watching TV is bad to children in every way. other think TV has positive effects on children , as they develop to grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some opine that television affects adversely on development of youth whereas others think the opposite. This essay tries to discuss both views in my opinion later one is better because of catastrophic effect on health and make teenager uncivilized.

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Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary, because students can get so much information through the Internet, and study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

INTERNET IS BECOMING POPULAR FOR ACQUIRING THE KNOWLEDGE. HOWEVER, IT IS BELIEVED BY SOME PEOPLE SCHOOLS ARE DO NOT IMPORTANT IN FUTURE. CHILDREN CAN BE MUSHROOMED THEIR INFORMATION BY USING INTERNET. THEY DO NOT NEED TO GO SCHOOLS. WHILE I DIAGREE WITH THIS OPINION AND THIS ESSAY WILL BE EXPLAINED MY VIEWPOINTS IN FOLLOWING PARAGRAPHS.

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Some people state that the national teams and an individual sportsman and sportswomen should be financially sponsored by the government or non-government body. how far do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Although, many people believe that government and private firms should support economically to national sports representative of the country is convincing. I think in a reverse manner and agree to the given statement. My inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

The impact of Covid19 is showing drastic changes in the tourism sector. Although, people are showing keen interest to go on liesure trips but they want to take-up short tours to nearby locations. This essay, will highlight the upcoming trend of domestic travel getting more preference over international travel by the resident of our country. Even though, pandemic has restricted commute of daily travelling to work in the society, it has still not dampen the spirit of folks to go on holidays with their friends and families. Because of this people are ready to go to locations outside city limit or places not visited by others. This is happening, firstly, due to increase in work from home scenario wherein individuals are constantly in search of weekend gateways like homestays or private villas to enjoy moments of relaxation and rejuvenate with loved ones. In addition to it, as work pressure is increasing tremondously with intense competition people are unable to get leaves for lo...

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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• It is not necessary to travel to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet . Do you agree or disagree?

Over the past few decades, travelling is not required to study different culture as with the advancement in technology one can learn it from books , internet and movies. However, it is most debateable topic, I agree that every information is available online but physical experience has its own remarkable experience.

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many people believe that the Internet is useful, but some argue that the Internet harms people. do you agree with this?

In the modern world the internet is the one of the most significant things for humanity. However it has both positive and negative features.

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Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To whant extant do you agree with this statement

It is true that affluence in the modern world is not the way to a happy life. There are a lot if complexities and troubles.

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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What are the main causes and what measures could be taken to solve these problems?

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In my opinion, man and women should have access to the same educational opportunities.It is wrong to discriminate against students because of their gender. But however, i do not think that univercities should accept a equal number of man and women.

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Some people think that it is better for a country’s economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

As the rise in economic growth, pursing the high quality of lifestyle has become more important. Several people claim that spending money is a beneficial to the economic development; however, the others believe that saving money is a good for us. Both aspects have their perspective, and the upcoming essay will discuss both views before my final verdict.

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The ownership of car should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is very true that pollution is the biggest concern for all of us. Therefore a fair amount of people believes that most of these traffic-related issues are due to more transport vehicles on the road from the same family, hence I would completely agree with this statement and would like to express few points on the same.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has been a long discussion of what is the best option, if accept bad situations or trry to improve them, both have benefits and drawbacks.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Global warming is the most pravalent man made induced problem which will be danagerous and catastrophic for the human race in the coming future, it is getting worse day by day due more production and trapping of green house gases. Global warming has many impacts which I will elaborates in following paragraphs. Global warming is very seious problem in the 21st century which requires immidate actions to prevent destruction of earth.

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