IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1534

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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ome working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Parents who are busy earning to support their family in fininacial needs requires supports when it comes down to taking care of their young ones therefore, leaving them with two options either seeking grandparents support or paying the childcare centres to replace the busy parents. Personally, in my opinion it is better to choose a day care centre for their babies.

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People will buy a product if it has quality or fulfill their needs. There is no need for advertisement and considered as a form of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

It is widely believed that advertisement serves no purpose as people purchase brands according to their needs. But, I completely disagree with this statement. According to ,me propaganda provide information about the new and upcoming production in the advertise. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain how advertisements at times help to form better choices about the products.

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As well as making money, business have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

Business can play a vital role in modern society. Apart from the high profit, I agree that business undertake a heavy social responsibility.

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These days in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

The number of people who aim to choose to teach in a secondary school as their career is certainly declining in the current era. This essay will discuss the potential reasons for such drop followed by the solutions to tackle this problem.

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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

Some believe that the developed countries should offer asssistance in terms of food and education. While others assert that the poor nations should be independant and tackle the issues on their own. This essay will analyse both the perspectives with relevant examples.

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Giving Detail information of Crime in Newspaper and on television has bad consequences, some suggest that government should impose some restriction on them. What extent you agree or disagree?

In recent times crime rate have escalated beyond it's limit. There is a school of thought who thinks that by providing every aspects of offenses in newspaper or television can lead to adverse situations. Some people have given opinion that government should apply some rules on that. I agree with this thought completly and I will shed my views in this essay.

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The differences between countries are becoming less and less evident, as people all over the world wear the same fashions, use the same brands, have similar eating habits and watch the same TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

As majority of the people across the globe prefer to put on the same style of clothes, use the same brands, watch the same entertainment channels, and have similar eating habits, the variance amongst all the countries is significantly reduced. The benefits of this trend is that people do not feel distinguished from others where ever they travel across the world . Moreover, they do not have to compromise for the things of their choices.

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Many researches show that overeating can have negative effects and people believe that advertising of certain foods should be banned, in the same way that some countries banned advertising of cigarettes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Majority of the researches proves that consuming food in excessive amounts can lead to negative consequences and several individuals say that specific food items should not be allowed to broadcast, like few countries they prohibited advertising cigarettes. I totally agree with this as some food products and overeating, both can cause obesity, however, advertising those food products should also proclaim the quantity to be eaten.

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Some people think that criminal behaviour can have genetic reasons, while others believe that only circumstances can lead some people to crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Few individuals believe that criminal acts could be hereditary, but others consider that only situations could cause some people to commit an offensive act. On one hand, certain psychological disorders that are genetically transmitted can provoke that individual to commit crime. On the other hand, circumtances such as poverty and unemployment triggers people to perform an unlawful act.

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Many animals species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Never has the topic concerning that protection of extinct animals failed to attract our attention. However, when it comes to whether protecting animals or paying attention to human beings, people hold divergent views. Some people are adamant that focusing on the public social issues is beneficialprior to animals protection.From my perspective, the two views are mutually exclusive.

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Some people prefer to work in large companies or organizaons. Others prefer to start their own companies and work for themselves. Which appeals to you more-working for a big company or managing your own business? Use speci!c reasons and examples to explain your answer

Working in a large company gives you the leverage on big projects which are major societal issues. Similarly, if one wants to start a business and to become their own boss they need to consider the following factors.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Human intervention is the main cause of decreasing animal and plant species. Numerous nations are facing a huge loss in animal and plant life as a result of human activities. This essay will discuss major reasons for this decline and will provide possible solutions.

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Technology generates language translation software's which leads decrease in importance of learning more different languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There are some people who hold the opinion that the advent of advanced translators as a result of technology declines the necessity of learning foreign languages. This is a belief which can be strongly supported as will be discussed below.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, while some countries include a number of older people, some nations show the opposite trend when the young population takes a higher proportion in the population pyramid. This trend brings many benefits but it is quite obvious that young population triggers more drawbacks.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, while some countries reveal the increasing ageing population, several nations show the opposite trend when young people make up a higher proportion in the population pyramid in comparison with the elderly. This status brings about several undeniable benefits, but it is quite obvious that young population triggers more drawbacks.

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Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Actors and musicians who have earned fame and success are believed to enjoy glamorous life. Whereas, some people opine that reverse is the case. As there have been many speculation regarading this. I do also think that even though money and fame enables them to live a grand life, there are some amongst them who are not happy in thier personal lives. I would give explanation to my point of view in the comining paragraphs.

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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, A huge number of gyms are available near by every community for the purpose of promoting the fitness and healthy life style, but despite of all these measures, most of the population still prefers to lead the sedentary life. Passive life is leading to many health issues and has been impacting the quality of life. There are many problems are related to this and has some resolution which can be adapt by the general population. I will depicts all the problems and solutions in the following paragraphs.

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the midst of this technology-driven global world, internet plays an important role in everyone's life. Nowadays, an increasing number of individuals depends on internet for reading news, however, the majority of people rely on traditional newspapers for reading news. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this view, and I think more and more people are moving to technology-based news providers because of its advantages like accessibility, convenience, etc.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Most students suffers from the lack of concentration at the school thesedays.The electronic beams coming from the electronic devices is one of the primary cause of this issue. This problem can be solved by increasing the students awareness about the negative impact of using these devices for a long time on their mental abilities.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages?

Many people work long hours leaving very little time for leisure activities, this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages.

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