IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1504

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Recently, there have been a lot of discussions about health and whether it is going to improve or not. In my opinion, I think that people will become unhealthier in the future than they are now. There are many reasons that support the idea of people becoming unhealthy in the future. Firstly, one reason is that of food. People tend to eat more fast food nowadays. They tend to treat themselves with sweets and chocolate whenever they want. This appears to be because people are busier now than they used to be. So, people don’t have a chance to cook or even learn the art of cookery. Also, having a lot of unhealthy food can lead to obesity and it could be a serious issue in the future. Another reason is that technology is developing everyday. Young people enjoy buying new gadgets and the latest devices. This has a negative impact on their health, especially when they enjoy video games. Spending long hours looking at a screen can lead to bad eyesight and obesity as well...

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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many communities think that extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are unsafe and dangerous and they must be prohibited. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this view for many reasons.

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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Some people argue that government is misusing the government funds on the arts and they should use the funds to invest some other areas. This essay totally agrees with that statement. I believe that government should invest funds on roads and transport which will benefit people more than using the funds on the arts which does not offer much revenue, social and economic benefits .

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent

It is argued that parenting skills should be taught to every young person in their school itself. I agree that school is the best place for the youth to start learning the skills involved to become a good parent. This essay discusses how an institution can impart the virtues of taking care without expectations and putting other's needs before yours, thus making you a great guardian.

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Humans are social animals. So, socialization are needed for people. But, nowadays, people are hardly finding places for relaxation in metropolitan cities. To keep this view in mind, I strongly disagree with the point of replacing the parks for some other purposes. This essay will examine the topic in detail with relevant examples in the following paragraphs.

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urban areas nowadays are witnessing obesity among children. What are the causes and solution of this problem acoording to you? Ang suggest some solutions.

In today's world, youngsters are suffering from health issues such as fatness. The weight gain problems by children is continuously increasing due to poor eating habits. As this issue can be tackled by some appropriate measures, that will be discussed by me in upcoming paragraphs.

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Entertainment such as electronic games on portal devices is harmful for individuals and the society they live in. Do you agree or disagree?

At the present day, There are numerous types of games which are avialable for peple that also a useful entertainment to use for benefical leisure time. I strongly disagree with the statement because games have a benefical advantageous in many parts such as make more increaseing idea to solve this problem with the each stage in the contents and citizens are relaxed from spend the quality time in games.

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"Prevention is better than cure."Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

"avoidance is the best than medication."Out of a city strong cost, a large ratio should be diverted from regimen to using on strong learn as well as preventative part.

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents' home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development?

In a vast number of countries across globe young individuals choose to leave their parents' home after schooling and start their personal living arrangements with their near and dears ,this kind of trend has mixed effects, in my opinion, depending on the person and circumstances under which one decides to leave the above-mentioned arrangements,I am going to discuss both sides of the issue in this essay.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.

In selected countries, some people make an immense amount of income. There has been an ongoing debate whether the benefits of it outweighs, or government should intervene and limit the sum of money people make. This essay will elucidate both sides of the argument as well as a subjective opinion.

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The increasing housing problem in big cities has social consequences. Some people say that only government can solve this problem.

These days, the density of houses has dramatically increased, especially in the urban cities, which results in social implications including physical and mental health problems and being harmful to the environment. Someones tend to believe that these consequences can be alleviated by only the government. In my opinion, I strongly agree that the government plays a crucial role in urbanization as follows.

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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

Nowadays our population is getting bigger and new parents have their own ways of taking care of their children. Because of that, many of us arguing in overall who do a better job raising our children the mother or father. In this ,essay i will express my opinion regarding this issue. First, I believe that all parents want the best for their children it only depends on the level of society where they belong.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Teenager can learn a lot through working in community in their free time. Many people believe that this can be advantageous to the community and the childrer because services like picking up garbage, helping elders can teach teenages to keep the place clean and tidy, and to respects their their elder. I believe , however , that they should be paid for their work and time rather than doing for free.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinino? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children.

Learning the difference between right ans wromg at early age is vital for children. Some people think penalty is essentail to help them learn this discirmination. This eassy disagree with this idea because parents and teachers can use other ways to teach appropriate conduct to children.

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

In the past, people use to do shopping only for their functional necessities. However, nowadays modern people has made shopping as the leisure activity. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive and negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one’s own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

With the development of technology, it is now possible for people to study the history of their ancestors. There are several rationales that encourage modern citizens to conduct this research. In my perspective, I assume that this may be a breakthrough movement of human beings to identify their roots. In this essay, I shall put forth some ideas to exemplify this positive development with some lucid examples.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

However in this eassy, i am fully agree with second statment about undevelop

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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

First impression is very important to someone who doesn't know you. All companies have their unique dress code for their emloyees to follow. Most of people think that companies will appreciate their employees who dress smartly rathan their work performance. In my opinion, we should all value people who dress smartly at work as work as their work performance.

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Now a day many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive and a negative development?

In Contemporary era, Preference for Brands is seen to be proliferating. In recent times, many people are interested in purchasing Clothes, Cars and Other products of eminent brands. This could be mainly done either to maintain social status in the society or one is influenced by an external source. In my opinion, I believe that this change can have various negative effects on society.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays, many objects in our world have been changed such as fashion, jobs and especially human’s interests. In some countries, many house owners want to aware several historical information about their capital. I will look for reasons of this action and find answer to solve their problem.

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