IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1649

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. "Do you think" the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?"

To begin with, every student has a dream which is being a student of one of the top rank school for their future. This issue brings new requirements such as moving another country. It is undeniable that the benefical effects of living abroad overpower the detrimental ones. And, this essay agrees with the merits and provides relevant explanation.

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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from their own country rather than imports from overseas. WHat are your opinion about this.

There is currently a contentious argument over whether stores should exclusivelly offer local goods to their customers instead bringing it from another countries. In this essay, I will examine why this can be detrimental to a country economy as well as it reduces their consumerism.

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Young children should be punished in the same way as adults if they commit a serious crime (such as a violent attack or a robbery). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Punishment is a legal way in many countries to help criminals to recover from their wrong actions. Young children who have seriously broken the law with violence and stealing should receive the same sentence as adults. In my opinion, children should not be judged as adults because they cannot see all the consequences of their actions as well as they can be badly influenced by others if they go to jail.

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When a country develops its technology the traditional skills and the ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that due to new inventions, nations are gradually phasing out their ancient skills and lifestyles and it would be meaningless to preserve them. However, I completely disagree with this opinion since the culture and values are integral part of human nature which would remain with them forever. Further, main objective is to develop the existing skills.

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Please help with the evaluation of the below essay. More and more people are choosing ready to eat food rather than cooking themselves. Do this development has more advantages than disadvantages?

There is no doubt that the global food market has done rampant growth and people are preferring effortless products to eat rather than grilling themself in kitchen. In my view, it has a more negative effect on our life which I will discuss in the latter view.

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Some feel executives in large companies should receive high salaries while others think they are paid too much compared to ordinary workers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Every profession has it’s own pay scale system. It is believe that jobs which have high risk should get handful salary whereas work require less care should get low pay. However, few people argue that officers are getting high pay than ordinary workers. In my opinion executives should receive good salary than normal workers. This essay will discuss the both views.

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Handwriting today is less formal than it was in the past. What are the causes of this change? Is this a positive or negative development?

It is obvious fact that, nowadays, hand-writing is becoming more informal. And it is more easy to write any letters in computer as compared to past. Owing to advancements in technology and convenient, people are preferring electronic or printed letters. This development has not only merits but also demerits on the society.

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Handwriting today is less formal than it was in the past. What are the causes of this change? Is this a positive or negative development?

With increasing technology the quality of writing has become more informal as compared to the past.Enhancement of technology can be considered the main cause of less formal writing and I believe this is a negative development as it has diminished the skill of writing among people.This essay will examine the above cause and state reasons for its negative impact.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

It is very crucial for many people to own a house rather than to rent it in many countries. I agree to this point of view as owning a property makes you and your family feel more secure in the society. I think this is a positive situation and this essay will discuss the points supporting this.

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2. Some people think children should have mobile phones, others disagree. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

Learning new languages have always fascinated a lot of people. Most of the people nowadays feel that unlike traditional approach of learn a dialect from a well qualified teacher, this can now be done using online applications or watching movies and series in that particular language to which I completely agree. In fact, people in my country opt for such options as they feel it is quite economical and more fun.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Without a doubt, it is clear that each person born is highly talented in some way or the other. While some belive that an individual is naturally gifted, on the other it is said that one can be trained to develope a certain skill. In this essay, I will discuss both school of thought and state my viewpoint.

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Some people prefer to have a job that requires a good deal of travelling, while others prefer a sedentary job. Why? What other factors should be considered while selecting a job?

A section of people likes to have a job where they have to travel a lot whereas others have a controversial view. Although former view gives travel exposure and opportunities to learn many new things while doing a job, there is no doubt that sedentary job offers employees to be experts in their field and can get higher positions. I believe that salary, good work culture and job perks should be considered while choosing a job.

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Interview forms are the basic selection criteria for the most large companies. However, some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Companies provide employment to the large number of people. The success of any business depends on the quality of the staff so employers conduct the interview to select new workers. Few individuals think that interview is not only a way to appoint somebody on a job. I disagree with the given statement, which says that interview is not a reliable method but there are other better methods also for hiring employee in a company.

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Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people would argue that utilising authority funds to promote artist is not a good choice for using their taxes. Although people expect from government to release their funds in some other activities which are common for all, I believe that government should encourage artists to represent their nation worldwide through their talent.

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Some people believe that all students should be made to have an unpaid job in their free time. Do you agree or disagree?

Volunteers are one of the major pillars of civil societies. They not only help to upliftment the underprivileged sections but also they help to take them to the mainstream of the society. Thus, I totally agree that pupils need to join various social groups to do volunteer jobs in their leisure time.

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In some countries, government safety laws include things such as wearing a hard hat on a building site or wearing safety clothes in certain factories. To what extent are laws of this kind good idea? What sort of safety law would you introduce, if you were given a chance?

It is irrefutable; safety at work is must; and in a plethora of nations they have rigorous safety rules and regulations such as wearing safety shoes, and safety attiers, while working at factories. In my opinion, these safety laws should be made mandatory around the globe. Firstly, this essay will demonstrate why safety laws are indispensable and secondly, what other safety rules can be commenced to ensure safety.

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Parents are the best teacher. Do you agree or disagree?

Parents teach many valuable skills to their off springs. They are ‘The Pole Star’ for their off springs. I firmly believe that they are the first and best teacher. In upcoming paragraphs I will discuss my opinion in detail.

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Many people today find it difficult to balance the demand of their work and personal life. what are the causes of this situation, and but can be individuals amd employers do to reduce the problem?

In this busy day, it is natural to feel frustrated because there is an imbalance lifestyle between work and personal. A wide range of people experiences the difficulties to have me time because their job is demanding. There are several causes of this problem and the problem solving can be done by both the person and the company.

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In some high schools, part of the curriculum requires students to participate in community work such as helping the elderly or disabled. In what way do children benefit from this? Do you think it should be part of the curriculum?

The social work should be encouraged among youngsters. The few institutions should encourage social work among pupils to help retired or differently abled people. This will not only teach minors about their moral duties to the society but also assist them to be a good human being in future and having said that, it must be a part of their course content because this will allow them to feel more involved in these activities.

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Mobile phones and the internet are useful for older people. What are the ways they can use it? How they can be encouraged?

Mobile phones and the internet are very useful for old people. However, this section of population The world becomes a smaller place due to technological advancement. Especially mobile phones are now an integral part of everyone’s life. Although having access to smartphones, senior citizens are reluctant to use it at full efficiency, hence their use is limited to voice calling only. Inspite, this generation can be encouraged to use phone, internet and technology for their betterment.

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