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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent machines. What is your opinion?

n recent, the advanced development in technology has sparked the debate around AI will take place in all works. From my perspective, I think that artificially intelligent machines will only substitute for repetitive tasks without skills, but some professions are still dominated by human beings. this paragraph is going to discuss this view.

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People from rural areas often decide to leave their life behind and migrate to cities in the hope of finding a more comfortable one, but little do they know that migration does not necessarily lead to a higher quality of life since urban lifestyle comes with its own share of problems. Nevertheless, there are measures that governments can take to eliminate these difficulties.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Bullying is becoming a rising concern in most educational institutes, especially, schools. There are so many visible reasons for this malpractice, including lack of discipline, behaviour and so on. In my opinion, this problem can be mitigated by taking measurable steps by the authorities and individuals as well.

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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people spend the majority of their leisure time on extreme activities in nature to fight on their adrenaline. In my opinion, people have a big preference for this agenda because of hobbies and decide to explore more about nature as far as they can. This can be a positive development for health and I believe there are other good impacts that can arise from that; however, the other detrimental effects can lead to harmful situations.

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Many teenagers are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job. What are the advantages and disadvantages of teenagers working part-time?

Some parents are determined to teach their children to work part-time at an early age. Even though it is not good, I wholeheartedly believe children must be educated at a young age to become independent and not have trouble in the future.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required.

It is argued that enhancing the sports centers leads to improving public health. However, some believe that other more effective options are possible, the debate will be discussed in this essay, and I am going to give a concluding view at the end.

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Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions

Success in sports is influenced by two primary factors, physical health and mental strength. While some individuals hold the view that physical strength is more crucial, I completely agree with the perspective that mental prowess is the predominant determiner of significant results.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some communities, people argue that children should be taught that having hard work will make their dreams come true. This statement has a negative and positive impact that I will explain in this essay.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that using mobile phones should be allowed during study time for children .However, this essay strongly stands with the people who believe that working with these devices in school should be banned.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problem is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this?

Many festivals are currently in existence, and most of them are becoming outdated and meaningless. In my opinion, the degradation of traditional festivals is causing cultural disintegration, and both local people and the government must work together to put it into practice.

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Museums and art gallaries should concentrate on works that show histroy and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent to do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that their countries' museums must not include international exhibitions and instead, they should focus on their national heritage. However, adding international workarts to the local gallaries holds many benefits such as; exposing the population to extra cultures and making it affordable to all citizens, particularly for those who can not travel. This essay will discuss the reasons behind the necessity of having multicultural museums.

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Nowadyas, many medical research projects are funded by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that research should be carried by private companies, individuals or governent? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

One of the most concerning topics in the modern world is medicine research projects. While today these projects are mostly funded by private companies, I believe that they should also be developed by government institutions. This essay will discuss whether private companies and government need to work on research projects.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Helping out each other is part of humanity, some people say that an obligation of free community service programming as a course for teenagers is important. I agree with this idea, although it causes some drawbacks effect on individuals.

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Technological development in earlier times brought more changes to the life of ordinary people then recent technological development have brought? Do you agree or disagree?

The lives of general people have been positively impacted by technological advancement in the past compared to the present. Technological advancement was required for the development of the past society and life of people. However, I personally agree with this viewpoint believing that, the present fast development of technology is mostly harming the lives of people instead of benefitting them.

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Since the beginning of 21st century internet has been changed dramatically and working from home has become common. While working in the comfort of home may prove to be a blessing, office workers have some unmatchable benefits. This essay will discuss why office goers could be more productive than people who choose to be home-sourced.

One of the most common approaches in the world since the beginning of Covid-19 is remote-working. At first, it was for the sake of safety and preventing the disease to spread. Then, after the invention of the vaccine and controlling the virus, It became a regular way of working all around the world. Remote-working has some benefits to both managers and office-workers, but it also has its downfalls, too. One of them is the productivity of the workers.

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Creative artists should be permitted to express their ideas without any limitations. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that inventive artists should be allowed to venture their ideas freely. This essay agrees with this statement because if artists are not permitted to express their own opinions, art will not grow and prosper and the unemployment rate will increase in this field of work.

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Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Do the advantages of using computers for learning outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The development of technology has improved our quality of life in various aspects, including education. It is often said that computers have been a crucial part of the learning process for some reasons. I personally believe that computer use in the classroom brings more positive impacts than downsides.

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In order to study at university students are required to par expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford then so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, education is getting expensive and not every individual can afford by their own. Hence a debate has been sparked that university education should be free to all; however, I partially agree with the statement and will provide its justification in upcoming paragraphs.

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Today, people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages?

Technological development has granted humans a more comfortable lifestyle, and it has given them resources to interact efficiently across the globe. Nothing comes without a cost, though. The more technology we access, the more complications we will face in the future. Although it all seems like bad news, the advantages must also be mentioned. Then, this essay will contrast both views and conclude whether it is more beneficial or not.

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