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Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

Teenage is the most vulnerable age for both positive and negative thoughts to incur. Recent criminal records from different countries show the rise in the crime rate among teenagers. Teenagers with less guidance are easily dragged into these crimes. One of the reasons for the increase in the crime rate among teenagers is less interaction with their parents. Mostly, in a nuclear family, where both the parents are working, children hardly get time to discuss their problems with them. This results in an increase in boredom and taking advice from such people who are already indulged in criminal activities. Another reason could be excessive exposure to social media and getting attracted to the T.V. program showing vicious criminal activities. Now a days, teenagers are picking negative characters shown in movies as their role model. They try to copy their role models and eventually get trapped into one of such crimes. Society and friends are equally responsible for a drastic incre...
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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think that they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

The usage of plastic bags has increased tremendously since the last decade and their accumulation is the major cause of land and sea pollution. I agree to the point, that banning of plastics will be one of the feasible solutions of saving our planet earth from deterioration.
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Some people believe that the the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs . Other believe that there are much wider benefits of university education for both individual and society . Discuss both views and give your opinion .

There is no gainsaying fact that education plays virtual role in everyone life . However , they can get better jobs with the help of university education , while rest of the people says that there are several benefits to people and society of university education . My opinion related to given statement would be hashed out in the upcoming paragraphs.
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The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest

Physical activities in the form of sports and exercise are essential for the well being of everyone. Some people claim that the schools should increase physical training to keep young students fit. However, I am of the opinion that along with the physical training like sport and exercise the school should also provide healthy food to curb the overweight issues in children.
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Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wild life round the world

Wildlife population is diminishing rapidly over the years, there are multiple reasons for this problem. In this essay we are going to explore the options to protect wildlife around the world.
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Some people think that girls should take husband’s name after marriage while others feel that they should not follow this age old tradition. What is your opinion?

A few hundred years ago, things were straightforward, when a man and a woman got married, the wife changed her surname to that of her husband's name. But nowadays they are matters of concern. I completely disagree with changing woman's surname, as I see that as a transfer of subservience from father to husband, and losing of women's identities to that of men's.
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Both the rich and the poor find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, irrespective of financial disparity in the society, many students are ambitious for persuing university education. It is quiet often argued by many people that there is no discrimination on the basis of financial status of a person when it comes to accessibility to various graduation courses offered at different Universities. This essay will argue and present some facts showing that in reality, there is more probability for a wealthy student to get easily enrolled for higher studies compared to a poor child. Firstly, availability of resouses to a child from a poor family is less. As there is a tough competition to get through entrance exam successfully, one need to have proper training and education on how to prepare and study for these examinations. This can be achieved by attending coaching claases and going through literature that focuses on exam specific topics. Since students from not soo well to do families find it difficult to get an advantage of these fa...
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Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does Tourism bring more advantages and disadvantages to a country ?

I fully consent that tourism for any country is advantageous. Tourism can be described in a way that influx of people to other countries for viewing the beauty and speciality of destination countries. Enthralled with the iconic view, gratified thoroughly in engrossing themselves in such beautiful location, it provides an opportunity to tourist to grasp the culture and imbibed the positivity pervaded in the nature. Countries are investing heavily to develop tourist hotspot and building infra...
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Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are advantages and disadvantages of a family run business.

I would pinpoint both aspects of family own business. It is being said that India is a cultural country enriched with heritage, customs and rituals build up close knit relationship in families it ncrease cohesiveness in family and gathering together in occasions with full valour add enthusiasm.Trust is essential aspects of anything.
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The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree

I partially agree parenting paves the path for better understanding social life. It induce positiveness in child’s life, teachs basic fundamentals of life such as how to lead the life peacefully and with full of tranquillity. Helps in changing the attitude of child towards society where they mingle and share their excitement and dissidence. Commanding these skills solely depends upon on parents guidance as they spend almost all time with child and their behaviour, attitude and body language...
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Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

A major global market worth billions of dollars, food import and export has an extreme impact on both local producers and the environment. With the growing demand for cheaper yet more exotic foods, the damage this generates will only continue to worsen. I feel that it is our ethical duty to attempt to minimise our contribution to said damage. One need only glance at any supermarket aisle and a cornucopia of exotic goods lay before us to make any culinary delight which may take our fancy. This veritable endless supply of global products is made possible thanks to innovations in the processing industry which has allowed for mass production, shelf-life extension, and - perhaps most significantly – cheaper prices for consumers. It is a tragic fact that the lion’s share of shoppers give little regard to where their food has come from, or what harm it is causing. To answer this ever-growing call for cut-price produce, companies are turning to factory farming and the exploitatio...
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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Recent trends show that our environment is degrading every now and then. Although, some people believe that it should be rectified within the nation, I support the notion that it should be resolved globally, as new techniques and steps can be incorporated for proper resolvement
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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is argued by some people that abortion should be legalised, while others oppose to this view. In my opinion, abortion should be maintained under law. This essay will provide an insight to both the views. On the one hand, legalisation of abortion controls the infant mortality.This means that the governement will investigate on their parents about the situation that enrouted for the child's birth, thereby making a strict measure to control the rate of infant mortality. For instance in India, a new wing has been developed by officials to monitor the death rate of infants. Secondly, the bribery among the doctors can be controlled if abortion is made under law. There is a usual scenario among the doctors regarding the abortion criteria. They may ask for more money from the accused, which can be controlled by laws.Thus control of infant death and bribe among doctors can be achieved by legalising abortion. On the other hand, the privacy of people are disturbed by making a...
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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world. With the serious results for the environment , what do you think can be done to solve the problem?

Mankind has always been dependent on forest reserves for various necessities of life.However , due to increasing population and huge industry demand , percentage of forests has decreased significantly on earth.This has invited a range of problems starting from soil erosion to disruption in water cycle, loss of of animal habitat and aquatic life, rainfall and ultimately global warming.To reduce the adverse effects of deforestation , it is necessary to take steps immediately.
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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Majority of masses so asserts that the use of computer in education industry has improved step by step .along with this , it also has it's reliable results, whereas others section of echelons believe that it has its negative impact. However, in my prospective, this statement needs further scrutinising before forming any view.
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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that free social activities should be a mandatory part of high school programs. While students who take part in these activities may face some unexpected issues, I agree that educators should design required community services for their high school students without any payments. On the one hand, the most considerable trouble affects students when participating in public activities is the shortage of time. Particularly, they may be less focused on their core lessons in class, even lack leisure time because of spending too much time for community services. Besides, there are obligatory services which do not suit to everyone. For example, working for a charity at mountainous places or suburban areas requires students to have to go far away or teaching sports to younger children at outdoor stadium demands a good health. All of these types of work do not fit to the weak girls or unhealthy students. On the other hand, attending unpaid public services will bri...
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You live in a small town of 10,000 people. A large green area in the centre of town is undeveloped. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have built in that area.

used by the city to build a recreational park. This would create a sense of community which in turn provide a place for the children can go to after school or on the weekend, reduce pollution and increase attraction.
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Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well.do you agree?

Nowadays a considerable number of people practise little if any sport next to their job. As a consequence, they suffer from more health problems or diseases.
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Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor to development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Education plays a vital role in the development of a country. Therefore, some people think that the education system is the only important factor to the development of a country and they may be right.
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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In contemporary era, Discipline plays very cucial role in everyone's life.But some says that it should be the responsibility of teachers,while other says that it is the duty of the parents .Now I will discuss both sides in upcoming paragraph.
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