IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 264

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that all companies’ decisions should be decided by managers, while others think that it is better to include employees in decision making. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There common belife such as while running a company exacutives should take responsibility to make every decisions while others think that they must consider preference of workers under their control. Personally, I think collective decision making is more convinient as its increases a chance of successful outcome.

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Some people soy thol industrial growth is necessory to solve poverty, but some other people orgue that industrial growth is causing environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In this essay we are going to discuss about Industrial growth. Does Industrial growth a necessity to solve poverty? or does this causes environmental issues? Its a relevant topic which is ongoing in the current scenario.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read anything they want online without paying. To what extend to you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is predicted that reading via books or other printed thing will be taken over by reading online. It cannot be denied that the usage of smart devices and internet makes human's life convenient more than ever before. While the online reading can help us stay updated and safe money, the emotional attachment with the books will still be a part of our life.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

People’s opinions differ as to whether or not some kids nowadays use plenty of hours to communicate with their smart devices. From my perspective, although this trend has some benefits for children, I think the negative side is even more dangerous.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the world become more increadible with it's technology, I believe that the median standard of public health is tend to increase, rather that decreased, as many people belive in this notion. In my opinion, the advancement of technology has brought and will certainly brought people's health to the next level, as there are so much interventions people can do realted this matter, and I will elaborate more on the following paragraph.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that universities should ensure equal representation of men and women in every major. In my opinion, I disagree with this idea, since students can attend the curriculum that they like.

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The use of Social Media is replacing face-to-face contact with many people. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Whether the changes in the form of communication have been improved due to the internet is an essential subject of public concern and debate. Although, face-to-face connection offers people a myriad of benefits, I will argue that the merits of the social media outweigh the demerits.

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In most countries, the crime rate is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?

Evidence suggests that in the vast majority of nations the percentage of crime in cities is higher than villages. Although there are specific root causes behind this issue, effective policies can be adopted to remedy this situation.

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In many countries, a financial crime involving identity theft is increasing. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it identity theft has on the victims involved?

In this modern world, people tend to use the internet for performing online transactions and sharing their live updates. This rising usage of personal information on the internet, creates an opportunity window for cyber criminals to consume these data and utilize it for their benefit. In fact, in this decade such financial scams involving identity theft are on the rise and these can be a huge blot on our world economy. These identity thefts mainly occur due to two key reasons.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the third millennium, the content of school books has played a vital role in education departments of each country, including a controversial issue about whether kids should start learning a new language at primary school instead of secondary school. Not only is it accompanied by several beneficial points, but also some detrimental aspects can be mentioned.

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Many people believe that counties should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? agree= no poverty, more jobs disagree = profitable, trades with other

Some people say that countries should concentrate on making food for their own citizens instead of importing products from another countries, while others reject that. In this report, I will go through the merits and demerits of this suggestion, and then allow me to share my point of view.

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Do you think the government is right to stop people using mobile phones while driving?

In this modern world, mobile phones have become indispensable gadgets. Without mobile phones, folks can't dream of even a single day. However, according to a recent survey, due to the increased usage of phones while driving, a huge number of accidents tend to happen on the road. Hence, the government is currently stopping people from using mobiles while driving. I certainly support that move by the government and I have below reasons to support my stance.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English

Since there is an Increasing of the number of tourists in the global, English has become the top spoken language. Some believe that all nations should speak English as world’s language. However, there are benefits and drawbacks. This essay will discover both sides of opinions and provide examples.

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Some people believe that children should spend all their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. agree = maintain, own traditions disagree = cultures, problem sosializing

Many parents want their children to spend all their leisure time with them, while some people say that is wrong and will lead to many demerits. In this report, I will go through both sides and then allow my to share my point of view.

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Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case ? What can be done to attract more local people ?

Today, many places, especially museum and historical sites, face a problem with visitors which attract more tourists rather than local people. This essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this problem and also put a solutions towards that.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion

It is often agreed that which medium is best studying at home or school on a child's development, which was always debatable and has now become more controversial. It can be agreed strongly upon the fact that this matter has some convincing arguments, despite the contentions about it.This essay will articulate both methods of this argument and as far as I am concerned I am in favour of the latter notion.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and polution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What ather measures do you think might be effective.

To what degree do you agree or disagree that raising the price of petrol is the most effective solution to address escalating traffic congestion and pollution issues, I totally agree that increasing the price of petrol can be the solution to tackle the problem of either traffic or pollution.

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Topic: you have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

I am writing this letter regarding the article which had published in your magazine last Sunday. There was an article about my home town Hue City. However, I read the said article and I would like to mention, that there were some mismatches and irrelevant information were there.

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Topic: many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In recent years, the world has been full of working time. All people tend to always work without thinking about spare time to do many pivotal and useful activities. This essay will argue that full-time working will affect social relationships, physical and mental health, and stress relief.

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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree oe disagree with tgis opinion?

It is commonly believed that to unite all people from different cultures and ages together with a music. I agre with the statement because this music will learn another language, promoting emphaty, and celebrates diversity.

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