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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this be solved

Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this be solved Well, I would like to discuss the major impacts caused because of overpopulation in murban centres. According to my knowledge over population in urban cities is because of many reasons, I would like to take few examples and disucss on this topic. Firstly, The people from different villages and near-by small towns migrate to urban centres, For seeking job and to full fill financial aspects. Since there is rapid changes occured with the climate or enviornment of the villages, Which in turn created problem with agriculture and other farming related activities. Because of the above said problem people loose their financial status and struggle to make living in small cities, which leads them to migrate to urban centeres, Which will witness increase in population. To overcome the above said problem, Government or public sector officies should influ...

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In many places,new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the country side.Some people believed it is more important to protect the country side and not build new homes What is your opinion about this.

Although, new residence are wanted in several places and the only unoccupied zone to erect them are the rural part of the country.

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a known fact, that crime rate has been increasing exponentially in many cities.

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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility to university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

Admission to a higher institution has been said to be challenging for both the wealthy and penniless students. I completely agree with this statement because being accepted is based on merits and also, there are limitations to the number of people allowed into the school.

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some people think that space exploration is waste of resources while others thinks that it is essential for mankind to explore the universe in which we live discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Universe is a vast thing to explore and till now all the data humans have is equivalent to a drop of water in an ocean.some people have a mindset that space exploration is wastage of resources while others take it as future investment .This essay supports the statement that exploring space is as important as other aspects of life .

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In many places,new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people believe it is more important to protect the country side and not build new homes.

The new residence is wanted in several area and the only accessible portion to erect these structure is the rural part of the country.A set of individual argued it is Paramount to protect this landscape and not for accommodation purposes which I strongly disagree with.

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In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

Over the time, in many countries, participation of women in sharing the finances has been observed. Both the partners work full-time jobs to manage the budget and in turn scarce time is left for household chores.

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MOST artists earn low salaries and should recieve funding from government in order to continue their work to what extent do u agree?

It is a common trend around the world that most art jobs pay very less while the jobs with accountings or medicine are the highest paying. This in-turn makes it harder for the artists to maintain their life with such low incomes and they have to stop their work and take alternative jobs. People argue that government should fund people like these so that arts and crafts are not affected. In my opinion, if the country is stable enough a significant amount of finance can be allocated to fund g...

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience..

The standard of a health in a community is estimated by the prevalence of diseases and the statistics of mortality due to these diseases. Among theses Obesity is the leading factor that measures ill health. Evidently, over the years, the average health index has been declining and obesity is increasing among the people as proven by several scientific and community researches conducted in first world countries. In my opinion, over the next decades, if things continue to progress at the same ...

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Computer is one of the greatest invention of all time and is used majorly in most of the sectors. Using computer and technology has lot of advantage but it also has come ill-effects. Let's go ahead and deeper dive into it

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As a country develops, people tend to buy more cars. Do the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

It is undeniable that as a country advances, the tendency of fulfilling tertiary needs such as vehicles is becoming a trend in the society. Presumably owning cars benefits individuals in some ways, however, I believe that the detrimental effect to environment caused by the outnumbered cars is far greater due to the pollution and traffic congestion.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Being self-employed is becoming increasingly popular these days. İnstead of working for a company or an organization, more and more people chooe to become the employer of their own business. This essay will discuss the main reason why it might be like this and the drawbacks of running your own business.

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Some people believe that technology has made people’s lives easier while others think the opposite. Which do you believe and why?

Technology is key to the growth of today’s modern world. In this modern world technology is used in various ways such as Gadgets like smart phones, computers and innovations like automatic vacuum cleaner. While it is true that technology is making individuals lifestyle busier, however I believe technology Is very important in day to day life of an individual as technology is making peoples life easier by giving out more efficiency towards work and also allowing one to do better communication. It is true that people are surrounded by machines which are making their life busier such as by making them constantly use social media for responding to messages online or replying to emails and making them learn about new gadgets such as the automatic dishwasher. Nevertheless, the technology is made to help people out with their daily tasks and make their busy life bit easier and helping them out with multiple tasks at the same time hence being more efficient. Few years back people...

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Some people believe that technology has made people’s lives easier while others think the opposite. Which do you believe and why?

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Some people feel that teacher training course can make anyone a teacher, while other feels an excellent teacher cannot be produced by pursuing a course. Discuss both views and give opinion.

Teacher are the one who shape the future of children, who are the one who take the nation ahead. Some people feel that teacher training course can make anyone a teacher, while other feels an excellent teacher cannot be produced by pursuing a course.

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Many schools these days have problems with poor student behavior. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done tackle these problems?

Poor attitudes have recently become the number one dilemma for a plethora of schools worldwide. This bad behaviour might due to several factors which may related directly or indirectly to the school. This essay aims to explore the reasons for such attitudes among pupils and it will offer some methods to overcome these new phenomena.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Growing working class has resulted in a huge requirement of new homes to be constructed in vicinity of the job, but since most of these areas are mega metropolitan areas there is hardly any room to accomodate new homes,so there is no other option but to expand into the country side. Although many believe that the country side should not be polluted by the expanding population, there is no other way to provide new area where facilities and homes can be built upon.

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Both the poor and the rich find the accesibility into university difficult? Do you agree or disagree.

A section of society asserts that the poor class and the elite class facing similar difficulties in getting admission in university. I entirely agree with this view and I will discuss about it in the subsequent paragraphs

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The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

In the era of information progress people are used to address to the internet for finding some

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Charities and organizations always give special names to particular days such as 'National Children's Day' and 'National Non-smoking Day'. What are the causes of these particular days? How effective are they?

Recently, increasing particular days, such as ‘National women’s Day’ and ‘National Public Transport Day’, named by some non-profit organization, have become the focus of public concern. This essay will place some analyses on factors which induce this condition before presenting the influences of this situation.

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