IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 651

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Now-a-days celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than their achievement, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is clearly evident that celebrities are becoming more popular for their beauty and wealth rather than their achivements. If we look in to the field of cinema, actors are giving priority to the roles that involves beauty rather than a good role or a responsible message. Even the cricketers are not playing to the mark to achieve something for their country, instead they are concentrating more on adverstisement which earn them money and bring fame to their beauty.

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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this today world, watching television is becoming a major threat to our family relations, rather than talking to our family or visiting people we just watch television. However, I totally agree on this statement and in this essay I will be explaining how this television can become a threat to our relations.

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Some people think that paper money and coins will be replaced completely by credit cards and online method of payments in the near future. Do you agree or disagree with their statement?

People have been using money for buying something or trade for many years. Some individuals support that credit-cars and online shopping are useful than paper money and coins while others think that it is wrong. I strongly agree that first statement by the agency of more practical and spending less time.

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People think children should attend extra classes after school, while others disagree. Discuss both opinions ad give your own view.

In this competitive environment, each and every individual is on a race to be on the top. Not only employees, sportsmen or businessmen, even students are a part of it. Some parents and guardians are leaning towards an approach to keep their kids mentally and academically intelligent. For the same, students are showed to attend extra coaching apart from school hours. Nonetheless, there are few people who oppose to push children beyond their capacity to study.

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Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest to protect endangered species and biodiversity?

Despite knowing about bio-diversity's importance for a long time, human activity has been causing massive extinctions of different species. This essay will examine the main causes and loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to this problems.

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Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that they should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion. You should write your essay in no more than 250 words.

Some people believe that children should be competitive toward each other, while other counterparts argue that they should learn to work with others to grow up to be modell citizens. From my point of view, I think children should be both competitive and cooporative with others. As human beings, we cannot exist all by ourselves. That is why learning to give a helping to each other is of importance. Cooporating with friends helps children enhance their teamwork skills, as well as leadership. When working in a group, a child cannot do what he wants. He has to work out the task with others. Moreover, children not only enhance skills that they already have, but also learn new ones from their teammates. For example, one child has a head for figures and another is talented in physics. They can self teach each other so that both of them achieve desirable grades in tests. However, competitions among children can also be benefitial. Being competitive boost children’s personal ski...

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Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that they should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion. You should write your essay in no more than 250 words.

Some people believe that children should be competitive toward each other, while other counterparts argue that they should learn to work with others to grow up to be modell citizens. From my point of view, I think children should be both competitive and cooporative with others. As human beings, we cannot exist all by ourselves. That is why learning to give a helping to each other is of importance. Cooporating with friends helps children enhance their teamwork skills, as well as leadership. When working in a group, a child cannot do what he wants. He has to work out the task with others. Moreover, children not only enhance skills that they already have, but also learn new ones from their teammates. For example, one child has a head for figures and another is talented in physics. They can self teach each other so that both of them achieve desirable grades in tests. However, competitions among children can also be benefitial. Being competitive boost children’s personal ski...

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

While some people argue children should have physical education at home by their parents, some other people believe that school should consider some sport classes for students at school. However, I reckon schools are a proper place for children to attend physical practices.

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Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that they should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion. You

Education children is a controversial issue of all time. Many people believe that children should be taught to battle while others argue that they ought to learn to work together. From my point of view, the latter seems to be more meaningful. On the one hand, competition is very vital. Practically, opportunities are not given for unworthy people. Thus, it is totally reasonable for children to be taught that they have to try their more and more and become the best person. It also means that they learn how to vie with others to get opportunities. For instance, in China, there is a strong competition for university entrance examination. Candidates who have higher ranks not only can study in prestigious universities but also can be offered better chances of jobs after graduation. On the other hand, cooperation is essential to survive. No one can only rely on his own talents to achieve success. In fact, people need to work with and help together in every organization, such a...

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Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that they should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion.

Education children is a controversial issue of all time. Many people believe that children should be taught to battle while others argue that they ought to learn to work together. From my point of view, the latter seems to be more meaningful. On the one hand, competition is very vital. Practically, opportunities are not given for unworthy people. Thus, it is totally reasonable for children to be taught that they have to try their more and more and become the best person. It also means that they learn how to vie with others to get opportunities. For instance, in China, there is a strong competition for university entrance examination. Candidates who have higher ranks not only can study in prestigious universities but also can be offered better chances of jobs after graduation. On the other hand, cooperation is essential to survive. No one can only rely on his own talents to achieve success. In fact, people need to work with and help together in every organization, such a...

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of people think that the growing the number of sport is a great solution for health problem in society. Others say that different policy is needed in this domain. This essay will attempt to elaborate on the various measures for improving public health.

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The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More new reports tend to be sensational, shocking and unpleasant. However, I believe that we have the right to know about what happens to around our surroundings and the world. I strongly disagree with this statement for the following reasons.

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The air we breathe has a major impact on our health and the environment. However, the air pollution is constantly growing and at current levels it can be fought only globally. That is to say, individual efforts to improve air quality will not give any results, and it's solely responsibility of our governments to reduce air pollution. Do you agree or disagree?

Air pollution is a serious problem on a scale global. Some argue that individual efforts will not be effective at all, so government should take care of this matter to reduce air pollution. I totally agree with this opinion, and the reasons will be followed later.

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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

Not being able to focus on the class is one of the inherent characteristics of children in their learning journeys. In my point of view, this can attribute to two main reasons: mismatched learning method and development of game industry. This article will explain the reasons and give corresponding solutions.

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and protection of wild animal is waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This is currently a contentious argument over whether the savage animals are dispensable in actual life in addition to misuse of assets to protect them. I totally disagree with this opinion because a preserved fauna is important for human beings, thus all investment and safety in this topic generates benefits for individuals.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree

In the recent era, it is witnessed that the e-commerce industry is growing rapidly - taking over traditional shops and malls. Considering such growth of online shopping, many believe that, the days are not far when physical stores and shops will shut down. I have a contrasting thought, and argue that the shops and the shopping complexes will remain there forever.

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Question: Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).

Many people believe that free community service should be a mandatory part of programmes of high school, for instance working for charitable activities, teaching young children about sports or make growth of the neighbourhood. I would agree with this, because these are the most but least needs of human beings. There are associations and societies even privatised trusts are working to fulfill this social need. ...

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is an undeniable fact that animals are a vital pillar of our habitat and plays a promising role in balancing the ecosystem.a popular debate circulating around us is regarding the establishment of zoos.a folk believes zoos are cruel while others oppose this theory.the following essay will highlight both aspects.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In many nations, residents consider owning a house more necessary than renting one in many countries. I believe that the advantages of this tendency outweigh its drawbacks. The essay will analyze the motives behind these ideas.

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‘Is it ethically acceptable for this couple to choose to implant a ‘deaf’ embryo?’

In my ,opinion I agree with the law which states that an embryo that is created through IVF shouldn’t be implanted if they are identified as having any gene, chromosomal or mitochondrial abnormality. Linking it to the above case study, embryos recognised as having hearing abnormality shouldn’t be implanted.