IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 904

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many countries, many students tend to have behavior problems at school or at home. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It has now been characterized as a worldwide phenomenon that many students are likely to behave abnormally both at home or on campus.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Religious The first community that has played an essential role in my personal experience is the Church. Having the same purpose and beliefs creates a strong connection among participants. Additionally, spreading the message of the Bible about being loved as equals, as brother and sisters, enhances kindness among members. Despite the fear of judgments and the necessity of fitting into a pattern, religious groups are what reminds me most home. Students from the same program The second community that should be mentioned is of those who attend the same classes. The fundamental motive is the daily living at college. Other students in the same program fight the same battles than me; therefore, they can fully understand my frustrations and victories without further explanations. The most present emotion felt with classmates is relief of knowing that there is another person going through the same experiences. Additionally, the group regularly gives the support to achieve better grades. ...

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Over the past few decades there has been ambivalence over wheather that tourism is a great source of income for any nation. Due to having a large amount of foreign currency in a nation can be developed by leaps and bounds. This trend has advantages and disadvantages in equal measures which I will highlight in the upcoming crumbs of writing.

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

Quality of water and fresh air is a grave concern for any developing country. The industrial and construction businesses are major stakeholders and a part of the problem. Water is a main raw material for various industrial and construction processes. Therefore, its adequate disposal is detrimental to the quality of water we get. Similarly, these processes emit harmful gases into the atmosphere that directly affects the quality of air we breathe. Strong measures need to be taken to overcome these concerns.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

Everyone needs a support in every age group, however, in old age, people need more emotional support rather than the physical support. In Britain, old people are sent to the senior residence where they have 24/7 nurses to take care of them. The government is responsible for all the charges. According to me, the family should be liable to pay for all the care provided to the old people.

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In many countries, some people live with their families while studying,but other students prefer to attend universities in other cities.Do the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantage?

it is a fact that a lot of young people prefer to attend universities in other cities leaving their parents' home when they complete their graduation from high schools.Since they continue their higher education, they want to live independently.This step has its own pros and cons,but i believe that it has more advantages than the disadvantages.

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A library is a place where one can gain ample knowledge and resources. With the advancement in technology some people believe that computers should replace libraries, while some oppose these views. I tend to disagree with the following statement and i will discuss the pros and cons bellow.

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: Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

Humans beings have always been fond of extremities. This has accurately been reflected on the increasing interest and rate of people flocking the Sahara or the Antarctic.

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Is is sometimes said people should be encouraged to get married before the age of 30 as it is best for society.do u agree or disagree

Marriage is the beginning of a family and a life-long commitment. Some individuals believe that marriage shouldn't have time constraints while others, think its better to get married before they reach their thirties. I feel as every major life decision has a stipulated time, couples should tie the knot before the age surpasses.

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Many businesses in the world today are run by family members. Do the advantages of family-run businesses outweigh the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experiences or knowledge

Now a days many business people all over the world continue their business with their family members. Some people continue their family business next to their parents. Most of the people think that the particular business is the pride of their family. They also think that it is the identity of their family. But I've a different opion over this topic.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Do children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded?

Children are the future for our society and for the nation as well, some people strongly believe that children should be physically punished for their behaviour while other says that rewarding them make them better person. According to me this is a debatable topic and should be scrutinized before making any opinion.

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How committe can be set up? Provide your opinion and suggestions

Guru Kashi University Talwandi Sabo has decided to establish the 'Bhai Mardana ji' Chair on the occasion of Sri Guru Nanak Dev Ji's 550th birth Anniversery.

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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree

In these modern times, with access of television to everyone, children are exposed to an increasing magnitude of violence which is morphing their innocent natures into something feral.

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More And More People Want To Buy Famous Brands Of Clothes, Cars And Other Items. What Are The Reasons? Do You Think It Is A Positive Or Negative Development?

Nowadays, the world has witnessed the dramatically increase in purchasing luxurious brands, ranging from clothes, cars to other items. There are several reasons that can be taken into account, and I believe that the drawbacks of this trend is outweigh the advantages.

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hese days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

The type of content being watched on televeision or computer by a person has a longlasting influence on their psyche. The effect will be even more profound if the viewers are in initail years of their growth and development. Many behavioural studies have reported that movies, vedio games, cartoons and serials copuld have a significant impact on the personality of a child. Although positive message is being deliverd by many many media houses, the amount of voilence the amount of voilence that has been shown on televison is rising day by day. Displaying voilence on small screen has negative effects on fragile brains of children. it is being reported in many psychological studies that children who are habitual of watching cartoons and movies related to the action and thril genre were more likely to develop agressive personalities in their adulthoods;because, it act as a stimulus for their conciousness which make them to consider spilling blood of others as a way of making them to...

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Write about professional entertainers (musicians, actors, performers, dancers, and other stars) and athletes and their income. Do you think those people are paid too much? Get your arguments.

Nowadays, there are many professional entertainers such as actors, musicians,... who become celebrities and have a large amount of salary which they are paid. Some people disagree that those entertainers just need a few efforts and get more than everyone would wish for. However, in my opinion, all the entertainers probably have to pass a lot of difficulty in their childhood witht their talent, motivation,hard work to success and become famous in these day. Therefore, I agree that professional entertainers should get a high income which worth their perseverance.

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There is a disagreement on the impact of increased business and cultural contact between countries on a country's identity. What is your opinion?

One of the most conspicious trends in the 21st century is a closer connections between countries, in both economic and cultural aspects. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to the gradual demise of countries' indentities. This issue should be viewed and analysed from multiple perspectives.

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As housing is a basic need for people, government should provide free housing for everyone who cant't afford it, To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In this century the lifestyle of the people is totally different than past. But the basic amenities of the people are same. Shelter is one of the major component of peoples' need hierarchy.some people argue that government should offer free houses for poor people. This problem is particularly worse in developing and developing countries. However i don't think this is the best solution to solve this problem.

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in some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are sever or eight

People in some part of the world believes that,only by age of 4 years ,children should start their former education ;while some stick to the norm that 6 or 7 is the apt age to start their schooling. I totally agree to the second thought of school that education should start only at the age of 6 or 7. Firstly, in some countries children are not send to school until the age of 6 or 7 because that is age where they should get right assistance and care from their family to become a better human being .For instance ,in India schooling starts at the age of 6 or 7 therefore they get enough time to spend with their family especially parents and grandparents . This quality time can indirectly bring a great impact on their character and behavior as they get right support which is crucial for a better upbringing. secondly ,childhood is the most amazing and memorable part in ones life where they can enjoy and later cherish on . In fact, this is the only time where they do not...

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