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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?

Nowadays, building careers and education have become more widespread due to the fact that more and more people want to succeed in these fields. However, reaching success could be different for different people, and for me. success is a feeling of satisfaction and making a positive impact on society.

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Anyone can use a mobile phone to answer/make work calls or home calls at any place 7 days a week. Do you think this development has more positive effects or negative effects on the individual and society?

In this day and age, with the development of smart phones to make human's life more convenient and easier, there are also have some drawbacks. From my personal perspective, i belive that the disadvantages are insufficient to outweigh the advantages, and this essay shall elaborate on the rationale.

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some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualifications. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary milieu, a contentious discourse persists as to whether university scholars ought to exclusively dedicate their energies to their principal academic pursuits. By the same token, some contend that an unwavering commitment to academic specialization remains a sine qua non for success. Conversely, others assert that the burgeoning exigencies of the job market necessitate a more heterogeneous skill set. This essay undertakes a meticulous exploration of this topic.

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many television news programmes show pictures of events in the news which people find upsetting. While television has a duty to report important news, it should not bring disturbing images into people’s homes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Obtaining employment for high school students who want to give up studying has always been an issue. This could have a negative effect on the young person, such as mental health problems. Furthermore, society will also see a decline in educated adults, leading to the decrease of qualified personnel. In my opinion, the government should motivate companies to employ students by, for instance, assisting in paying their wages.

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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that children, until they become adults, have to work without any salary to help their city. This essay totally disagrees with that statement. I believe that teenagers already have many things to do , and they have to enjoy them during their free time and holidays. And then, I think that it can be dangerous for them to work while they are still children.

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These days, more and more people like to use their favourite social media websites to get the latest news and learn about what is happening around the world. This leads to confusion and the spread of misinformation more than ever. Why do you think that social media is not a good source of news? What can be done to educate people about the danger of spreading misinformation on their social media?

People are willing to use social media instead of the conventional media to get the latest news and updates thanks to the internet. Despite the unsecure information, which is needed to approve, user number of social media platforms are getting increase day by day. Therefore, this approach leads to confusion and rampant of misinformation. In this essay, I try to give some examples why social media is not a good source of news and how can we educate people about risk of misinformation on their timeline.

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Some people consider that price is the most important thing when buying a product or a service. Do you agree or disagree?

When people buy something they think the most important thing is product prices nowadays. In this essay, I will discuss and give my opinion in this respect. I agree with this general trend because of the Covid-19 and Ukranian vs Russian war the global economy has been facing an economic crisis.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Art has been debated in many ways since mankind began to think about what is the ideal curriculum for children's education. Many people believe that art is a very necessary object to educate children, while others believe that it's wasting time. Overall, in this essay, I will have a discussion on both views and share my point of view in the relevant aspect. In my opinion, art is an essential factor in the educational life of the children.

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Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Technology plays an important role in modern society. In some people’s eyes the influence of technology over our lives is beneficial and yet to others it is harmful. This essay will discuss both sides of the discussion and I will offer my own perspective on this complex issue.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Groups of individuals claim that experts, like medical practitioners and engineers, should use their expertise in the country where they got their skills and knowledge. However, other groups that they should be entitled to work in every country if they want. I completely agree with the second group, and I will explain the reasons behind both ideas in this essay.

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Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is this a positive or negative development?

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In the past , when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantah5 and disadvantages of this development

In the earlier time, students used to complete their degree in their own nation, but recently the trend to study in different nations has raised. It has both side which can be beneficial and harmful, this essay will discuss both the side where merits outweigh the demerits.

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Climate change is a phenomenon that affects countries all over the world. Many people strongly believe that it is the responsibility of individuals, rather than corporations and governments, to deal with this problem. To what extent do you agree?

Climate change represents a major threat to life on Earth. While some people argue that individuals should be responsible for this, I believe that not only them but also other corporations and governments should be in charge of tackling this issue.

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Some people say that those who are selfish and does not care about others are more likely to success at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that it is comparatively easier to become successful in the workplace if people are selfish and careless about others, while I have an adverse opinion. Details of my viewpoint will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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Social media is gradually replacing in-person face-to-face contact with many people worldwide. Do the benefits of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

the modern era, their is no doubt that social news is getting popular day by day and also replace face to face contact with people. In this essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of the social media and also my thoughts.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that parents should teach their offspring how to be good members of society, while others are of the opinion that school is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the practical experiences that parents give their children, school lessons can give deep insights into what it takes to be good citizens.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some think that parents should teach their offsprings to become a model citizen of society, while others think that schools is a better place to learn about this. Although parents spend more time with their children, I believe teachers have more skills since they are professionals in helping students learn.

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spending money for protecting species is awaste money by some, do you agree or disagree

For the last two or three decades, there has been a big debate on the topic whether is it beneficial to save animals. Some folks believe spending money on them is not significant while others are opposed to it. However, I agree with the given statement due to several possible reasons such as maintaining the ecosystem and economic benefits and the following paragraphs will expatiate both stances with lucid examples.

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People are starting to think that the idea of having a single career is an old fashioned one and that having several part-time jobs is better. Do the benefits outweigh the disadvantage?

Nowadays, the idea of having many part-time jobs has altered an individual's attitude to work in one place only. From my standpoint, I maintain the same viewpoint, perceiving that there are more advantages than disadvantages of this concept such as having a fascinating work environment as well as the opportunity to get more salary.

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

In life, happiness has been considered as very necessary. This word is difficult to define as a result of being abstract. Many factors are crucial to achieve it.

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