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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that children should attend extra classes after school while some disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Modern life can be very taxing, and so education is the prime need of the day. Better education guarantee better work provisions ans so better quality of life. Extra classes after school is considered pertinent by some people, while others opine that they have negative repercussions. This essay delve into both views before reaching an opinion.

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At many companies today, applicants are often rejected due to old age. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, the problem has been brought into focus is the preference when hiring new young staffs of some businesses. Many argue that older employees are unsuitable for their hiring positions because of numerous reasons, making them frequently denied. In my view, this notion may bring several disadvantages rather than advantages to corporations. In this essay, I will discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of this action.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that clever marketing tempts plenty of customers to buy products but some people pay little attention to general advertising. I am going to shed some light on this statement.

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In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this rule of accommodation have some advantages or disadvantages?

In recent years, more an more city inhabitants have started to live in large apartment blocks. For this reason, a debate regarding benefit and harms of this type of accomodations has emerged. In this essay, a brief explanation of the argument will be given.

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In some countries, parents want their children to focus on their studies only. Because of this, many young people do not get their first job until after college. In other countries, many children get their first part-time job while still in high school. Which approach do you think is better? Why?

It is commonly believed that families support their kids to study only, thus most of those children do not get their first job until they get graduated from university. On the other hand, in other contries many teenagers get to work during high school. I believe having job earlier would give make children to be more responsible character in society, benifeting himself and his family in short and long term.

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Some people say that no one should work after the age of 65years,others say that they should continue the work as long as they want.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The retirement age was a place of argument by experts for decade.Some of researcher recommend that no one have to work after his brithday 65 while other disagree withnin purpose of allowed community to decide regarding to their desier.In this essay both view will be examin and I will outline why I agreed with second opinion.

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big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

While it is being argued that salary should be the prime criterion for choosing a job, in my view, a safe and stress-free working environment is as important as the financial benefits gained from a job.

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In many countries today, parents are able to send their children to same-sex schools or co-ordinated schools.Some believe that the children going to single-sex schools might have dissadvantages later on.To what extent do you believe?

Nowadays, parents have many options of schools to choose from when deciding to send their children to schools, whether it is a single-sex school or a co-educational. However, many believe that there are disadvantages to choosing same-sex schools.

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some people think that giving it to the poor countries has more negative impacts than a positive answer do what extent do you agree or disagree .

In these recent years, people claimed that giving resources and things to poor countries has more cons effects to them rather than benefits them. I personally agreed to a certain extent that the resource that we give to them might impact their physical health, well-being and others. In the following paragraphs, I will explain my views.

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Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.

With the advent of technology, we can see that there is a giant leap in the development of computer games. Computer games are advertised today in such a way that even adults would buy them. Therefore, it is very critical to consider, whether these games are a waste of time or not for children. From my perspective, I agree with the statement that computer games is in fact a waste of time among children mainly for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.

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The growing number of obese people is putting strain on the healthcare system.Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent you are agree or disagree?

It is true that, in recent years obesity based diseases spead considerably in most countries. Many consider that, during the schooling period towards this occasion some preventive actions would be implemented and increased awareness of more physical activity amoung the pupils, the percentage of obesity would be reduced. I partly agree with this statement. In this essay, I will illustrate the pros and cons of obesity clinic problems and educational skills based on my point of view and support it with examples as well.

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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, developments in health care is becoming more advanced and reliable. While this advancements are on its way for evolution, the number of elderlies that the society has to take care for is also increasing.

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Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community.

It is argued that not only the evolution in the technology can support to ascertain the details of the crimes, but also it shows the ways to prevent some lawbreaking which will be occurred in the future. Firstly, this essay discusses that technology developments can determine how to find an evidence by using gadgets. Secondly,there will be an excellent impact on precluding the felonies.

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Some educational institutions are increasingly using technology . Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of incorporating technology in education.

In recent years. Many educational institutions have started using technology for teaching and learning processes from tablets to online learning platforms. There is a huge variety of tools that help students to learn effectively. However, while technology can offer many benefits there are some drawbacks .In this ,essay I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of incorporating technology.

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Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays it is constantly argued that more money should be allocated for educational purposes instead of recreation and play. From my perspective, I agree that these aspects are equally important and the expenditure should be evenly distributed to them. This essay will analyze them with a conclusion.

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We live in a world of technology these days .while the Internet brings with it clear advantages, problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages to what extend do you agree.

In recent years technology has become an important part of our everyday life. However, Internet also acquitted problems with control of our security and privacy of our personal information, which outweights the advantages technological advancements .Internet has impacted positively on lives of people of different age and occupation and I believe that the advantages of Internet are greater than disadvantages.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Retirement age has been a controversial topic over the last 10 years due to differences in gender (women retire before men), job types, and special health conditions. When it comes to establishing a retirement age, there are several factors to consider.

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Some people believe that humans should be able to use animals for their own benefit while others argue that the rights of animals should be protected. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the world of today people tend to use animals in various ways no matter how cruel they are: for food in farming, for experiments in science, or for entertainment like hunting or zoos. Many activists around the world are against this atrocity. They are fighting for equality between humans and living creatures. In my opinion, they are doing the right thing.

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Air transport is increasingly used to export fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Air shipments across different nations regarding food that are produced seasonal are in demand. The beneficial effects of air transport are stability and manpower availability. However, the drawbacks are increased prices of commodities and strain on the environment.

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Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, most children are busy playing video games on their smart devices. This essay focuses on the reasons for this particular behaviour and how it affects the child's both mental and physical condition in a negative way.

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