IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1786

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argued that teenagers need to be educated by the ex-prisoners about the dangers of a crime. I completely agree with the idea that allowing these people to speak to teenagers is the best way to discourage them from the criminal activities.

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Nowadays people work too hard .What is the reason for this?What should employers to do to prevent employees from over working?

Today people are spending more time in their work. They are toiling everyday to earn more money. This essay will discuss on reason behind this trend as well as the solution to prevent employees from working over hours.

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In many countries, some people have health problems because they choose live unhealthy ways. What do you think the reason for this and how can it be solved?

We can do anything if we have great health, and health is known to be the greatest wealth. Nevertheless, more and more people choose a bad lifestyle which is an unhealthy way to effect general wellbeing in most countries. In my viewpoint, one of the reasons is the lack of physical activities and the poor in nutrition. In this essay, I will explore some causes associated and propose some solutions to tackle this issue.

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Some people agree with spending lots of money on a large wedding, while others believe it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

Wedding ceremony is the one of the most important events in the life of a wife and a husband. However, some people argue that spearing a huge sum on holding a grand marriage party is preposterous, while some others, me included tend to throw an astronomical amount of cash on organizing an impressive marriage ceremony. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument supported by the relevant examples and give a conclusion.

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many universities professional cannot find the jobs in their choosen profession.what factors may have cause this situation and what in your opinion should be done about it.

In the recent compititive era , the young generation face the multiple problems in the work selection. Mostly, the higher education institutions are hardly able to meet the professional choice of the students . There are many and various reasons behind this problem. In my piece of writing, I shall shed light on the reasons behind this problem.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

The world is moving and changing very fast. There are a lot of problems, which most of the countries will have to face in the future. The most important issues are related to the environment, overpopulation and education. My country will also face those problems in the next decade. In my opinion, the environmental degradation and educational problems are the biggest challenge for Poland.

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well-educated today. To what extent do you agree with statement?

Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching TV set. However, television can not replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less good-educated today. I think this acute issue should be tackled by the government or by the parents. "Nowadays children are the future of society"- so said the first president of the Republic of Uzbekistan A. Karimov. So why are children spending a lot of time for watching tv set these days.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited

Theer has been lots of debates about animal rights in different societies over last decade and sometimes we watch or hear from media that a group of people are protesting in each corner of the world to protect animal rights. Some people believed that animals should not be exploited ad should be treated fairly by human being, while some others point that human needs are more important and people should be allowed to use animals for their different purposes. The following essay will be discuss both views in details, but in my opinion, I believed that animals can be used as the source of food or to assist human beings in the proportinate way and human should treat them properly.

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The number of people working online from home has grown in some countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

While online working is being increasingly popular, it is becoming controversial since some people feel that its merits are hard to quantify exactly. There are valid opinions on both sides, which I will discuss now now.As today's world is becoming increasingly more developed, distance working appears highly popular in some countries because workers consider that they feel more convenient and they can recharge quickly by spending their breaks with their family members. Furthermore, working online considers the superior way of cutting the rate of spread of COVID-19. Finally, it is fairly clear that working from home is profoundly effective for not only the health of today's Earth population, but also for the workers' spirit.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education is a vital element in a child's development. Over the past years, there has been a lot of option on how the parents want their children to attain an excellent education. Hence it brought the argument on being homeschool and being enrolled in a school. Although homeschooling provides much freedom for the children to learn on their own time without limit, being enrolled in school will provide them much of the resources that are available in a school set up.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education is essentially important in everyone's life, particularly children. However, the question is whether learning at personal space or school is better has sparked a heated debate. Both of these views will be examined before a conclusion is reached.

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in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studied

Taking one year gap between high school & university studies is become very popular in some countries. Those who think that it is an opportunity for their future plan to work in somewhere and travel extensively. Actually in the latest training where I participated, I met with several people from Denmark and Norway who were over 24 and are working in non-profit organizations. By assembling all of the facts I will try to examine what are the advantages and shortages of taking one year gap.

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Certain parents believe that good parenting means constantly being involved in the lives of their children. While some parents believe it is better for the development of their children if they learn to deal with situations by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

From pregnancy to potty training, to their first step, parents promotes and support the physical, emotional, social and intellectual development of a child. There are two kinds of parents in the world. Some believe in their child’s capability to do everything by them and the latter, finds pleasure in supporting and involving in all the activities of the child. There are both pons and cons for these two parenting. In this essay, let us discuss each one with examples.

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Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Television has become notorious among the children. It is believed that with the assist of television learner can learn in a very convenient way so the parents and tea he should give emaphsis to watch them television. In my perspective, I agree television is crucial for childern varieties of informative things. However, parents and teacher should take active participation in them to prevent them from being addicted from viewing atrocious websites which are not good for them.

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Some people think that purpose of museums should be to attract and entertain young people. Others believe that the purpose of a museum is to educate, not entertain. Disuss both view and give opinion

Museums are among the best places which gives vast historical information about the past of any place. Some people assume that a museum should be aimed for youth fun.Whereas, a group of others, believe that such landmarks are to provide knowledge rather than entertainment.This essay will discus both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why visiting museum for educational reason is superior.

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Nowadays parents are sending their children to trips abroad for educational purpose. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

Currently, there is the new tendency of sending children to foreign countries for educational tours.Undoubtedly, this trend has both strong and weak sides. In this essay opposite aspects related to it will be demonstrated.

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Some people think that qualities a person needs to become succesfull in today's world cannot be learned at university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the modern and competetive society, it is undeniable that we must equip ourselves woth plenty of knowledge in order to succed in life. Personally, i agree with this notion. In the following paragraphs i will put forth my arguments to support my point of view.

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The internet has caused people to be isolated from their rea lives. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed by a host of people that the internet can cause people to become less socialized and be more individualistic. To some extent, personally, I agree with this statement. In the following paragraphs, I will put forth my argument to support my point of view.

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People today rarely interact with their neighbours, and this is having a harmful effect on local communities. What are the possible causes of this trend? What can be done to address it?

It is an irrefutable fact that over the last two decades, the socialisation among communities is getting weakened. This trend is mainly due to over-reliance on technology and the lack of community centers. However, there are a number of measures that can be implemented to resolve the issues of socialisation, including the blend of technology with the conventional ways of living, and the provision of adequate communal points.

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Many people are choosing to move to cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

For the last few decades, there has been a predominent trend of people relocating of countryside to the nearby cities. There are various reasons behind such massive migration. Although there are a few drawbacks associated with this movement, the benefits it offers exceeds the drawbacks.

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