IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 475

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Wild animals have no use in the 21st century and trying to preserve animals now is just a waste of money. To what extent do agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is sometime argued that it is pointless to spend money defending wild animals. I personally disagree with this conviction and will support my argument in the essay below.

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More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is negative or positive development?

Lots of individuals these days reside in small space home or dwells with no outdoor area. In my ,opinion this is a negative development. living in a small space leads to congestion and invites health problems like breathing disorders, irritability and so on as there is no air or ventilation . life also becomes tedious if humans live in these areas.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the University where you studied. He would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email describe where you lived when you were a student at the University, recommend the best way for him to look for accommodation, warn him of the mistakes students make when choosing accommodation.

I hope you and your family are well by the grace of the Almighty. I'm thrilled to hear that you've got an offer to the University of Toronto for your master's degree in supply chain management.

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Social media has many positive uses, but there have been some negative consequences to it as well. Identify a problem caused by social media and describe the solutions you would propose to address this problem.

Nowadays, social media is popular. There is no doubt that there are good users and bad users, but a lot of people have been negative use, so in this essay, I will discuss the main causes, such as no days for young adults who don't want their life, as result of social media, however, I will suggest some solutions to this problem.

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some people think that government westing money in art what extent to agree or disgree?

I am strongly showing my interest in the BSc (Hons) Computer Science (Top-Up) course at the University of Hertfordshire because I think this course will not only boost my career but also increase my existing skills to reach Earth on the moon. The motivation of my learning abilities inspired me to study this course and it will enhance my knowledge. My abilities in critical thinking, good grasping power, time management, ability to learn different things and many more motivate me to take an interest in this course. Moreover, there are various reasons behind this for choosing this course I think computer science is the study of computation, information and automation which is very useful for me.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

It is a fact that junk foods have dominated our eating style and this resulted in more health issues have appeared. Authorities are doing their best to eliminate such habits but I think the major role is on consumers themselves. I totally disagree with increasing the tax on junk food as we have other solutions that can tackle this unhealthy habit which will be mentioned below.

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Develop habit of exercise among students by showing sports programmes on TV or should show other ways to encourage them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 250 words

In today's increasingly sedentary world, encouraging students to develop a habit of exercise is of paramount importance for their overall well-being. This essay will examine two contrasting approaches: the utilization of sports programs on television and the implementation of alternative strategies. Subsequently, I will present my opinion on the matter. Television Sports Programs as a Tool: One argument in favor of using sports programs on TV as a means to promote exercise among students is that they can serve as a source of inspiration. Televised sports events often showcase athletes' extraordinary skills, dedication, and the thrill of competition. This visual representation can stimulate an interest in sports and motivate students to participate. Additionally, sports programs on TV provide a convenient and accessible way for students to learn about different sports. Exposure to a variety of sports can introduce them to new activities they may not have considered before, potentiall...

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In the future people may not long be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not to be happy to give up using cash?

Some years later, using money to purchase merchandise or services may not be regular for everyone, so they perhaps, alter payment by online application on their phone or credit card. In my opinion, it will not be far from our expectation, besides some of them may be unpleasant due to lack of cash.

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Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that many people believe that destitution is one of the root causes of offence. While I acknowledge that serious crimes can be committed because of various factors and reasons, Therefore Most less serious crimes are caused by penury and worse life conditions.

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some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research

More and more people from all around the world are willing to find out about the history behind the house or building they live in. There are many reasons given to explain this strange wish. Firstly, learning about the history of their house teaches people to appreciate the place they live in. When people truly understand the true meanings or intentions of a place, they will learn to love that place not just for the beautiful scenery or modern faculties, but for the actual sentimental value that it holds. That is what brings people peace and joy. Secondly, people may find items or things that could be financially beneficial. When you dig deep into a house's history, there is a percentage that your house is associated with a historical event and there could be hidden items remaining from that time that could bring you a fortune. For example, there was a YouTube video of people who were researching their house's history and they found out that there was a piece of actual Jerusalem in ...

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¬Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Part of human believe that the legal age for marriage is 21. I totally disagree with this statement. In my point of view, human at this age lack at comitment and low financial.

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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

There are people who believe that doing their job at their own place it would be way better than driving to office every time. In my point of view, the drawback of working from home are more than the benefits.

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The government should not waste money on arts as the same money would be better spent on p projects like sanitation or infrastructure. Do you agree to this statement

There is a general discussion regarding the architectural developments done by the government. The majority of the people say that this is a complete waste of money, I differ from this statement as these changes are vital for a country to grow.

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Young people are often influenced in their behaviors by others in the same age group. Some argue that peer pressure is important while others feel it has distinct disadvantages. Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?

The young generations tend to follow what their peers in the same generation are keen on. Some people insist that this trend is meaningful, while others claim that it has a detrimental impact. From my perspective, this tendency would cause more serious problems, even though it can bring some benefits.

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Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion.

There are those who support the death penalty as pertinent for criminals who commit violent crime, while others believe it to be intolerable in modern-day society. In my opinion, although the death penalty is perhaps the ultimate deterrent to recurring crime, there are more drawbacks than benefits.

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Some people believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor spaces. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people have a differing ideas about the importance of investing a large quantity of money in the construction of outdoor places or offices. I completely agree with this statement due to a huge benefits of this such as reducing anxiety and interacting with much more people around.

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Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A number of individuals argue that celebrities personal live should not be clearly expoby the socail media. However, I persially agree with the statement and believe that this phenomenon may cause various drawbacks, which will be explon in this essay.

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It is believed that students at schools and universities can learn better via technology rather than with teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some have strong believe that the technology will taught better than the lecturer at school. However, I disagree with this notion.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do vou agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a country that uses a language other than own one, can develop both social and practical issues among people. I completely agree with the given statement and here I will explain it in a more detailed manner.

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Some people think that mental strength is more important for success in sport. Some believe physical health is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

There is an ongoing debate regarding the skills necessary for atheletes to possess in order to succeed in sports. Many find their mental stamina is the key in sports while others argue that their fitness matters more. In this essay, I will discuss both views and present my own opinion at the end.

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