IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 912

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Over the last decades globalization has increased. People are opting for difficult travelling rather relaxing. There are both pros and cons of edge travelling, we will discuss both in details.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Over the last decades globalization has increased. People are opting for adventure travelling rather relaxing. There are both pros and cons of adventure travelling, we will discuss both in details.

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People argue that raising children in today’s society is more difficult than in the past. Others believe that it is much easier due to all the innovations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that raising children in the current society is a tough task as compared to the past. While there are people who consider it very easy due to all the scientific and creative innovations that we see today. I agree that these innovative ways will help in raising children and making them great citizens of the nation.

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People argue that raising children in today’s society is more difficult than in the past. Others believe that it is much easier due to all the innovations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that raising children in a current society is a tough task compared to the past. While there are people who consider it very easy due to all the scientific and creative innovations that we see today. I agree that these innovative ways will help in raising children and make them great citizens of the nation.

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Some people say that the Internet is bringing people together by making the world smaller. Do you agree that the Internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

It is commonly said that people nowadays are brought closer to each other due to the use of the Internet. I strongly agree to this viewpoint and this essay is going to discuss on the reason behind this.

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Nowadays, most people learn academic study at university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern world today,many students

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It is said that the fast pace of our everyday life, as a direct result of the rapid development of telecommunications technology and travel industry, has negative effects on individuals, nations and the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Not surprisingly, many aspects of people's daily life have undergone considerable changes because of the recent development in technology. It is particular concern that the pace of everyday life is becoming faster, resulting from the development in cars, air travel, telecommunications technology and the internet. As well as benefits, this trend is to bring problems.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The world is changing rapidly with this effect seen in different aspects. Even in the health sector. Recent studies have shown that the average life span will be reduced in the nearest future. This is evident judging from the technological advancement and ingestion of harmful foods.

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Some people think that they should spend money they earn now enjoying life, while others think that the money should be put into savings for future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Money has been regarded as the yardstick for satisfying materialistic needs. Similarly, basic needs of every individual could be satisfied only if lucrative are saved for future.Some critics believe that money must be utilized for entertaining and living the present life in a better way.This essay agrees to vertically opposite view.However,it will enlighten both aspects in detail.

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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

In the present world,there are lot of diseases which can be cured with the help of vaccination.In some places Goverment are planning to enact law against guarding that childrens should be immunized or they should be given choice on vaccinating their kids.In this essay both the statements with be ellaborated with appropriate examples.

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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.

Women,Nowadays,have started to manae both their work and personal life in an elegant manner, Thanks to new household appliances. A women working is always a advantageous to the family.This essay will discuss on the benefits and drawbacks of a family with a working women.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to some gender based teaching institutions provides better education while others contradict and vehemently supports the argument that co-education is the secret to achieve highest learning standards.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as professionals, doctors and teachers are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with the situation?

No doubt their is increase in education and technology the people now a days are adopting the profession courses like doctors and teachers but they are not serving in their own country rather immigrating to other countries.This is a major problem to considered for the countries progress and development.In my opinion as the income of teachers and doctors are not much paid they are rather moving to others nations for their own future.

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Some people aim to achieve balance between their work and other part of lives, but few achieve it. What is the reason behind this? What are the solutions to tackle this problem?

Few masses try to achieve a balance between their work and their personal lives.But not all of them are unable to achieve a balance between work and life.In my opinion the work load of people make them unable to get a balance between their job and their life.

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Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work and should be made to retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When people are 60 years old, they should not continue working. Instead, they should take retirement. I will partly agree with this view.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can you deal with those causes?

The escalated trend of crime is observed in various countries. This essay will examine the critical reasons of this trend, followed by possible solution.

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Some say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group acitivities in their free time. Others say that this is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Part of the people say that organised group activities must be encouraged among kids during their leisure time.On the other hand, some say that the childrens should learn self-play as well. We will discuss both opinions in detail in this essay.

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In many places, new homes are needed , but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people beleive it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In most of the locations, building new home is necessary due to rise in population which migrated from different parts of the country. However, the only area available to construct and accomodate people is in the countryside. Part of the people say that, we need to safeguard countryside by not adding additional buildings. In my opinion, I agree that we need to limit the number of homes added to the countryside.

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Question. Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?

It is often argue that community service be ensured for culprits in jail instead of keeping them under prison for long, according to some.I completely agree the view since this service would help them to realise the mistake they have committed preciously.

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All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects?

The issue of obesity and related health conditions have been increasing in a alarming rate since last few decades. Excessive consumption of fast foods and lack of exercise are two main culprit of this; however,this can be effectively tackled by adopting healthy lifestyle in their day to day life.

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