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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.

It is not beyond the belief that aging population is increasing in many countries in the

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It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.

Nowadays, it is a subject of hot debates that the number of old people in comparison with young age groups is increasing. In this essay, I will consider both sides of this phenomenon and reveal why societies will need young people more than the elderly.

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Space exploration costs taxpayers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantage of spending money on space exploration?

Each year Taxpayers spend a lot of money to supply the space exploration indirectly. In my opinion a crucial advantage is the advantages which come from accomplishment of new technologies, and other industries following them, but as a disadvantage perspective, the exerted incomes of that cannot be an observable thing for taxpayers.

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Parenting is an art, and good parenting leads to good upbringing of a child. Who makes a better parent according to you , a mother or a father?

In this concurrent world it is undoubtedly true that "health is wealth" some people concur that dieting is must be live to a healty body. However,I would quibble that and propound that regular doing dieting is create a problem to with our health.

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Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages?

Food production and preservation is a major issue today as a result of the use of chemicals. In my opinion, major drawback such as the effect on the health of consumers outweights some of the benefit it brings.

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Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages?

There is an increased use of chemicals, to produce and preserve food. In my opinion, I think the disadvantages far outweighs the benefits of reduced cost of production, and longevity of foods.

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Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so how?

language is a way to communicate your ideas, thoughts and opinions with other people. In fact, in today's world english is important to learn at school only, as the children get prepared since their childhood only.

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Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

My name is Arthicha Srisuchinnawong. I have just completed my bachelor's degree in robotics and automation engineering from Institute of FIeld roBOtics (FIBO), King Mongkut's University of Technology Thonburi (KMUTT), Bangkok, Thailand. I am very interested in studying robotics and intelligent system program at UiO (start in August, 2020) and jointing ROBIN or RITMO research group. I am writing here to inquire about my opportunity to participate in this program and one of these research tea...

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. how true do you think this statement is? what measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars

Currently, when the overpopulation becomes more and more awful while the living level is updated day by day which results to a big global problem named " traffic jam". Someone said that due to the rapid increase of cars, many city in the world are now "big traffic jam". In my opinion, this statement is true according to my personal observation.

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when a country develops it's technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. it is pointless to try and keep them alive. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays, the technological advancements are growing tremendously as compared with the past.Some people believe that, when a country tries to develop its technology that will adversely affect the traditional skills and ways of life. Needless to say that, traditional skills and activities are very important to maintain a country's goodwill. This essay will discuss about the growing technologies and the factors that affect our traditional skills and values.

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Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduatesbhave led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history and only offer practical degree coursesbthat maximises chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different perceptions towards the subjects taught in higher studies. Some propose that tertiary education should focus to get good job opportunities and not include art subjects while others oppose it. Personally, I strongly disagree with the former opinion. There are myriad of reasons why university teaching should not be limited to practical degree courses. Actually, tertiary education is allowing a person to do in-depth study about a par...

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the majority of children from the first world countries face the problems of obesity. It is necessary to know the root causes of this trend in order to tackle its impacts effectively. There are myriad of factors making the children from the developed countries becoming overweight at a serious pace. The obvious cause is the sedentary lifestyle which discourages the active physical movement in daily life to a great extent. Besides, the increasingly popularity of fast food ...

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It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems?

There are lots of tourist places in India. More and more people are travelling across the country. Now a days people are also exploring international destinations as well. People are more crazy to visit international destinations as now banks are providing loans for tourism purpose.

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Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.

There is a belief that TV ads are beneficial, however, there is opposite viewpoint of this. There are two sides of this statement and I will discuss both points in this essay.

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some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required.

There are numerous ways of developing health. Some believe that participating in sports could be beneficial for people’s health whereas others think that not only sports can improve pupils body but also there are some other ways are needed and this essay agree with this view that, imposing higher tax on sugary drinks and daily exercises are ultimate ways of constructing public health.

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some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required.

There are numerous ways of veveloping health. Some belive that parciticating in sports could be benificial for peoples health whereas others think that not only sports can improve pupils body but also thre are some other ways are needed and this essay agree with this view that, imposting higher tax on sugary drinks and daily exercises are ultimate ways of constructing public health.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages?

In several countries, numerous parents are prefering to self taught their children at home rather than sending them to school. This essay will argue that advantages of this outweighs

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What is your opinion about how people are working over hours and not enjoying their life?

Human endeavour towards their sense of happiness is often mis-measured in comparison to welfare and health. The post-modern society has strived for evolution in terms of technology and science. However, this effort in order to solve world issues or facilitate daily life, might be consuming the wellness and innovating problems instead.

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantage and disadvantages of this?

GROTH AND DEVLOPMENT IS THE ENGINE OF THE MORDERN WORLD. ELABLISHED MNC'S IN DEVLOPING NATION HAVE ITS PROS AND CONS. HERE I SHALL DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE OF UNUSUAL RISE IN THE MNC'S IN DEVLOPING COUNTIES.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make a people recycle more of their waste?

As we use many products and materials on a daily basis, it is undeniable that we have a lot of garbage coming out. The government and environmental organizations are asking people to recycle more. Some people say laws should be legislated to force them, but I do not agree with that law is the only way.

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