IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 742

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child‘s development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Human development is a complex interplay of many factors. Some individuals are of The opinion that parents have the most significant role in a child‘s development Whereas others opine that friends and other environmental factors such as TV have A more important role. It is necessary to look at both arguments before forming an opinion. Parents have direct interactions with the children. They provide a sense of Identification to the child. These have their greatest effect on intellectual development and character traits. They also play a very important role in the Socializing process of the child. Right from the bed time stories to the behavioral Habits parents play a very important role in making a child a responsible citizen. They know their child‘s temperament better than anyone else. They can provide Critical input better than anyone else. That is why it is believed by some that parents Have the strongest role in a child‘s development. Friends, on the other...

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Have you recently bought a mobile phone? Write a review about the phone explaining why you bought it, how easy it is to use and if you would recommend it to others.

When I lost my old phone, I decided to get a new smart phone. The Iphone 11 pro was the one that caught my eye for a number of reasons.

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Many parents believe that children should read strict educational books and not any other entertainment books as it is were of time. Do you agree or disagree.

Education plays an important role in people's life. It is extremely important for every learners. Majority of parents think that children should read strick study books and not other entertainment texts as it is were of. I partially agree with given statement. I will discuss both views in below paragraphs.

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In today's world of advanced science and technology we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot. Discuss.

Today's world is of science and technology and in this fast pace world we still value our tradition and culture. Undoubtedly the place of artists such as musicians, painters and writers are vital in our society. The following paragraphs give a better insight into this topic.

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some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is quite debatable issue of these days that whether physical education should be the part of the course or nor. Many people are in favor of this while there are some who oppose this opinion. To me, it should be included in the course of study. This essay will reflect both of the opinions.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

Nowadays students prefer to take a gap year when they finish the high school. Students think if they take a gap year, they will start university with a fresh mind. Furthermore, students take a gap year to have a long vocation. However, some students prefer to continue their study to finish the study years faster. In my opinion, students must not take a gap year because if they will take a gap year they will feel that it is not necessary to complete the university education.

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We are becoming incresingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Computers today are performed in virtually every aspect of the most individuals’ lives. In business, computers are used extensively, such as, to maintain sales record, customer records, manage inventories, and maintain online stores, controls robots and other machines in factories. Computers pair neatly human efforts and machine to enhance productivity. In the war, it is used in accurate target and to reduce maximum casualties.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Today, the computer has become an indepensable tool in our day - to- day activities. I believe that the development of the computer will play a vital role in foreseeable future and also discuss on negative impacts on being too reliable to computer.

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It is often said “ when is Rome, do as Romans do”, do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they are visit? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

To acquire the culture without comprehending the language is not a sensible decision.

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How do you evaluate information on social media? How do you know the information is true ?

These day peoples are most likely to believe and trust the news in social media platforms especially Facebook. Most of them who believe everything they have read on the internet can easily get in trouble or feel anxious about it. And they will share those news without consideration. To know that the information about the News is true, real or fake, let's me clarify it by my 3 main points. First, analysis the source. Take a moment to check the source of the article by Look at the website where the story comes from. Does it look real? Are there a lot of information about it or just a one side story? Who the author? Check the information about the author? And click on the about us section in older to know the information about the writer. Second, check the date of the article. check the date of the article to make sure it’s current. And Check the date of the article in older to know when an article was earliest uploaded to a public. Because a lot of false or fake news is...

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More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating

There has been a tremendous increase in the number of people and big employment companies relying on the use of technology to convey and share information. They prefer online chatting, email communications and video calls over person to person interactions. There are many associated benefits as well as shortcomings over the excessive usage of the same, which will be my topic of discussion in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries, people decide to have a child at a later age. Why is this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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In many countries, people decide to have a child at a later age. Why is this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many couples are delaying in parenthood as the job market is saturated and resources are limited to a certain class in society, although it has many consequences which will be discussed in this essay and will be explained that advantages are higher than disadvantages. Firstly, couples do not want to have a child in early years of marriage for the reason that many want to focus on career and raising financial status, accordingly they can provide their offspring a healthy and lavish life, along with this many people want to enjoy social gathering and traveling which will be difficult after having a kid since it is hard to balance the life both ways, especially for women. Secondly, there are some good amount of drawbacks in delaying to have a baby, some people believe 30 to 40 years age is perfect for making money and career growth, but having a offspring after 30th can cause many health issues such as Down syndrome, serious genetic problems. Delay in parenthood ...

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Regarding to the expenses of nursery houses for elderly, there should be regulates rules in each country. In my point of view, the expenses should be divided between the family and the government with the most part on government.

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Modern cultures around the world have become similar as compared to the past. What are the main reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

During the past decades, the similarities between different nations’ contemporary traditions across the globe have considerably increased. Two primary reasons are lied at the heart of this issue and in my own perspective, this trend has both positive and negative consequences in equal measures.

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Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

NOWADAYS SPORTSMEN AND SPORTSWOMEN IS PLAYING AN ESSENTIAL ROLE IN THE MODERN SOCIETY AND IN THE WORLD.

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Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local businesses. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

A law for restricting the opening of foreign comapnies, offices should be passed in order to protect and support our roots. I support the cause, however the foreign businesses play an important role in notional income which we gain through taxes.

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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Although sime argue that sharing information about business or scientific research is too confedential, others might believe that it is nice to share them freely. And I would go honestly with the prospective of sharing is good.

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Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Wild animals are the essential part of our ecosystem. Due to human population increases, the forest area rapidly decreasing, which adversely affects the wildlife conservation. Most people stated that we should protect all the wild animals, while another argued that we should emphasize on saving some wild animals. There is a widespread worry and this will leads to a myriad of concerns which I will explain in this essay.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

The graph demonstrates Britain's number of passenger transportation, railway routes from 1950 to 2004/5.

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