IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 482

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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"Many people believe that young people today are not as polite and respectful as they were in the past. What do you think are the reasons for this? What can be done to encourage young people to be more respectful and polite?"

Unquestionably, the environment in modern society has been affecting the behaviours of juveniles. The values of society have changed the perspectives of children, especially adolescents, with respect and obedience towards their elders such as impolite words or furious expressions. Consequently, the youth of today seem to be not as polite and respectful as they used to be in the past.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Living is a dynamic cycle-process as part of human being. Because of that, there are several options that come across to our life because life is always changing.These days, some people assume that we have many options for ourselves. I do partly agree with this perspective and will give and explain the following reasons.

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City planners tend to arrange schools, homes ,shops and offices in specific areas and separate them from each other . Do you think the advantage overweight the disadvantage?

In some cities` planes, architects are keen to separate between life sections like homes, shops, and offices and build them in different spaces. This essay will describe the negative points of these designs ,and how they overweight the positive points.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that good health is the key to a happy life. Usually, an individual's well being is linked with his nutrition intake, work-outs and a peceful mind. I belong to India, and in my country, people need to make concious effort to get to the desired state of health. In this essay, I will explain with examples some of the measures that citizens of my country need take to stay in shape.

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According to most projections, the world’s population will continue to rise, until it plateaus at 9 to 11 billion in the latter part of the 21st century. Without a doubt, population growth represents the largest problem facing humanity at present. Do you agree that this is the greatest issue faced by us today?

It can be seem that due to inflation in rate of population, the servival of common people is becoming harder day by day. In relation, I am also agree that there are alot of problems that are rising in align to the growth of population.

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According to most projections, the world’s population will continue to rise, until it plateaus at 9 to 11 billion in the latter part of the 21st century. Without a doubt, population growth represents the largest problem facing humanity at present. Do you agree that this is the greatest issue faced by us today?

Due to improvements in the medical field and technology, day by day the amount of birth get advancing compared to the death rate that causes overpopulation population. Most projections believe that it increase between 9 to 11 billion at the end of the 21st century and could be the biggest problem for humans. In this , an essay I explain the reasons why I totally agree with it.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many countries with more wealth usually give money to the countries with less development or very little wealth however it still does not find the solution to their poverty thus developed countries should give another type of support to the poor countries instead of helping them by giving money.This essay completely agrees with that statement. This is because it will make the poor country dependent on wealthier countries additionally the dependency will cause people to have no jobs

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. · What do you think the causes are? · What solutions can you suggest?

There is no doubt that traffic are becoming one of the pollition for a lot of center or huge towns, which are usually coming from the increaseingly numbers of cars drivers. In this essay , I will discuss the reasons of this problem and suggest some solutions that might help to reduce its horrible impact on people and cities.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

Language is the best way of communication. However, it is seen that many languages are getting disappearing in this modern era. There are people who believe that it will be convenient if there are fewer languages across the globe. I also support this opinion to a greater extent.

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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some people that health care and education ought to be financed by governments while others assert that governments are free from these responsibilities. These services may be beneficial for regular citizens’ status if they are assumed by the government. Looking at this case from the other side, if governments do not receive taxes, this situation may harm them in long term.

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In many countries tradition of having family meals together is disappearing. Why is this happening? Wha will the effects of this be on the family and society?

Nowadays, majority of people do not tend to get together for family meals in many countries.

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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

fossil fuel plays a crucial role in providing electricity, powering industry and transport, nonetheless, the fuel source is non-renewable energy, and thus, in near ,future we might run out of it. the essay will discuss methods to save these resources, and will briefly examine the possible alternatives to fossil fuels.

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In many developing countries, children work in some form to bring in necessary income from an early age. In the first world, many people think this is damaging and wrong but others would argue that their work brings them a sense of contributing, belonging and responsibility. What is your opinion?

Having children who get involved in some works could be found in many developing countries. Some people consider children are not supposed to have sort of responsibility. In my opinion, this would bring a positive and negative side, which I will elaborate more below.

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In many countries, school children are required to wear school uniforms. Do you think this should be enforced in all school?

Today,There are a lot of school in the world,and also in allmost countires,students are required to wear school uniforms.However some school do not have school uniform.I think this should be enforced in all school.This essay will show you why I think so that and give some reasons.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

There is currently a contentious argument over whether foods and beverages with huge sugar content should cost more to aid people to buy less ). I totally agree with this opinion because products that contain a large amount of sugar leads to health issues, and people will not pay more to buy those products.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is that the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the past 20years our world has become more digitalised which has changed what children own and how they spend their time. Owning a smartphone has become the new normal for minors as well as access to digital content. This may have an effect on their imagination and behaviour.

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important thing to consider. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

many individuals believe that the primary consideration when choosing a post is money,

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Some cities create housing for their growing population by providing taller buildings. Other cities create housing by building on wider areas of land. Which solution is better?

Vertical expansion of buildings has been implemented by some cities as a way of tackling the housing shortage issue, while some others choose horizontal cities. From my perspective, although each has its own merits, I think enlarging the living space on a horizontal scale is a better solution.

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The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree?

Technology plays an important role in today's younger generation and they have contributed the most to recent modifications. In my opinion, today's kids play a vital role in the development of such technology.

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Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people argue that early education could bring benefits to children. Meanwhile, others believe that sending kids over 7 years old who are more developed to school is more advantageous. In this essay, I will analyze both opinions and express my personal point of view.

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