IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 268

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is frequently claimed that athletes and entertaining stars are overpaid compared to those working in other professional areas. However, my stance differs from this viewpoint, for other careers have been deliberately overlooked and economically undervalued.

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The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be. What are the reasons for this trend? Is it positive or negative?

The majority of cultures are becoming alike throughout the world. There are several reasons for this. In this essay I will explain why cheap air travel, and developing tourism are the reasons for this trend and, in my opinion, it is a positive trend because it promotes a peaceful multicultural environment.

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Technology has more positive than negative effects on our relationships with other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,technology has changed our lives in many aspects.There is a thought that gadgets are beneficial for our communication,while others think it negatively effects us in a way of our communicating.As I see it,electronic devices have improved the way of chatting despite the long distance.Furthermore,with the assistance of advanced technology, we can make more friends despite the distance. I shall put forth some notions to exemplify my points with lucid examples.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

There are some, who are of the view that all educational institutions pay more attention to the theory than practice. From my perspective, some subjects need profound capacities of the facts while there are a lot of hands-on capabilities which students can acquire only through their regular uses .

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Traffic punishments are always a very polemic thing to discuss, while some people believe that they do not help to reduce traffic accidents, others think that it is the best option. I totally agree with these strict punishments due to the impact they have in people’s mind and how it helps them to not repeat the infraction.

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In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today's world?

There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over the education. While some hold a strong view that a general education across a number of subjects is aimed to be provided by secondary schools, the opposite makes a statement that pupils emphasise a wide range of subjects associated with a particular occupation. While the latter has some valid reasons, I would contend that the former would potentially bring about more tremendous impacts.

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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Medication is fundamental in our lives to help people recover from illness. Poor countries suffer from a lack of remedies as their financial status is too low to buy them. It is my view that companies may be obligated to afford available products at a lower cost for these people, and the government shall help.

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Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Space exploration offers a great deal of information about the universe. However, the amount of money spent on these projects, it can be invested by the government for further beneficial uses for society, which I actually support, but we can search for other ways to fund the exploration force.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While many think that professional workers owe a debt to the country they are trained in, I believe they should be free to work where they choose because they can make more money.

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In modern society, urbanization is leading to a significant decline in the practice of traditional farming. What are the primary factors driving this shift? Do the positive outcomes of this transition outweigh the negative consequences?

Nowadays, the number of traditional farming has greatly decreased because of urbanization. There are some factors that make this happen, such as some people think that working in the city can lead them to get a better life and also there is no more land to be used for farming. I believe this trend has a more positive impact rather than disadvantages.

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In some countries, many households have adopted solar electricity to meet their domestic energy needs. why does it happen ? Is it a positive or negative development?

Solar power has emerged as a primary source to meet energy needs in the domestic sector in some parts of the world. There is one main factor responsible for this change and in my opinion this shift towards solar power is beneficial both for individuals and the environment.

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Despite the growing number of gyms and fitness centres, more and more people are leading a sedentary lifestyle in the modern society. 60.00 What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest

Even though, many fitness-related infrastructure facilities are available in modern cities, people become more and more inactive due to their busy lifestyle.This essay discusses that, this has become a pressing issue as it creates many adverse impacts on people's well-being.However, the government and the private sector interventions to increase public awareness in this regard may help to solve the problem.

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Some people feel that fashion is like art and a significant part of society, while others feel that fashion is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A perspective exists about the sense of vogue being a substantial piece in community and as well as artistry. In contrast, other societies consider that it is caused by loss of hours and currency. From my standpoint, I totally agree with the twin proposal and this essay will elaborate on the stance taken to eventually present a conclusion accordingly.

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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.

The question of whether sport is necessary for school children or not is very topical today as so many children do not tend to do physical activities nowadays. There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss now.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the acdemic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Nowadays there is an ongoing debate about whether the data on scientific scrutiny, business and the world should be accessible for everyone or some sensitive information should be kept hidden. In my view, despite the fact that some data is too valuable to be shared with everyone, information should be free and available to everyone.

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Some people think that dangerous extreme sports such as rock climbing and sky-diving should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is often argued by some that extreme sport activities such as rock climbing and sky-diving must be stopped for good. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that these sports not only give people a thrilling experience but also provide livelihood to many professionals.

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In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem.What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

It is undoubtedly the case that the urban areas are suffering from high volume traffic congestion. There are many arguments for this problem and plenty of solutions to mitigate this issue. In this essay, I will discuss the criterion and also highlight some solutions that should be taken by the government authorities.

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Some people think that the most important function of music is to help people relax. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many who believe that the key concept of music centers on relaxation. In this essay I will discuss why I disagree with this notion and form a conclusion.

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In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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Some people think that teenagers should work.Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,it is argued that teens must work despite their age.Working can help them to earn money and they can find themselves on different career paths, which will allow them to gain experience .I completely agree with this idea.In the forthcoming paragraphs,I shall delve deep into how working early can be beneficial for youngsters.

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