IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 475

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. They think all health problems can just be “fixed” by visiting doctors. What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved.

Healthcare is one of the most paramount affairs to discuss because of its correlation with human being’s existence. Nowadays, doctors have been placed as the main figure for people in solving their health issues, so seldom have people thought about maintaining it by themselves. This essay will address two possible problems caused by this phenomenon as well as its potential solutions.

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most people believe that social media such as facebook and instagram negatively impact society band individual. to wat extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

social apps trend has been increased by our new generation as technology provided us easy access to explore any place with some clicks in order to gain some information about them. However some people argue that using different social websites brings some negative consequences, and I also agree with those individuals due to the negative impact of these sites on mental health as well as reduced face-to-face interaction and communication skills.

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Most people believe that social media such as Facebook and Instagram negatively impact society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

social apps trend has been increased by our new generation as technology provided us easy access to explore any place by some clicks in order to gain some information about them. But some people argue that using different social websites bring some negative consequences, and I also agree with those individuals due to negative impact of these sites on mental health as well as reduced face to face interaction and communication skills.

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Libraries are a waste of money, therefore, computers should be used to replace them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Across the globe, with the advancement in technology, people's lives have become so easy and comfortable to do anything from any place. However, some people think that libraries are a waste of money as there are only old types of books available and no spare time to sit in the library to read books. Moreover, the computer plays a crucial role in everybody's lives because it is easy to access anywhere and saves time. In my opinion, computer helps a lot more than libraries.

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Social media helps people to keep in touch with friends and stay on top of news and events. Do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Using Social media, individuals these days, keep themselves informed of the latest information and events around them, while at the same time keeping in close contact with their friends and family members. In my opinion, I believe the advantages brought by social media of increased convenience and effectiveness far outweigh any minor shortcomings that it might bring.

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Nowadays, most countries improve their living standards through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?

These days , majority of the nations worldwide emphasize improving economic development to enhance the standards of living for their citizens, but in doing so numerous social values are lost as a result. In my opinion, I think the benefits brought by economic development do not hold water against the damage caused to its societal values and affect on the environment.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Although women account for more than 50 per cent of the workforce in developed nations, a number of managerial positions are still occupied by men. Some believe that a certain proportion of these vacancies should be allocated to females. This essay, however, strongly disagrees with this statement because this can discourage qualified men to work hard, and such a policy can encourage organisations to find some wrong ways to outsmart the system.

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In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave during the first month after the birth of the newborn. Do you think the advantages of maternity leave outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a policy that female workers can have at least one month of maternity leave after giving birth in many countries. Some people believe that this is beneficial for women and their babies, while other people deem that maternity leave may also cause certain issues. I am convinced that this break has more benefits than drawbacks.

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have Children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for the couple who decide to do this.

Nowadays, the popularity, of not becoming parents, is rising among wedded couples. Although not raising children could positively impact income as well as the ease of life, there is a threat, to the country, of not having enough youngsters to rely on for its future. Another major drawback could be the loneliness in the last stage of life for people with such an ideology.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

One of the fastest growing solutions for obtaining education, especially during the recent Covid-19 pandemic, is homeschooling. Through the years, people have been developing ways to effectively educate the next generation from the home to the formal school environment. In the past few decades, home study had become a formal way of acquiring diplomas for primary, secondary, and even higher levels of education. Like any other forms of education, homeschooling has some benefits and limitations.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by ‎almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this ‎disturbing trend.‎

In the recent years, there is an increased incidence of obesity,especially among the pediatric age group in the west and it has been estimated that that percentage of overweight children has been increased by 20% in the last decade. It is quite alarming and the reason and effets of this disturbing trend is discussed below

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, there has been a big debate about the freedom of the artists. Some opine that the government should not interfair with their work while others are opposed to it. Nevertheless, I agree with this statement upto some extent due to particular reasons namely it might hurt individuals beliefs and the following paragraphs will expatiate with lucid examples.

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As global trade increases, many goods, including those we use on a daily basis, are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distances. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

These days, many products including the daily basis ones are manufactured in different countries and must be carried from long distances, as worldwide trade increases. There are several reasons why I believe that the shortcomings do not outweigh its benefits.

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Nowadays, parents put a lot of pressure on children. What are the reasons for parents doing that? Is it a positive or negative development for children?

In the contemporary era, a growing number of parents are pressuring on their children to be successful and make them proud. There are still heated debates about whether it is a positive or negative development. In my opinion, I believe that this notion has both benefits and drawbacks.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in.

More people are becoming curios about the background story of the house or building they live in. It happens in some countries, especially in countries who have several histories and their people have more concerns about it. In this essay, I will share my thoughts about this phenomenon.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today's world, computers become the basic need for humans. These days, it is required for several institutions to provide computers in order to develop teaching processes. However, some people believe that computers have a negative impact if students are continuously using them. In this essay, I am going to examine this case from both viewpoints in the paragraph below.

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Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sport clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion.

Employers always struggle to find ways to increase their employees' productivity. Subsidizing health programs is one way to pursue such a goal. There are arguments on this matter, which we will discuss here.

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Children these days are using gadgets like smartphones and tablets from an early age for both entertainment and education. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Technological progress is evolving at a rapid pace, causing changes in our everyday lives. Now gadgets have become widespread, and have been used by people of all ages, however, children are more interested in these new devices, using them for entertainment and education. I believe that the advantages of that outweigh the disadvantages, because it could help young people digest new information more effectively, but it also requires strict parents control.

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As compared to the past, children these days spend more of their leisure time indoors with computers and TV and less time outdoors. Describe some of the problems this lack of outdoor leisure time can cause and suggest at least one possible solution.

To commence with, there are several positive things to give free offspring. Firstly, they can easily learn new things very easily and with proper knowledge and guidance they become a good citizen. Secondly, it is not only beneficial for their parents but also for the country's economy will be boosted very easily. Thirdly, children can achieve any goal they want to achieve in their lives. For instance, the majority of children want to become sports person but their parents are not allowed therefore they do not become sports person.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, climate change has been one of the most controversial polemics in communities. Some believe that we should embrace the change while others believe there must be actions to prevent it. From my perspective, climate transition must be controlled which I elaborate more in the following.

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