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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future.

In 2020, the AI revolution is so rapid, as a result, the changing speed of work in the world after 2020 is much faster than before the Covid situation. For example, Windows 11, provided by Microsoft, has "Copilot AI", which helps the users automatically. ChatGPT, the generative AI provided by OpenAI, generate many sentences and images, and is just now the centre of business, which is easy jobs. There is a possibility that so many people who can do the job that AI also can do lose their jobs. In the last decade, AI can do only a few tasks, for example, suggesting items from the purchasing history. However, AI can do so many things like a human today. I think people should study the structure of anything they are interested in. Getting knowledge is an easy thing, and everyone can do it, but the important thing is to connect knowledge to other ones. To achieve this, need to know about the structure, and you can consider how to connect knowledge to other knowledge. For example, the espo...

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Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages?

Today we have a huge step in medicine and a lot of ancient diseases have been studied, but, nevertheless, problems with health are one of the main problems of humanity. In many countries, we have two types of medical services offered to citizens and most of them are from private companies. The Advantages and disadvantages of private healthcare we will check in this essay.

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Scientists have been warning for many years that to protect the environment, we have to limit the use of energy in a daily lives. Despite warning many people do not attention to this. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to save the environment?

lthough the public has been alarmed by experts to save the environment as much as theydo, a lot of people do not pay any attention. In this essay, the reasons for this will be illustrated in addition to some solutions in order to be aware of these consequences for humans in the long run.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a general belief that subjects like physical education and cookery should be removed from the curriculum to promote more focus on academic subjects because of the growing pressure to succeed in recent times. I Completely disagree with this statement because there are several benefits of studying other non acedemic subjects. This will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is becoming more popular in developing nations to see multinational corporations. There are some benefits for this trend such as the progress in the economy they create in these countries and the availability of jobs, however, the shut down of some small local businesses and the lower selling rate of local products can be its drawbacks.

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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also people nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The consequences of smoking affect not only the smoker but also the passive smokers around them. Some people argue that this activity should be banned in the public area. I strongly agree with this statement and this essay will discuss this argument more in detail.

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Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local custom and codes of behavior.

Migrating from one country to another country is still occurring today. There are several reasons to move such as war, genocide, welfare, and so on. People are trying to cross the border and reach their limit. These conditions are normal because humans always look for amenities in life. There will be agreements and disagreements for adapting to the new cultures.

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Sports develop the personality and reduces international stress. Do you agree or disagree?

Sports are the physical and mental activities, which reduces stress and gives complete fitness. Sports are of two types - outdoor and indoor. The purpose of both the sports is pure entertainment. Nowadays, sports are no longer a hobby but it has become a complete career and profession because sports cannot be played without a technique.

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Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local custom and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree ?

Today, there are a lot of people who move to other countries than before. They are looking for a good life and comfort. However, they must interact with local people and their culture so they can start a better life. I totally agree with migrating to other countries because it can save children and make a better life.

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Purchasing cars for the first time in developing countries has led to severe problems. Discuss the causes of this issue and propose potential solutions.

Initial purchasing of cars is worsening road conditions in developing countries. The root cause of this issue is the cult of chasing modernity. However, changes in modernism can be employed to overcome it.

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In the future no one will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend they will agree or disagree with this statement.

The world is fast becoming a global village as information dissemination is becoming easier than ever before. Social media, the print media and communications agencies now give out happenings around the globe and communities with spending cash to print papers. The written text below emphasizes how I strongly agree with the fact that in the near future, no individual will pay for newspapers and books.

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Some people think that if a police force carries guns, this will encourage a higher level of violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It cannot be denied that police who carry guns have conducted various forms of violence in recent years, around the world in both developing and developed worlds. Such phenomenon has encouraged the cause-and-effect assumption that if the police force is equipped with firearms, there will be a higher level of violence in the society. As far as effectiveness, human psychology, and police management are concerned, I strongly disagree with such opinion.

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Some people think that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing contribute more towards a child's overall development. The school curriculum should provide more time for these subjects to be taught if the school wants the all-round development of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, children are more interested in various types of fields, so numerous people think that subjects like arts, music, drama and creativity contribute more towards a child’s overall development. They believe school curricula provide more time for these subjects to be taught if the schools want the all-round development of children. I agree with this statement. In this essay, I will explain all points in detail.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

nowadays, technology takes the lead on every level than in the past, however, the majority of the population doesn't have a journal like before, and it provides people with a huge information in one place. from my perspective, I disagree with this view since both types have different ways to use

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Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of the problems connected to public transport and suggest some solutions.

All over the world from North America to China and from South Africa to Australia one thing one can find in common is public transport ,which may be in the form of buses ,trains ,metros or any other means but you will find it everywhere as it is one of the basic need of society, however, it is always not comfortable, depending on the locality it has its deficits. In this , essay I am going to discuss issues with public transport and some remedies for the same.

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Boxing is a bloody sport that often results in physical injuries. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue, the Boxing, which is violent and dangerous sports, should be banned in this contemporary era because of the regular occurrence of injuries to its participants. Although I agree to this viewpoint, there are some merits of playing this high intensity sports. This essay discusses and elaborates why I partially agree that the Boxing should be ceased to exist.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the past three decades, many countries have experienced a significant increase in the youth population, presenting both opportunities and challenges for communities. Young people bring new perspectives to those societies, but at the same time they were deprived of the experiences of the previous generation. Although, I myself believe that the young population has more advantages for today's society

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this world, the majority of things are interlinked with science and it plays a vital role in the betterment of the human race. We will explain the essential part of science which helps humans in this essay and will provide my views along with the experience that I encountered.

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In some area of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at the night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Today we have many accidents that happen at night. Hence, the US government imposed a 'curfew' to protect people, especially teenagers are not allowed to be on the streets after a specific time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult to protect them. I fully agree that it is the best requirement and solution to create a safer atmosphere on the streets.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is some people think that universities should give graduates the information that will be useful in the workplace, while others argue it, saying the main function of a university is to give access to information whether it will be useful or not for an employer.

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