IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 745

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Some people preach India is a hindu country. Give your views on the same

India has never been a Hindu country. It is and always will be a secular country. India has always stood out in the world for its diversity and secular beliefs. A person should never identified or judged on the basis of his religion. The greatest examples being : Late Abdul Kalam – he is the role model of millions of Indians not because of his religion but because of his deeds. At the same time, Abu Salem is a bad influence on everyone – not because he is Muslim but because he is an anti- social element. Now-a-days we see many people are spreading hate messages on religions stating India is a Hindu country – it should be called Hindustan etc. Not just this , such people even talk ill about other religions This was not the India I have known, read in my books. This is not the India my teachers, my family, my surroundings have taught me about. “There is no bad religion”. There are always bad people. ( from all communities. ) I am a proud Hindu – I respect my religion, my c...

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should Not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely Disagree with this view. For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay For private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount Of tax reductiontax reduction for these families, and staff would be required to manage this Complex process. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for public services That we may not use. For example, most people are fortunate enough not to Have to call the police or fire brigade at any time in their lives, but they would Not expect a tax reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax Discount for sending their children to private schools, we might have a situation Where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich. In my opinion, we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that Supports pu...

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In most countries disable people are not catered adequately, e.g. buildings are often inappropriately designed. Governments rely too heavily on charities and voluntary organizations to provide assistance and funding. What further measures could be taken to assist disable people? Discuss,

It is clearly that countries need the policies and people who running it to keep nation develop. So, it hard to keep eyes on people with disabilities because of they do not create so much profit or reputation for their country. To my way of thinking, look after disable people is apart from raising humanity in social life and this is the mission requires contribution of government and residential.

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People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

people work hard to make their life easier and to make it way better than the lives their parents had. in oder to make live easier they have to work harder , earn money and buy the materials they need . so nowadays its not that easy to get a better job . sometimes people have to leave their families to get a better job . as an example , people who live rural eareas , they have to move to urban areas . once they leave their families they do not get a chance to return home and see their families again . maybe they be busy with their jobs and do not spend enough time with families . that way this problem cause to ruin family lives and stop sharing love with each other .

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Your children’s grade 5 class teacher likes to take the children on field trips to museums or parks. Sometimes the teacher takes the children on public buses. Some parents are unhappy. They say the school should always use school buses even though it is more expensive. You have been asked to respond to an opinion survey. Option A: Public Transit: I think it’s okay for children to travel on public transit. Option B: School Buses: I would prefer children only travel on school buses.

I personally think that it is alright for children to travel on the public transit, since there are always teachers who accompany them for field trips. They will hence be monitored at all times. I think that an education system is not there only for the academic development of a child. An education system is meant to be a complete education package that helps in getting a child ready to step in the world after the school years are done. I believe that when taking the children out for a field trip by taking the public transit, the teachers also get a chance to teach them what to be careful about, for example, they will be taught not to accept gifts from strangers, or not to follow a stranger. These are important life lessons that a child should be taught.

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many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods

It is generally acknowledged that producing more products and matter should be the main objective of each nation. However, while I agree that the production of goods should be done by each country for its people and economic economy, but increasing the manufacturing manufactured products may not be the best goal.

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When cars and cyclist use the same roads,there are often problems. Why is this case? What are the solutions?

Many problems occur when cars and cyclist utilize the same roads and this problem depends on countries and road structures.Cars occupy a huge proportion of the traffic in both cities and villages.In my opinion,safe bicycle use related to urban planning and current punishment for countries.Today I will try to discuss and solve problem in this essay.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, others argue that it is better to try and improve such a question.

One of the most topical issues in modern society is the people's tendency to change unsatisfactory situations. Some people feel that rebuilding the current situation is impossible and persisting for changing an adverse condition makes irrecoverable problems whereas many commentators are of the view that people strongly intend to alter circumstances and make an improvement in all walks of life. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.

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Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the employers and public developers have been working hard to determine holiday allocation for their employees. Some argued that staff should have a rest for a month every year, although this leads to some positive impacts, but I completely disagree about this statement.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is ? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest the arts ?

