IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 905

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures

The majority of people think that music plays a vital role in our modern world, which can get rid of culture and generation differences. In my opinion, I totally agree with this point of view for many reasons. On the one hand, music is likely to broaden people’s horizon to welcome various cultures all over the world. It is needless to say that each country has their own tradition that performs their culture and norms. Music can reduce this culture gap and be a good method to help individual...

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Do you think the environmental situation should improve in the nearest future

I would like to talk about the environmental issues. Nowadays, the environment is getting worse and worse. The main reason for pollution is pollutants that industry and motor vehicle exhaust. Like for instance, factories release gas emissions to the atmosphere. Even, it is also a leakage of nuclear materials or toxic products into the environment.

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Money Can Make Life Easier And More Comfortable. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present world, money makes a prominent role on part of the human life. Few people believed that all the rich people are enjoying their life with an great luxery and lavish. But, in my opinion, I strongly disagree that there are so many things to be necessary in part of life to make a happy. In this essay, I will illustrate with probable reasons to elaborate further.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree to this statement?

In this day and age, the value of arts has become questionable. Nowadays, some people believe that the government is throwing away money on arts, whereby such funds could be allocated to other things. The writer of this essay strongly agrees to the given issue for the reason that there are others aspects of the society such as health, poverty and infrastructures that the government should be spending on for the development of a nation which will be elaborated in the succeeding paragraphs.

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The percentage of overweight children in the western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.Discuss the causes and effect of this disturbing trend.

The rate of childhood obesity in the civilized world has been elevated by close to 20% in a decade.

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The early stage of a child's life is an important formative period, where they find themselves between two options. And making the right choice is an integral part of life. Whilst other are of the view that children should not be disciplined, I believe that punishment is a vital ingredient in their development in the society.

On the one hand, children are good imitators. That is, they are capable of replicating the things they see around them effectively. For instance, fathers who are left-handed tend to have sons or daughter who use their left hand like their fathers. Since they only produce what they observe, the best way to lead them between good and evil decision is to be good ambassadors.

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In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?

With increasing employment opportunities across the world, people are finding it beneficial to move to different places, instead of staying in one place throughout their life. It is quite interesting to explore and experience various cultures of many people, hence people tend to move from one place to another often. Fixating at one place has its own advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Infrastructure and internal strenghth and well being both forms the actual economy for a country. Although, various people believe that external infrastructure and designer buildings are important for a city to look good while others think internal factors like good education and better medical services are important. As per my opinion I am strongly in favour of both the above points and I will discuss both these factors in detail with examples.

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some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. to what extent do you agree with this view?

In Modern society, advertisements play a key role in promoting the company's products. With that being said, I completely agree that some adverts are following unacceptable and unnecessary ways to advertise their items.

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Some people think that children`s free time must include educational activities, otherwise they will waste their time. To what extend do you agree?

According to some people, children`s spare time must be filled with some extra-curricular activities to avert them from wasting their time. In my opinion, I disagree that children must only be engaged in educational activities, as it will disable them to live their childhood to the full and make them fed up with lessons at an early age.

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Nowadays more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

One of the more recent environmental topics, that has been discussed, is who has responsibility for product packaging; is it those that make it and sell it, or those that buy it? The following essay will go both sides of this dilemma（两难境地，困局，困境） and explain why I believe it should be the manufacturers/sellers that should take on the responsibility of reducing the packing with products.

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience..

The recently released statistics indicates that there is a spike in dangerous activities carried by eighteen years old. A number of experts are of the opinion that the increase is influenced by the inability of parents and educators to provide the kids with required social and emotional education needs.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kinds of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

The notion of doing things differently, is most likely to be prevented by a number of people. This resistance is capable of creating some negative effects, that could cause some problems in the lives of people.

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Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion.

It is an unquestionable fact that, with the increase in urbanization people are becoming more ambitious towards motor vehicles. Keeping the future of environment in mind, governments are promoting and spending huge amount on bicycle usage, especially to make it easier. But, is this a best solution? This essay will discuss why nations are doing this and whether there is an alternative apart from this proposition.

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Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I disagree by the statement technology will solve environmental problems which world faces today because ,these environmental hazards are caused by rapid growth in technology and modern lifestyle we love to live in. It is seen by period of time since 18th century as industrial revolution rised globally major enviromental problems started arising.

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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

As a proverb states, Health is wealth I strongly agree by the statement many people faces difficulty maintaining healthy food habits nowadays. Looking at present scenario, we all loves to eat palatable foods . Going to restaurants, cafes and fast food corners with friends and family are daily source of tasting new dishes where we compromises with our health having unwanted meals.

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Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work. Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology.

In this present world, technology has been developed considerably and the number of users also increased tremendously. It is very good to say that, modern technologies are used in different places even in companies and schools. This trend has been increasing year after year. It is true that , technologies changed our work seriously .Some of them argue that , too much usage of technology is not good and there are some disadvantages.This essay will discuss about the uses and effects of techno...

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.**To what extent do you agree with this statement?*

There have been new developments taking place across the globe. As the times are changing, people are looking for advancements. A new trend has been observed that, people are looking for natural remedies as an alternative to medicines to cure diseases. This change is good as well as bad. Medicines have side effects and expensive. However, at the same time they are the best cure.

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TOPIC 12: Some businesses find that new employees finishing education lack basic interpersonal ability such as working with others as a part of a team. What do you think are the causes of this problem? How to solve this problem?

Organizations play an important role in shaping career of the fresh graduates. As soon as the university finishes, it is top priority of the graduate to get hired by a well reputed company. Since, they just step in to the professional life, they are not aware of the organizational world and it gives a problem to the company. In recent times, companies have started facing issues with the behaviours of the new employees.

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More and more prisons are being built to house the world’s criminals and many people believe long-term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem. However, others feel that medical and psychological assistance is what is required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Imprisonment is the solution for the majority of the crimes in the world. While it is true that more and more prisons are being built across many countries, some countries like Norway are revisiting their punishment strategies. Some argue that long-term imprisonment is not the solution for crime problem, but others say that it is because of existing punishment, the crime rates are lesser. In this essay, let's discuss their arguments.

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