IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 454

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

I wanted to express my appreciation for the cooking experience which I learned in the cookery course. I am excited to share that I learned many quick recipes through the course which made me feel that cooking is a simple and less time-consuming activity.

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New forms of money are becoming extremely popular nowadays. Is this a positive development or adding risk to the system? Should new money technology face greater regulation and scrutiny? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Crypto money has been promoted and extremely popular for a few decades. This tendency would have the biggest impact on financial development as numerous gyber frauds are present these days. I strongly believe that this trend will affect society and the federal government should play a role in regulating of Crypto money. This essay will expound on my views and conclude the topic.

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Some people believe that students should begin learning a language very early in schoop while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Language is a tool for people doing communicate with each other, moreover, it is an integral part of human life. While some people think that students can be taught a language later, I am with those who argue that learning a language should conveyed to the students at an early age in their school.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

Few college students have an interest in studying other subjects outside their main study. On the contrary, some of them choose to focus on their main study. This essay will discuss both these views, and I will draw my personal opinion about my agreement with studying different subjects for them and its benefits.

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?

All people in the world must be want to be a successful person. However, success for some people has a different meaning. Many people prefer to achieve success by pursuing their careers and others choose to continue to higher education.

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Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone?s life . Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is undeniable that advertising Plays an earth-shaking role for businesses to sell their products and services. However, while Some people believe that marketing impacts negatively everyone's life, I could agree with those who deem that It is advantageous for us.

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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.others say that there are more important envirounmental problems. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a dilemma between people who think that the main threat to the environment is decreasing the particular species of plants and animals, however, others believe that there are more important threats to the environment.I believe that there are more important environmental problems.

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Do you think that modern technology, such as the internet and computers will ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

It is often argued that the development of technology such as a computer, and the internet will replace traditional sources of information such as a book and handwritten information. I believe in future machines and World Wide Web will potentially replace paper books and the written word because they offer convenience and accessibility. This essay will discuss the same with my reasons in detail with relevant examples.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

An increasing number of people with health issues seek complementary medical treatments rather than mainstream medical therapy. In my point of view, this is a negative development which can raise types of illness in the community and impact the health institution.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in sciencetific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too valuable to shared freely

Some people claim that important information, inventions, and resources should be accessible to everyone for the purpose of human welfare. While others believe that sensitive and valuable information must be kept confidential for security reasons. However, I agree with the former viewpoint.

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The best way to solve environmental problems is increase the fuel cost? do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that the most optimal solution to address the global environmental crisis is to increase the fuel price. From my perspective, I would like to refuse this notion as these problems caused by many factors and other approaches will be more effective due to some long-term benefits.

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The picture show information about average incom and spending on food and cloths by an average family in acity in the UK from 2010 to 2013

The given table depicts the data about the sum average of salary and expenditure on meals and outfits of the average household over three years in The UK, whilst the pie chart illustrates the five items of outlay that the family spent on those items from 2010 to 2013.

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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is general acceptance that education is crucial for human beings. Provide quality education, Schools play a more important role in facilitating a suitable environment for children. This includes private schools which is a great option for many parents sending their children to effective schools. So, from my point of view, private schools need to get support from the government. In this essay, I will provide my reason in the following paragraphs.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

The optimal solution to reduce traffic congestion contamination issues is raising the cost of gasoline. In my opinion, this suggestion wouldn't be beneficial in the long term and I completely disagree with this statement. Moreover, regarding increasing the price of gas, the state may encounter public demonstrations.

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Pros and cons of using television, it is a time-wasting? Give your opinion

Television has long been a subject of debate, some arguing that is a waste of time and others not. The majority of the families have in their homes a television and this electronic device makes part of their routine. Let’s discuss the pros and cons of spending time with television.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

Nowadays, some students in university tend to focus on their main subjects, while others are eager to learn more subjects and broaden their knowledge. There are certain advantages and disadvantages on both sides, the above essay will explain about it.

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Why is Indonesia moving its capital from Jakarta to Borneo?

Jakarta is congested, polluted, prone to earthquakes and rapidly sinking into the Java Sea. Now the government is in the process of leaving, moving Indonesia’s capital to the island of Borneo.

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Governments should spend on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

While there are a lot of people who agree that the government should allocate its budget to railways, I disagree because I think roads are more efficient compared to railways. Roads can approach small areas and are easier to maintain. Plus, roads will also cost less in terms of construction. On the other hand, railways are less flexible because building them will cause high expenses and will take a long time.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because the will able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been argued that there will be a decreasing trend in buying the hardcopy of newspaper or books because the presence of online resource that do not need any cost to access. I do agree with such an argument because of two primary reasons, that the online books offers easier access compared to physical books and the unlimited amount of free-resource available in the internet.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positve or a negative development?

Nowadays, society believes that many children have spent most of their time in a day using phones, whether it is smartphones or androids. This phenomenon happens probably because of the lack of parents invigilation and less of outdoor activities provided by the school. Personally, I think this issue brings more negative development than positive ones dealing with children's character building and health problems.

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