Globalization is the term which is used for interacting and contacting between the countries and societies all over the globe for trade and societies building. It is very popular in the developing and under developing countries, because every person need to be succeeded either by hook or by crook so they have this establish platform.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that sportsman undeservedly receives high salary, which sometimes reach to millions of dollars, while other employees vitally important for society earn significantly less. In this essay I

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Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

A lot of seniors are put in care or nursing homes by their families because they don’t have enough time to take care of them. In this essay I will try to discuss this problem.

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Nowadays people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The graph demonstrates the amounts of usage in millions of cubic meters by unit from seven types of industries in some countries around the world.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The picture illustrates the process used to make bricks for use in the building industry

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due to increasing density of living areas in a city,most residents are suffering from physical and social dangers.consequently, they are against living in the city. to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Topic: More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem. A wide range of wild animals are to disappear or have the risk of extinction in the near future. Some inevitable factors play an important role on the elimination of animals. Some reasons why the risk of extinction grows are various, the most necessary one, however, is hunting animals by people for their valuable leather or parts of body. Demand for natural materials of high quality increases today and people find the solution on hunting wild animals and using them for business purposes regarding teeth of elephants, leather of tigers, etc. As a result thousands of animals are killed by human beings. Luckily, the ways of solving this problem have been discussed for years and discussions have ended with several resolutions which might reduce the hunting of animals. The best way to fix the problem wou...

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Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the internet and television. )To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Topic: More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem. A wide range of wild animals are to disappear or have the risk of extinction in the near future. Some inevitable factors play an important role on the elimination of animals. Some reasons why the risk of extinction grows are various, the most necessary one, however, is hunting animals by people for their valuable leather or parts of body. Demand for natural materials of high quality increases today and people find the solution on hunting wild animals and using them for business purposes regarding teeth of elephants, leather of tigers, etc. As a result thousands of animals are killed by human beings. Luckily, the ways of solving this problem have been discussed for years and discussions have ended with several resolutions which might reduce the hunting of animals. The best way to fix the problem wou...

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Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Topic: More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem. A wide range of wild animals are to disappear or have the risk of extinction in the near future. Some inevitable factors play an important role on the elimination of animals. Some reasons why the risk of extinction grows are various, the most necessary one, however, is hunting animals by people for their valuable leather or parts of body. Demand for natural materials of high quality increases today and people find the solution on hunting wild animals and using them for business purposes regarding teeth of elephants, leather of tigers, etc. As a result thousands of animals are killed by human beings. Luckily, the ways of solving this problem have been discussed for years and discussions have ended with several resolutions which might reduce the hunting of animals. The best way to fix the pro...

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Some people lhink thot lhe news medio nowodoys hove influenced people's lives in negolive ways. To whol exfenl do you ogrce or disogree?

I disagree with the given statement that media has a negative influence on our lives. I believe that the media is doing a great service to us and whatever negatlve effect it has is negligible if we compare it to the benefits of the media. There are many positive effects of media. To begin with, the usefulness of the media in almost instantly providing information about events around the world is undeniable. lt is because of the media that today we don't belong to a big planet Earth; we belong to a small global village. Furthermore, media also shapes our opinions. lt is a link between the government and the people. Our conceptions of our elected officials spring from television images and newspaper stories. Most of us will never meet prime ministers or presidents, but anyone who is regularly exposed to the media will know about them. When it is time to cast our vote, we will make our decision based on the media coverage of candidates. The media are also influential in the w...

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

Striving for a better life is the ambition of every human being, and is one of the main reasons of immigration of professionals to a better and prosperous place from its own native under-developed country. This, nonetheless has created many problems, such as economical imbalance in the world and enhanced professional incompetency in the poor countries. However, these problems can still be prevented from prevailing further by providing better lifestyle and amenities to these professional experts in their native state.

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What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

Nowadays, trend of online shopping has increased rapidly amoung youths. They prefer to purchase things online rather than going to the market. In my view, online purchasing is directly affecting the market of local products available nearby. We will discuss benefits and loss causing by shopping on internet.