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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Nowadays, many people have easy access to computers and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games. What can be done to minimize the bad effects?

The emergence of technology is influential yet a failure however it became part of our lives that gives amusement to people, so many youths were influenced and enjoyed recreating a digital world.

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death penality is best way to control and reduce the crime rate to what extent do you agree ?

Nowadays, something that has always been discussed is Law. In specific conditions in some regions. There are various ways to manage the crime. One of them, is the death penalty. In this essay, the author will examine their stand and make summarize in the end.

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The money spent by governments on space programs would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some governments spent their budget on space projects although it is believed that subsidizing public services like educational and medical services is a priority. I strongly agree with this idea.

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The plans below show how the ground of a particular building has changed over time. Summarize the information by seclecting and reporting the main features.

Presented for consideration are 3 pictures showing how a building changed in the three main periods.

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Topic: Student should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To achieve a goal of study, academic subjects must be prepared for students to succeed in exam. On the other hand, Some practical aspects are not required the same with academic ability in facing exam. Prioritising academic subjects is a must considering not all students in readiness for various subjects. However, there is another side about what the route of students towards their career plan. In this essay, I will elaborate more below.

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Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development?

In this day and age, there is a debate over the complexity of entering universities.In addition, this way is being sophisticated more and more over the years because of several causes.The following essay takes a look at both sides of this phenomenon.

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There is no denying the fact that computers have positive impact on children. Learning from an early age is an initiative step so it is a good step to use computers, but its time should not proceed so long.This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of using computers

Nowadays, technology has to be exposed to our children from an early age. It aims to maximize their computer skills considering how important it is to have such ability in this era both for working purposes and in giving an easiness for other activities. However, the negative effect would appear on using computers if parents neglect to control their children. In this essay, I will elaborate more.

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Nowadays, people all over the world are spending more and more time apart from their families. Why is this happening? How does this affect people and their families? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often argued that because of industrialisation masses across the globe are spending a hefty amount of time away from closed one.The following paragraphs would shed light on their causes and impact on the life of individual and families.

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some people think that more money should be spent on developing public transportation, others believe that, instead we should spend this money in enhancing the roads Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This is one of the important debatable topic that we are going to discuss in below, about developing the public vehicles and investing more on developing the road lanes. We will discuss both the views and will provide my concern over here.

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

The news editors have the main responsibility for giving the decision for publishing news either on Television and Newspaper. This essay will explain several factors behind this important decision. Regardless of the flooded from bad news, society need a balance while exposing to the bad and good news.

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Some people think that arts (such as painting and music) do not improve people's life and, therefore, government should not spend money on it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Arts is used as one of the methods to convey the characteristics of nations, including statues, paintings and buildings. While some criticise regarding fewer contributions derived from such behaviours, I strongly agree with the necessity of trading in money for the perks of diversity in different countries.

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Some people think the newly built houses should be the same as the old house style in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own styles. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are a controversial perspective heating up a debate over constructing houses in native regions. While some claim that brand new buildings should be similar to the style of houses in the past, the others hold a strong view that governors should permit citizens to erect their houses by their own styles. While the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter.

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some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that countries have invested substantial amounts of money in space exploration. While some people think this activity is a waste of resources, others argue that humans must continue to explore the universe. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of this topic and explain my support for the latter view.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for research. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Animals are widely used by humans for different purposes at various times. It continues to be controversial if they should have right equality with man and their exploitations by individuals should cease. Although there are valid points to both views, I am of the opinion that it is fair to treat these lesser creatures the same way as homo sapiens.

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26. Many people believe that majority of children in western countries are being obese. Is it true? Agree or disagree. Give reasons and examples.

It has become common now that children all over the world suffer from numerous health, whether bad nutrition conditions in Africa or obesity in Europe. Despite, the perfect healthcare system in Western countries, children are being obese, There are potential reasons for this phenomenon. In the following essay, I am going to elaborate on these reasons with relevant examples.

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In some countries, some criminal trails in law courts are shown on television so that the general public can watch. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In this 21st century, the crime ratio has increased a lot. Many countries around the globe are telecasting the court trials so the general public can watch. There are upsides and downsides of the above statement but I'm my opinion the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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In spite of this advances made in agriculture, many people around the world stil go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

In this era, new developments have been made in agriculture. However, the majority of the world's population still suffers from a lack of food. In this essay I will provide the causes of that as well potential solutions.

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Many people think that the best way to learn a culture is to learn the language of it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Culture is the lifeblood of a vibrant society, it is expressed in many ways, we tell our stories, remember the past, celebrate, entertain ourselves, and imagine the future. Our creative expression defines who we are, and helps us to see the world through the eyes of others. There is a school of thought which says that the best way to perceive a culture is through learning a language. I agree with the fact and will explain it further.

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Some think that printed books are not necessary in the digital era, because all writing can be stored electronically. Others think printed books still play an important role. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

As the development of technology,books can be stored electronically.People hold different opinion about this,some people prefer read or use electronic books, while others still take printed book seriously.

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Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past.

In this new era, new generation's ancestors have no time for their kids to track them for betterment. It is true that new technologies are totally responsible for this behaviour. And, it is also valid that a child barrow huge loss when they are away from his mother and father's love.

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