IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1508

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The modern world is filled with all kinds of temptations, and without the strictness or self discipline, people can easily be spoiled and become a burden for the society. Unfortunately, people are not born with these characteristics, but they can only gather them by starting training from a very young age. There are two schools of thought about this matter. Many people believe that teachers should be responsible for educating children about self-discipline, while others insist that parents should be the one in charge. This essay will discuss both point of views and conclude with a personal opinion on teaching self discipline to children.

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Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that some commentators argue that schools should praise those who achieve the best grades, while other people think that it is more significant to give encouragement to pupils who make a great improvement in their studies. While the highest achievers deserve rewards, I believe that it is more necessary for children who make a great improvement to receive recognition for their effort.

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Some feel that it is a waste of time to plan for the future and it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people are of the opinion that one should concentrate on present and ignore the future planning believing its a time consuming activity. I completely disagree with the above said idea as planning for upcoming scenario provides direction to life and ensures financial and health stability.

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Some deem that job pleasure is more important than job security. In contrast, others think that having a stable job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people hold different views about their job. Some argue that job gratification is much more important than job security, while others think that otherwise is true. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and explain why I believe feeling satisfied with job takes precedence over a secured job

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In some countries, schools arrange work for some students without any payment, so that students get experience. To what extent it is beneficial for the students as well as the company or institution?

Nowadays, in many nations, students are being provided work opportunities by school that are unpaid so that they can gather first-hand experience. I believe that this exposure has multifarious pros in spite of cons which I shall elucidate in this essay.

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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. DO the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the past decades, it has been observed that electronic books have become a major reading device. As the technology is increasingly prevalent, its downside has turned out to become a matter of concern. While its disadvantages may deserve public attention, we should acknowledge that e-book usage has become an indispensable part of our daily lives.

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More and more people want to own items, such as cars, clothing and other things, that are made by famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

In recent years around the world public running behind the brands in every aspect of their basic needs. The want project them self in the society as a branded icon. In this process they are ignoring the fact of loosing hard earning money and vanishing the small scale industries producing best quality products. In my opinion ruining behind famous brands had lot of negative rather than positive.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that community service is one of the most important activities that every school provides for their students. Many might say that community service should be canceled from the school system. In fact, these activities should be mandatory because it improves children's life skills, social skills, and guides their future career.

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Children are now facing educational, social, and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures can be taken to reduce them?

The fact that students are pressurised in every possible spectrum of their lives by various factors such as education, social and commercial. And this is mainly because of constant comparison. They are made to be a part of the rat race willing or unwilling by their parents, schools and peers. The essay below delves into this phenomenon and highlights the reasons that give rise to it and the correct measures to deal with it.

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Buying fashionable clothes is wasteful because people do not need new clothes all the time .Clothing should be bought and used more wisely. do you agree?

attire must be bought and wear smart as purchasing a trendy piece of clothing is wasteful because the masses do not require fresh clothing every time. On the whole I do believe that clothes can be repeated multiple times but in certain ,circumstances it is not acceptable.

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Sport is becoming a business. More and more companies are getting involved in sporting events. Do you think that it is a positive or negative development ?

At the present day, plenty of sports are popular in the part of interesting from all generations and have numerous directions to access for the citizens. While most people believe a lot of businesses are becoming sponsors of any the kind of sports. However, Other people think that is a negative decision of the facet. In my view, I firmly trust that it a useful idea to encourage sports.

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Sport is becoming a business. More and more companies are getting involved in sporting events. Do you think that it is a positive or negative development ?

At the present day, The plenty of sports are popular in the part of interesting from all generations and have numerous directions to access for the citizens. While most people belive a lot of business are becoming to sponsers of any sports. However, Other people think that is negative decision of the facet. In my view, I firmly trust that it the useful idea to encourage the sports.

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In some parts of the world it is becoming increasingly popular to try to find about family history. Is this a negative or positive development?

Science and technology have made great advances in every field. Nowadays it is seen that people are interested to know about the family history of their partner before committing to each other. I personally think that it is a positive development.

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In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution and give your own opinion?

Traffic congestion is a wildly problem in city, particulary in developing country. Increasing the private car tax and investing in public transportation seem to be the answer of this problem. From my view, I partial agree that this solution will reduce the amout of car on the road because the effect with cost of living and economic issues must be considered.

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With the increasing population and growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty places. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

Day by day population is increasing which is causing urbanization and destroying forests. This is causing a lot of problems such as countries are losing their natural beauty, real climate and increasing pollution. It is also affecting a country’s economy by decreasing the number of tourists. There are several solutions that are recommended by experts, and I will discuss them in the following paragraphs.

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It is said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are thirty as this is best both for individuals and society. Do you agree or disagree.

It is often argued that the best age to get married is before thirty that is also good for society and people. According to my opinion, i agree with this statement due to the reason of moral support and happiest life after getting married.

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Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, there has been an ongoing discussion about whether saving money for rainy days is necessary or not.However many people prefer to spend money and not to save. In this essay, I will examine the core reasons why the above statement has been said.

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Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?

movie stars and famous musicians may make high incomes and have a luxurious lifestyle. However, some people think that they may not happy with their own livings. As far as I concern, I strongly believe in this statement for several reasons which will be discussed in this essay.

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Government spend a lot of money on public celebration such as national holiday and public festival. Some people say that government must spend money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree

The promt claims that authorities utilize much of their financial resources on public celebrations and festivals. Some are of the opinion that they should spent money on much more necessary things. I completely agree with the above said idea as financial assistance is much needed for hospitals development and building education centres.

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Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Globalisation has overruled the market in present era. A section of society opines to go for domestic merchandise however another set of general masses desires multinational production. This essay partially agress With the above nation and the points will be bolstered in upcoming paragraphs.

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