IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 398

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue working after the age of 65. However, others say there shouldn't be a limitation on age and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of their age. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include relevant examples.

One group of people believe, nobody should be an employee after the age of 65, whilst another group think, there should not be a limitation based on age and basically, anyone needs to have permission to work regardless of their age. Personally, I assume, that everyone should choose when they want to retire and no one can forbid this, therefore elder people must be allowed to work.

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Some people believe that it is essential to learn a foreign language in school, while others believe that it is not necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are some perspectives illustrating that teaching a foreign language in school is important and some people disagree with this statement. In my view , I think learning a foreign language can be more beneficial if you learn it in school at a younger age.

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Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that the traditions of their society should be followed by young people. While, many people think that it is free for teenagers to make their own choice as individuals. In my point of view, both are reasonable in particular cases.

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Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child’s education?

There is an ongoing debate regarding the attitudes of parents when it comes to the performance of their children at school. While some of them do not appreciate the offspring for their achievements, others force students to gain good academic scores. The reason why parents are pressuring their young ones can be attributed to various factors. This essay will examine the cause of this practice and the parental role in terms of supporting their kids in education, with relevant examples.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed that industrialized countries should provide humanitarian assistance to underdeveloped countries in the event of natural disasters. This essay agrees with this view because of the power that rich countries have and to improve their political significance.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about many government's opinion about the importance of progress in just economic way. While some argue that economic development is more important than other progress in countries, I believe that there are other different sections which should be improved with economics.

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some people, living in metropolis has a bad effect on the wellness of population. I agree with the given opinion to a small extent, however, mainly oppose this idea for more plausible reasons.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Nowadays it is common for parents to purchase plenty of toys for their children. Some of these are beneficial for children’s mental and physical growth. In this essay, I will touch on both benefits and drawbacks of this situation.

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In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet that children can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that abundant knowledge on the internet can help students study well at home instead of attending lessons at school, so it raises the question of whether going to school is necessary or not. While there are many reasons to support this idea, I believe that the role of learning at school cannot be replaced.

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Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the new generation, many families are moving from the suburbs to cities and developed eras. While that affects the portion of Rural citizenship. Personally, that is a negative outcome of industrialization. This essay will discuss the pros and cons, I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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Some people believe the the best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. What do you think about this opinion?

Today’s era has seen the growing demand for learning English in order to catch up with the development of modern society. There exists one notion that no other methods are as effective as learning with native teachers. My take on this is that, though being taught by the native yields several positive outcomes, it is not the greatest way to obtain English owing to these following rationales.

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Many companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages of this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is said that nowadays, many businesses invest in the field of sports for their reputation's sake. Some people believe the sponsorship is a worthwhile work bringing many benefits, however, others think there are some drawbacks. In my own opinion, there are numerous methods for companies to advertise in meaningful aspects rather than in sports.

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Children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe children should be free to do what they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Opinions are divided on whether children’s free-time activities should be scheduled or children should be able to choose to do anything that they want. In my opinion, both views benefits children in different ways, but letting the kids choose by themselves is better as they would have more fun and develop their decisions-making skills.

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Some people argue that the purpose of zoos is only to entertain people. Do you agree or disagree?

Zoos are primarily used for entertaining individuals, however there is an ongoing debate that zoos are only used to entertain and there is no other significance. I strongly disagree with the statement, and the reasons are as follows.

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

A heated topic of discussion among people is that a lot of married couples are planning to have no children. It seems as if it has become a popular trend to not have children in married life. Even though it is up to the couple's personal opinions, there will definitely be consequences for their decision.

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In the past, people lived in one place for a long time , but now they can live in many different places what are the reasons ? Is this positive or negative development ?

In the past, people tended to live in one place for most of their lives. However, today, people are more mobile than ever before. There are several reasons why people now live in many different places.

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Many highschool graduates tend to take a gap year. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Opinions are divided on whether a number of senior high school students tends to deter university enrollment being positive or negative. While acknowledging the advantages of this trend, I firmly believe that taking a gap year is a decidedly negative development.

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Some people say free time acitvities for the children should be organized by the parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and gives your opinion.

It is sometimes argued that parents should arrange for kids’ spare time activities through their mature consciousness and experiences. I would argue that it is better to allow their children to choose their free time activities.

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In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast create between cities others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport discuss both these views and Give your opinion

Nowadays,transportation is a major issue,which is taking shape to the big problem.The first group of people think that money should be spent on imports as well as the construction of new railway lines.The second group of individuals believe that the buses in the existing transport system need to improve by investing money.Fast travelling and facilities in trains are supported the first view of people.But on the other hand,cheap transportation favours buses.In this essay,I will discuss both views and introduce my opinion.In my opinion,trains should be built between cities for fast travelling by spending money but no one can ignore the importance of buses in cities.

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In modern era, it is easy to sell, buy and work with other people through internet. But others against it. Do you think this is positive trend or negative trend.

There is a discussion regarding today's conditions where working and doing transactions with others via Internet is easy. However, there are still people who are contra with the idea. Personally, I think it is a positive trend for citizens to perform jobs and to carry business out through Internet because of the benefits from the destruction of physical barriers and the less requirement on capital.

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