IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1785

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

In today's world for getting entertained people are finding various avenues such as watching movies, dancing on favourite songs and many more. Also music makes vital role in this process therefore we see different types of music in all over the world. Basically we need music to enjoy life with melodious beats also to reduce stress. In this essay I will explain the importance of traditional music along with need in depth.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? And give your own opinion.

At present, studying abroad has popular as many graduates want to expand their knowledge, especially in English speaking counties. Although this option provides several advantages, those have to pay a large amount of money. This essay will explore both benefits and drawbacks of this statement.

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Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Global warming is certainly the problem of the new millennium. The Major cause for this is the overuse of fossil fuels. The natural sources under the Earth's surface are used in various ways. However, the main demand is for the production of plastics and for vehicles. One of the suggested solution is the rise in the cost of this material. Although this could lower the consumption, I believe that this would not confront the current problem.

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In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

It is true that many adolescents are becoming lazy because there have been many non-stop television channels since technology has been extremely developed. Sports programmes are one of them and discourage young people to get involved in team games. I strongly disagree with this statement as most of teenagers enjoy taking part of sports activities with their friends.

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Some people think art such as sculpture and music cannot improve the quality of people’s lives so the government should not spend money on them but on health and defence. What is your opinion?

Art is a fundamental part of society and should be funded as it enriches lives through beauty and thought provoking ideas. Art represents ideas and objects in new and interesting ways that allow people to think more deeply about the world and appreciate beauty. In addition, Arts funding represents a small fraction of the amount of money spent by governments and does not significantly impact the amount of taxes that need to be collected. In this essay, the value of funding the Arts will be discussed.

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Some people think that it is better for a country's economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The most important consideration in country`s is economy. For the recession to develop there must be a turnover of money.Some people think that spending money will help a country`s economy to be leading and prosperous in the long rush and I agree. For instance, some information about Kazakhstan recession. Our country makes a lot`s of export product which help to our homey stay afloat. However at the same time we purchase products from other countries because it is cheaper. This is due to the price of our products. We will have more benefits if sell production to another country and buy material for the citizen. Nevertheless, this doesn't always work perfectly.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is often argued that government should prioritise expenditure on public needs instead of spending on arts, music, and the theatres. In my opinion, the administration should give equal weightage to both.

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

Over the past few years, there has been a dramatic rise in the number of students opting to study overseas. This essay will outline the pros and cons of this trend for the students and nations concerned.

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

Nodoubt, there are many poor people living in every nation, but they have adress to this problem by different methods. I will explain some reasons behin world poverty along with the ways to solve this issue in the upcoming paragraphs.

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These days,too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine,rather than by following a healthy lifestyle

Many humans today do not follow a healthy lifestyle.All people various infectious diseases are spreading, because not all people follow a healthy behaviour.Nowadays, all people be illness immediately go to the hospital.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In today's era, many people have developed more interest to work as a independent entity rather working for a company. This is happening because of independent work preference. In my opinion, there are many negative points of this trend which could impact these workers severely. In this essay, I will expound on the cause of this phenomenon before elaborating negatives points.

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what are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your couuntry to live or study abroad?

Many countries has plenty of pros and also cons sides to live or take a knowledge from overseas educational systems . Now I am going to express in our cities possibilities and convenents to live or learn at us and also give some supply detailed sentiments perfectly via this essay .

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The presence of technology in the classroom has become more and more apparent and offers students tremendous resources with which to supplement their education. Given time, technology will completely replace the traditional teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

The universal popularity of technology has revolutionized the way people acquire information and knowledge. Many people assert that technology will take place of the traditional teacher eventually. From my perspective, I strongly disapprove this statement for several reasons which will be further discussed and elaborated in the following paragraph.

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More and more business as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally of socially rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

Nowadays, the number of the people is using different ways to communicate than meet look to aspect of interaction. There are many pros and cons behind using them so this essay will outline the advantages and disadvantages of communication reasons and mention some possible opinions of mine.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and What measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Currently, one of the biggest challenge for humanity is preventing the rise of global warming. Unfortunately, the major cause of this issue is the unawareness and ignorance of human behavior. Therefore, in order to overcome this problem, citizens and government can impose a policy or campaigns that could alter individuals’ habits.

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Many people think happiness relies upon the responsibility of individuals, others think that is affected by other factors.

People have different views on factors which effect the prosperity. In my opinion, an individual can stay happy irrespective of the obstacles in life.

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Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while other believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the most topical issues in modern society is problems associated with pollution. People have different views about whether the usage of transports or industrial growth is responsible for such issues. While the dramatic increase of cars has also some causes for it, I believe that industrial developments are the primary source of pollution.

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in recent years life has become more stressful than it has ever been, As a consequence more and more people are sifferig from stress-related pron[blmes.What factors are contributing to this increase and what do yout think can be done to overcome the current problems.

Many people think that children should obey their parents, while others debate that teens should decide independently. Although obeying parents is more advantageous for child’s behavior and further life, I believe that thinking independently will enlarge child’s world outlook and deal with facing challenges by themselves.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, some extent students are involved in volunteer activity under the authority of high schools. A group of people considers the obligatory can be put into practice relating the social issues for university/ college learners. I would totally agree with this view.

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Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have responsibility to monitor whatever their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Obesity in younger generation is a crucial issue prevailing in Australia since this preventable disease has covered two third of population of children living in Australia. Hence, it is suggested that it is prime responsibilty of schools to keep an eye on the intake of food consumed as well as the physical exercise done by students. In this essay, I will completely disagree with this proposition.

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