IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1653

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In the past, most people spend their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each? Which do you think is better? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Society has changed their view about work. In the present, the people are more likely to change the company than in the past. In this essay I will explain why I think it is better to stay in the same corporation rather than frequently leave to another one, also including the strengths and weakness of each view.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

With the advent of technology, digital payments have gained a lot of popularity in several developing nations. Few consider this as a disadvantage due to the malpractices that are involved in cyber space. Nevertheless, purchases through mobile applications can simplify the payment process dramatically by reducing the usage of currency notes, and contribute to a greener environment. In my humble opinion, these advantages far overshadow the any disadvantages involved in this transformation.

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Limited money should be spend on computer equipment or good teachers. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Having money is important, because it can be spent in acquiring valuable assets. However, they should be minimal spending on gadgets because of the constant need to upgrade and sort for internet connectivity. Also, paying less for capable teachers would be valuable because of the need for face-to-face interactions and easy understanding. This essay would analyse the debate between the above topic, and also provide my opinion.

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Sports events such as Formula One and other car racing events should be banned because they are unnecessary waste of money and create more pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Formula one is a big racing car event, and its have been increasingly drawing publics attention over the years. Although this modality brings great benefits to our society, likewise, generation of jobs and leisure time to population. Some argues saying that it generates an excessive amount of pollution, besides being an unwise way of spending money. Therefore, it should be banned. I have dissenting views with this group, on the following essay, I will be further explaining why I disagree with this statement.

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Some developed countries have reduced the number of school hours. Is this a positive or a negative development?

School is a place for children to learn and develop. Some developed nations have decreased the timing of school hours to provide free time for kids to develop other skills. Indeed, it is a constructive trend owing to the factors hashed-out in the following paragraphs.

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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Despite the apparent threat that environmental problems pose on human lives, vast majority of individuals opt to take the issue nonchalantly. I am at full accord with the given statement. Below essay will explicate the view and reasons to support my opinion.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign languages is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign languages Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

A few people argue the sole reason of acquiring a new language is to move and work abroad. Others contradict this saying that there is much more to learning a new language than just travel and work.

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Some teachers think that international students exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Now a days studing abroad is an on going trend among teenagers . While some educators think that it is advantageous , others points out certain disadvantages . But in my opinion the merits are definitely worthy than the few negatives .

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Some people think that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree?

It is commonly thought that music can be considered as an effective tool for engaging people of various generations and cultural backgrounds. In my opinion, since the vast majority of cultures include some kind of music, it occurs to be a common way of communication amongst members of different societies, and regardless of their ages most human beings seem to be into dancing, playing musical instruments, singing or other activities related to music.

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Some people that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Both exercise and diet play a crucial role in helathy lifestyle. Few people believe that physical exercise is main aspect for better health while other say that nutrition diet plays a major role . This essay will discuss how both physical activity and balanced diet plays an essential role in life.

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Some believe in enrolling their children into the best schools so that they learn to socialize while others believe that homeschooling is a better option. Discuss both views and where do you stand on this topic?

Educational system effectiveness has always bee a topic of hot debate. Few individuals are of the opinion that children should be sent to world-class educational institutions where they meet and interact with new people. Also, there are few others who advocate for homeschooling as an option. Personally, I tend to agree upon the former idea because of its quite visible benefits over the other. Although I would shed some light on both the sides in ensuing sections before reaching to a conclusion.

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Nowadays employment options are changing and employees cannot rely on having same job and working conditions throughout their life. What are some possible causes? Suggest some ways to plan for the future under these circumstances.

Job market has seen tremendous changes over the past decade. There are so many changes to the existing careers options that an individual cannot depend up on similar type of job or work routine all their life, due to numerous reasons which I would highlight in ensuing section and also try to provide some possible methods on how one can plan his future effectively.

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People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that choosing a proper course is one of the crucial actions to have a prosperous future. Some people think that they should select the course that enables them to work in demanded jobs, not following their interest. Since, there are factors as well-being and a willing, playing a significant role on creating a successful career, I disagree with this view.

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Sales companies should recruit people who are hungry for money as they will make the most dedicated workers. Do you think money is the driving force behind hard work? What factors should be taken into consideration when recruiting staff for sales positions?

It is commonly believed that people who are obsessed with money would be hard workers in the sales sphere hence they are ideal for employers. In my firm conviction money is not the only thing that could cause productive work, moreover, if an employee is sociable, energetic, and persuasive the company should take into account this person.

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Some people think that the most important function of music is to help people relax. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a belief that the most crucial role of music is encouraging people to unwind. I strongly disagree with this opinion because there are such other nonetheless functions as cheering people up when they are out of energy and connection them with each other.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

Nowadays, the pace of everyone’s life is getting faster. As a result, many adults find it difficult to take good care of their parents due to lack of time.This essay will intend to deliberate not only problems but also solutions in subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people believe that teachers should give homework to children and some thinks they should dont give. Discuss both views

Homework is a vital part of wards education,some segment of society believes that giving homework should be mandatory,but some believe that homework should not be given. I would like to delve my views in the following paragraphs

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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience , such as juvenile delinquency , arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There has been many alteration in the role of females in the society in comparison with 20 years back. Nowadays,teenagers face lot of hurdles and commit crime at young age. This happens because wife focuses on their career and not on upbringing of their child. I strongly agree with the above statement and my inclination is justified further.

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SOME PEOPLE FEEL THAT ENTERTAINERS SUCH AS FILM STARS, POP MUSICIANS OR SPORTS STARS ARE PAID TOO MUCH MONEY. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? WHICH OTHER TYPES OF JOB SHOULD BE HIGHLY PAID?

While a group of people think that artists and sportsmen are being paid more than they deserve ,another group think the opposite.Is it logical or not?This essay will argue why it is not logical at all and instead of celebrities like them,who are the most deserving candidates in the race of earning more money.

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Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV programs has bad consequence, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people insist on the view that censorship should ban this news as avoiding instability in the community. As regards to, I tend to disagree with this contention and will justify my reasons below. Publishing the details of lawlessness in the media will indeed bring many problems: 1. Potential criminals may imitate the details.

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