IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 747

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been before. What do you think are the main causes of this difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap?

One of the most controversial issues today relates to the widening gulf between prosperous and impoverished nations. The following paragraphs intend to delve into the primary causes and offer effective solutions to solve this problem.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are mixed views on whether players reap more benefits from team sports

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More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the contemporary world, People have an opportunity to access the internet and keen to congregate data. The newspaper publishes information along with photographs because it will be understood rapidly. Nevertheless, the photograph should be explained with detailed information otherwise, it will not be communicated completedly.

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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

Almost everybody has a mobile phone. But it’s a great invention? I think there are both advantage and disadvantage.

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Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, due to the burgeoning population, crime rate have spiked over the time. It becomes a threatening issue for the whole world today. As per the rules of The great britain and Austrailia, the Lawyers cannot access the criminals previous record, which covers the person from being punished. Certain solicitors have conjecture that they should be provided with all the evidences of yesteryear. However, I completely agree with the given statement, due to various reasons. My agreement would be justified in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern world, using energy from the sun as a source of power that is used in daily life is common in many countries across the nation. It is believed by many people that solar cell has economic and environmental benefits. I am going to discuss these views and what are the advantages and disadvantages about it according to my perspective.

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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

Recently many people accept to do extreme activities, the ones have many risks for their life and they might lose their life in their way. There are many activities like this such as mountain climbing, hang-gliding, zip-lining, and skiing in high mountains. Sometimes these people go to places no one ever gone there.

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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

It is being discussed for several years that wealthier countries have responsibility to help poorer countries, in particular related with food availability and education. Some people believe that these are the government of poorer nations obligation to secure their citizens food and education. In my point of view, the problems of the country are government task but helping poorer countries to survive is a duty for all nations.

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In your opinion, what makes a ‘Great Content’? What factors are necessary to consider for an article to be the no.1 in Google?

Well, if you ask me “What a Great Content is?” Then it would be high-quality information, which gets read, shared, and discussed over. Creating great content is a choice that requires time and endeavor. So, it all depends on you either you want to spend time and work hard. Or, simply just copy the content from other websites. In an SEO Field, Content is a king, which determines your high ranking in SERPs. Instead of copying content ideas rather takes some time to think about how to implement content ideas that answer the reader queries as well as helps them to execute in real life. As more popular the content gets, Google tries to show it to the majority of the audience by ranking it in top position. Here are the top criteria that help content to rank higher in Google Creating Original Content Rewriting content from another website isn’t called original. Original content means content that is brand new, unique, and doesn’t have duplication on other platforms. Both human a...

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Somw people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays schools and colleges have mixed gender, But a few years ago, there were many schools had separate gender partition. Like boys had their own school as well as the girls had their particular school. But today it has been changed. We discuss about two separate views of separation and mixed up education system.

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Some people think that it would be better if whole family(Ex.Uncle,aunt and grand parents) involving in bringing up children rather than only parents. Give your opinion ?

From most people point of view its a good idea to raise the child in joint family instead of only by parents or in nuclear family.I also believe that child should be grew up in joint family.

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Does Internet need to be controlled by the government?

With the evolution of internet this world has become the global village where everyone has accessibility to connect things via online. This make our lives so easy and quick but also a cause of growth in cyber-crimes as well. In my opinion, with this vast accessibility of internet everywhere, the government authorities must impose monitoring controls on internet usage in order to eradicate cyber-crimes.

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Some people think that governments should spend money on railways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Fast and reliable transport system is one of the crucial aspect of today’s modern life. Either its developing or developed country, transport infrastructure is one of the sectors which needs constant improvement. Therefore, when it comes to the budget, some people urge to invest more in roads rather than railway. I believe these both areas need attention however railway condition is much required to expand funds on it.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Purchasing things online like air tickets and groceries is becomming increasingly common. It has many benefits but there are some disadvantages. I will consider both sides of the argument and give my opinion.

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF VIETNAM

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Some people think that money spent on space exploration is a waste and could be better used to fund other urgent problems in society.

Many people believe that there is no point in spending a huge amount of money on space exploration and it could be better used for devoting money to fund other urgent problems in society. From my personal personal perspective, i wholly agree that people should use money to spare for some importunate issues afterward.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The bar chart demonstrates how often the people eat fast food at hotels in the USA form 2003 to 2013. The data is given in fraction.

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Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Capital punishments are final punishments or sentences given to criminals. They include death sentence either by hanging, firing squad, hanging, life sentences with no parole. I am of the opinion that capital punishments should be reserved for grievous or very serious crimes such as first degree murder, manslaughter, rape. However, in a law court it is usually up to the judge and the jury to determine how grievous a crime is and the punishment that is deserving. The intent of the criminal and facts of the case may be misconstrued and an innocent person may be wrongfully sent to jail suffering a capital punishment for crime not committed. It is in cases like this that others are of the opinion that capital punishments be ruled out. This is to avoid mistakes which can be irrevocable following possible loss of lives. Some persons advocate that sentences should strictly be given at the discretion of the judge. They believe that there are circumstances that predisposed an individual...

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Some people think that you can only learn about the cultures of different places by traveling to them. Other people think that you can learn just as much about these places from reading books and watching travel documentaries about them. discuss both these views and give your opinions. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Generally speaking, cultures can be discovered in two ways. Either by visiting their relative countries

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Each year , the crime rate is increases . What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity ?

The increasing number of crimers are choosing more crime to make a living and their rate is going up year by year . This issue is happening because of workless people . Causes and two feasible ways out to deal with will discussed further in the essay . The initial trigger here is that this types of offences organize by some people who do not have constant work places . Since ,they have to worry about themselwes and their family mambers . To solve this problem easily they decide to criminali...

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