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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

A number of animals are approaching extinction while a certain figure in the animal kingdom is labeled as endangered species.

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Because most information about culture and history can be found on the internet today, museums are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, because of the development of technology, data is being updated on the internet, which makes storing information in museums not essential for citizens compared to the past. This essay agrees with the replacement of storing information in the museum by the Internet since it enhances the accessibility of the information and is complimentary for everyone.

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Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many think that ecological issues will deteriorate, that it will be impossible to live on our planet and the humanity will look for other planet where it would able to continue life. I completely disagree with that opinion due to it is not possible that environment will worsen so that we will lose an opportunity to live on it and there are no such predictions by scientists.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

First of all, when young people learn about parenting early, they will understand how important it is to take care of a family. They will learn that being a good parent means giving love, support, and time to their children. For example, if students learn how to deal with stress and how to communicate well, they will be better parents in the future. Also, these lessons can help young people become more patient and responsible.

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Some people think learning history in school is important others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important discuss both views and give your opinion

There is no denying the fact that schools include a wide variety of courses nowadays, including science, life skills, art and physical education. While it is a commonly held belief that historical subjects are considered significant for general knowledge, there is also an argument that suggests concentrating more on courses that are related to life. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, some parents have chosen to educate their children at home instead of sending them to school. While this approach offers several advantages, I believe the drawbacks outweigh the benefits.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapaers or books because they will be to read everything they want online without paying. to what do you extent agree or disagree with this statment ?

Due to the advancement of technology, it is being said that newspapers or books will become extinct as they will be available through internet services without any cost. Considering the future, I fully agree to this notion and will state my hold in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loos of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals argue that the most critical environmental issue we face today is the loss of specific species of plants and animals, however, some say there are more pressing environmental issues that require urgent attention. This essay will explore both perspectives and provide relevant examples.

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Question- Buying tickets on the internet such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this outweigh the disadvantage.

These days, it has been a growing trend to purchase plane tickets, perishable and non-perishable goods also books by using technological devices. This trend has many merits and demerits. However, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, which I will discuss in this paragraph.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep What are problems caused by lack of sleep? What can be done about this lack of sleep?

It can be noticed that there are more people suffering from not having enough sleep.The writer of this essay believes that this issue is attributable to stress and a long time using smartphones,however, this problem can be tackled by following the body's biological clock.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphsise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In modern times, marketing solely focuses on convincing the customers, that recent products are novel in a certain manner. Even, though this could have a positive effect on the sales, it could also negatively impact the overall outcome. I neither agree it as positive nor disagree as negative. In this essay, I will explain it with examples and justify my viewpoint.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

International tourism has become a key contributor to the economic growth of many countries. While some people are concerned about its negative impact on local communities and the environment, I believe the advantages of international tourism far outweigh the disadvantages.

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styding with a group of students in classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home . To what extant do you agree or disagree ?

It's been argued that the formal way of teaching is more effective than taking classes on the internet at home. In this essay, I will examine both views and explain why I support the idea that classroom learning is more beneficial.

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In this task, you are to write an essay on the role of physical exercise in achieving success at college. You will have 30 minutes for the task. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Physical exercise always plays an important role in achieving success in college. In the following text, I will explain why physical fitness is so important and how it can lead you to a successful life.

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One of the consequences of improved technology is that many jobs that used to be done by people can now be completed by robots or computers. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The improvement of technology is now gaining a lot of recognition, and it also makes human life easier than before. In this essay, I will tackle the advantages and disadvantages of robots and technologies.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

It is suggested that the prevention of health problems is more vital than medical intervention, and governments should take it into consideration when allocating budget. I partially agree with the provided statement because prevention of diseases can be effective in some cases because promoting healthy lifestyle can really decrease the illness rates, however, some illnesses can progress in a very short period of time besides being hidden, so the prevention becomes inefficient.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree

There is no denying the fact that sugar is one of the most common ingredients for cooking and drinking. While it is a commonly held belief that many health and heart comes with increases in the level of sugar. There is an argument that opposite it. In my opinion, I consider that sugar causes more problems than any disease in the world.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that the impact of daily usage of computers on children is mostly worse than good. This essay totally agrees with this statement. I believe that using the computer every day can worsen the kid's eyesight and make them develop antisocial behaviour.

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Many people believe that children who grow up in a poor family will have preparation for adult's problems in daily lives, while this is not true for ones living in rich conditions. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many young teenagers are facing adult problems in their daily lives, especially those who are born into a low-economy family. Meanwhile, children who grow up in a high-economy family only need to be focused on their studies. Personally, I totally agree with the statement that children from poor families need to be prepared to face adult problems in their daily life.

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Some people say that parents should organise free time activities for their childrens.Other says children should be free to choose what they want to do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different viewpoints about organizing free time activities for children. some support these to be controlled by parents, while others are in favour of giving freedom to choose how they want to spend their free time. In my opinion, a balanced approach is most beneficial for their regard.

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