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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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It is sometimes possible to pay somebody to do things you don't want to do, or don't have time to do, for example, household chores or looking after children. Is this a good way of providing work for others? Should people do these things themselves?

It is possible nowadays to hire someone to do your chores or watch your kids while you are busy with something else, this should be considered as a new way of providing job opportunities , and Humans must focus on the more important aspects in their lives that need the most of their attention.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In modern society, freelance is quite common among the mass. The reason and consequence of this phenomenon can be explained as follows.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that living in a country where one must speak a foreign language can lead to both serious and practical difficulties. While some oppose this notion , I strongly support this opinion, as language barriers can cause misunderstandings in emergencies and complicate everyday tasks.

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Some people consider playing sports is beneficial for schoolchildren. Some, however, believe sport activities also have some drawbacks. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of children playing sports.

Society believes that schooling students gain advantages from being involved in sports, while some emphasise that there can be several detriments as well. From my point of view, I have a balanced view regarding this situation.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowadays, numerous people want to be self-employed instead of working for a corporation or firm. This essay will first demonstrate why such a preference can exist, so for this, people do not want to work in a pressurised environment, and do a job freely, then some disadvantages of being self-employed, like it can lead to becoming an introverted person and being less interactive with others.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is a well-discussed topic that non-native speakers may face tangible social and practical problems while living overseas. While some people strongly believe that speaking in another language does not have any impact on an individual’s life, I truly reckon that knowing a local tongue is not enough to feel free in an foreign territory.

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"Nowadays, many students are highly motivated to gain knowledge for their future careers. To what extent do you agree that motivation or strong foundational knowledge plays a more important role in academic and professional success?"

Nowadays, many students strongly gain knowledge for future work . In my opinion, this issue can be solved with proper education and independent effortsThere is a motivation to study that can stem from both internal and external factors. Internally, a genuine interest in the subject matter, a desire to master a skill, or a belief in personal growth can be powerful drivers.

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The values that we learn from our parents and family have greater influence on our future success th

an knowledge and skills we learn at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?

Organized tours to remote areas and small communities are becoming more popular. While this trend has both advantages and disadvantages, I believe it is mostly a positive development if it is managed carefully.

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Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. #219

Some argue that individual culture is defined by their country of origion, as national values and traditions play a major role in shaping behaviour. Others, however, believe that this influence is minimal, as people today are more affected by global exposure. The following essay will examine these perspectives before giving a personal opinion.

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Music should be used more often in education to enhance learning and memory. To what extent do you agree or disgree?

Educational organisations are exploring various teaching ways to trigger the ability to absorb new knowledge in children. Hence, adapting music in information transmission is a common method in education. This essay will highlight the pros and cons of applying music in teaching kids.

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Aritifical Intelligence will create more jobs than it elimates in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the era of rapid technological development, Artificial Intelligence supports a range of fields. Hence, there is controversy about whether Artificial Intelligence will replace human jobs, leading to increasing layoffs, or generate more jobs in the future. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of advanced technology in relation to employment

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Many people think that the behavior of professional sportmen off the field is not important as long as they are good players. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the off-field behavior of professional sportsmen is not important, as long as they perform well in their sport. While this view is common, I strongly disagree. I believe that a sportsman's behavior, both on and off the field, plays a crucial role in their influence on society and the overall spirit of the sport.

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Some people think that schools should teach students how to be good parents. Others believe this is not a suitable topic for school education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, some individuals believe that we should learn to adjust to climate change rather than prevent it.I completely disagree with this idea,and I will discuss my reasoning in the following essay.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is undeniable that in many cultures, children are advised that diligence is the key to success. This essay will discuss the advantages and possible drawbacks.

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In some countries, it is common for women to participate in the workforce when their children are young. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In a few countries, despite having young kids, women go to their jobs, which is very usual. Although, there are some benefits, such as they can grow professionally, and learn to manage both work, and children's lives, there are some drawbacks, such as extra money to invest in childcare and insufficient time to spend with children.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the development of autonomous vehicles has been growing fast, and some experts believe that all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless one day, with only passengers inside. While this technology has some benefits, it also brings concerns. In this essay, I will explain why the advantages of driverless cars are more important than the disadvantages.

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Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative influences on the youths and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

It has recently been argued whether the acts of young people spending excessive time in shopping malls could bring detrimental effects to themselves and society. I believe this notion is valid to an extent, and the reason why shall be discussed in this essay.

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More and more people and organizations are using digital technology for contact with other people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using digital technology for communication?

In today’s fast-paced world, digital technology has become the primary means of communication for individuals and organizations. While there are many advantages to using such technology, there are also some drawbacks that should be considered.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

In recent years, fast food has become increasingly prevalent due to its convenience. However, the overconsumption of such food negatively affects on public health. In my opinion, it’s a reasonable measure for authorities to impose a higher tax on processed food.

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