IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Traditionally, the teacher gives lectures in a large number of students as their way of teaching. However, because of many advance technology that human invented, approach of teaching changed. The majority of society suggests that attending lectures are just a waste of time. I disagree with the statement and this essay will decipher various reasons for my standpoint.
It is being concerned by sections of society that the minimum standard of people's health are in a great risk in the future than the present. I disagree with the statement. This essay will decipher various reasons for my standpoint and provide examples to justify my ideas.
Nuclear energy is dangerous or beneficial for mankind is still the conflicting topic. Though some people believe that benefits can be drawn from wise use of nuclear energy, even after knowing the scale of destruction it caused in Japan. I think that benefits outweigh the disadvantages in using the nuclear energy.
Giving charities to local organizations is thought to be better by some whereas others prefer donating to international charities. Since local communities address the local problems directly and are comparatively more needy than global organizations, I think offering direct help to the neighbourhood community is a better idea.
In today's world, teenagers are influenced by peer pressure.Many families have no idea how their children spend their time while parents should be more involved with their children's bring up.I am convinced that this is issue have pros and cons,therefore,i will discussed both views.
These days we can not imagine our lives without computer.Computer has become a daily necessity in each and every field of the world.It has become important for everyone to keep a personal computer with them.Children are not away from its influence and it is now a part and parcel in their lives.Although computer has been proved to be very useful for children,its negative impact has also been seen due to its excessive usage.I agree that there are negative effects on children due to the daily use of computer and this essay will support my opinion in terms of time and health.
Sinterklaas. A Dutch tradition and celebration about a man with a long white beard treating children with presents and sweets, helped by he's workers ''Zwartepiet" (blackman). 10 years ago, Sinterklaas was the most beloving celebration by dutch people. These days, the party might never be the same as it used to be. A lot of (afro american) dutch citizens where always hurt when Sinterklaas came to holland. That's because they where associated with blackman the ''slave'' of sinterklaas. Nobody dared to speak, but when social media developed, it was the biggest discussion that I can personally remember. A lot of dutch people began to hate those people that began the discussion, because they ''occupied'' this dutch tradition.
The way which the world has been improving the technology people from all countries can purchase alike products through that citizens are starting to get same. I think it is a positive progress because it makes people´s lives easier.
Advancement in technology has changed the lifestyle of most the people's and their way of exploring stuff, whether it is banking, booking some trip or shopping, it can be done online by simply searching best options available on the internet. It has impacted the local markets a lot, but some people think shopping online is way better than visiting a shop.
Nowadays, there is an argument about importance of freedom of speech is essential or not for the societies who wants to live in a power.In my opinion, freedom of speech has a crucial role for societies ability because if people can not talk without any concerns there won't be any kind of solution or development in society so it is essential to talk about your drawbacks to create liveable life spots or equality.I will discuss the reasons why this is important for humans in this essay.
some groups of people like living in hot weather while otheres prefer cold weather and like the lifestyle in cold countries. absolutely both views are respectful but it seems to live in hot weather be more acceaptable.
The majority of people have dissatisfaction regarding their pattern of life and always feel greedy about what others possess which prevents the feeling of happiness, however, it could cause a pleasant life in the right course. In this essay, we will discuss various aspects that result from discontent sense. Being unsatisfied could lead to different ways in your life as it controls the human entirely in terms of decisions or lifestyle. Besides, it has a positive side because the more one feels unpleasure the more one determines to accomplish great achievements, When I had no car, for instance, I wanted to ride a bike, after a while I wanted to get rid of the Tiredness of pedaling and changed to a motorbike, then I saved money to buy a vehicle as it is considered the best means transportation in terms of convenience, enjoying privacy, and faster than the bike. Thus, If I had a billion-dollar I would have to buy a helicopter. Therefore, as long as I have a goal in my life I will...
During early era, clothing was included in basic need of every human being to cover and protect themselves from for harsh weather the Mother Nature had to offer. But times have changed. This simple need I'd a man become fashion nowadays. It's influence on people from all gender and all ages, especially on young generation. I totally agree with this statement that young people spent cost on trending clothes regardlessly . I will put my points to prove my statement.
Some people believe that everyone should have the freedom of choice to choose and                             enjoy the subject (s) they elect to study , result being , higher success rate and                                 achievement, with less stress.
Time is altering and so are the ways of serving society. Although it is argued by some that youngsters should be engaged in manual jobs such as constructional works to benefit the community owing to their physical strength, it is opined by this essay that should young people take up acquisition of knowledge in university, society will be profited more due to increasing the number of specialists. Throughout the following paragraphs, these points will be meticulously scrutinized to advocate the latter convincing standpoint.
At the outset of the new millennium, gazettes make public data about the personal lives of the folk. On this basis, an intelligent question to raise is why should government either limit or monitor personal information which are published by newspapers? If we flip the coin of contrasting ideas, which side will substantiate itself first?
With the increasing level of competition, it is getting really difficult to get admission into universities. I agree that Irrespective of the socio-economic status, young lads are facing great difficulty due to cut-throat competition. This essay shall discuss the same in detail.
These days nearly each family in the world possesses a car. While this vehicle makes their trips much more comfortable and significantly alleviates the problem of long distance, there are multiple drawbacks from its utilization. I suppose the major negative influences on this issue are massive amount of gases and increasing traffic jams around the cities all over the globe. These two could be tackled by introduction of alternative types of car and encouragement of usage of public transportation, relatively. A thorough analysis is to be provided.
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