IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 412

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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今日、多くの人が十分な睡眠をとるのが難しいと不平を言います。睡眠不足はどのような問題を引き起こす可能性がありますか？睡眠不足について何ができますか？あなたの答えの理由を与え、あなた自身の知識や経験から関連する例を含めてください。少なくとも250語書いてください。

In today's society, many people find it difficult to get enough sleep. Sleep deprivation can cause a variety of physical and mental health problems.

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今日の多くの国では、犯罪小説やテレビ犯罪ドラマがますます人気が高まっています。なぜこれらの本やテレビ番組が人気があると思いますか？犯罪小説やテレビ犯罪ドラマについてどう思いますか？あなたの答えの理由を与え、あなた自身の知識や経験から関連する例を含めてください。少なくとも250語書いてください。

Crime novels and crime dramas are popular for a number of reasons.

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Some people encourage young children to leave their parents’ house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parents’ house as long as possible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, there is a long-term debate on children’s house-leaving themes. While one section of society, including myself, holds the view that young individuals should leave their parents’ home as soon as they reach maturity, others argue that the longer children stay at home, the more beneficial it will be. In this essay, I am going to discuss both of these views and state my personal position.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Youngsters are struggling hard to become successful in their academic tasks these days. Some argue that non-academic subjects like cooking and physical education should not be included in the school syllabus so that students can fully focus on academic tasks. This essay strongly agrees with this statement because it will prevent extra load work and students will enjoy studying subjects of their interest.

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Q: Shopping habits depend more on your age group than anything else. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The age group is said to influence more about someone's shopping habits. I disagree with this statement because there are others such as society or even the convenience of online shopping might affect more on that habit rather than age group.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them.

The average weight of the community is increasing while the level of health and physical condition is decreasing in some countries. I believe that the low self-awareness due to the healthy lifestyle and the high cost of healthy food are the main reasons for this situation. The government can overcome this problem by increasing education regarding the importance of a healthy lifestyle and regulating licensing for junk food businesses.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In our world, there are myriad approaches to getting people together who has different culture and ages such as sports, food and music. In my opinion, music is one of the impressive ways to achieve this aim.

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As technology advances, travelling to space is likely to become an option for holidaymakers in the future. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of space tourism?

Making the impossible possible with dramatic growth in science and research paving the way to create innovation in technology. As discover new places, new countries are quite comfortable with this generation of technological development. This can lead to travelling to outer space as an option in the near future.

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Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the healthcare system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this, and what are some of the long-term effects?

Recently, in spite of great efforts to improve healthcare institutions in most high-income countries, the rate of individuals' physical health is declining. The sedentary worker and the change of entertainment have played major responsibilities for it. By examining these causes this essay will predict whether it is a positive development or not.

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Associating the high sales of consumer products with the dominance of advertising is an arguable debate subject, with advocating adverts as a source of power in today's world. I firmly opine that advertisements play a pivotal role in supporting consumerism.

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Some believe that exercise is important for health while others think that balanced diet is more important. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

It is a common belief that exercise is key to health but some people think that a balanced diet is more important.

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Some people say that it's better to teach language students in small classes, whereas others think the number of people does not matter. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Extensive research has been done to show the best conditions to, learn languages. Class size is one such fiercely debated topic. Some people opine that small classes as being better for students. However, others say that large classes are better for teaching languages. In this essay, I shall discuss both views. I believe that for a language class to be effective, it should neither be too big, nor too small.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

recently, the ageing population has been a common issue among most countries, especially in developed countries. Even though a longer life span can benefit our human beings, I also believe those can bring about more negative effects on our culture.

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Countries with high rates of university education report higher levels of technological development and productivity. Manu people believe that university education should be free for all citizens. What are the advantages and drawbacks of free university education?

Countries with a higher percentage of their population having received a university education tend to have higher technological development and productivity levels. This correlation between education and economic success has led many people to believe that university education has numerous advantages, it also has some drawbacks that must be considered.

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Many people think regions affect successful persons. What are your opinions about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to.

It is often said that “where there is a will, there is way”. But my personal view is that there will be more successful nation if the community is strong financially and politically. In my opinion, if the country is strong and able to make decisions without worrying about its political selfish goals, it will always end up in the advancement of society. If there are more funds from government and there are richer crowd in the country, there is always a chance for new experiments and thus lead to advancement. In this essay I am illustrating this point of view with examples.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this competitive world where academic achievement is a measure of success young people put a lot of stress on their studies. Some suggest that changes should be made to the school curriculum and subjects like physical education and cookery should be taken off so that students can concentrate on subjects like science and maths. I oppose this suggestion for a number of reasons which will be discussed below.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer- based on technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Nowadays, we are depending on technology day by day noticeably due to the wide range of facilities has given us. In my point of view, computers can be able to change the world beneficially although they have some downsides. In this essay, I will argue my own view.

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115.Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entretainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some say that if people let children decide their everyday matters, in the future they will only think about themselves, while others would argue that children should make their own choices. This essay would argue that although people might be more selfish if individuals make their own choices, they will be more independent and will enjoy their lives.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

I could have started my letter with a wholesome story about taking my first steps towards money or saying ''business'' as my first word instead of saying ''mother''. That would have been nice, but also a lie.

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In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first year after the birth of their baby. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's era, working women are increasing more and more in order to help their husbands with life expenses. Recently, most sectors nowadays offer to deliver mothers a maternity leave which lasts up to a year. In this essay, I am going to shed some light on the advantages and disadvantages of giving maternity leave for a year.

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