IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 873

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with healt problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

Clearly, alternative ways of treating illnesses have gained quite a popularity over the last years. It is increasingly diverting many people from conventional doctors, and although it may have some advantages, the change may cause certain repercussions.

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Many museums charge admission fee while others are free. Do the advantage of charging people to visit a museum outweigh the disadvantage?

Museums are one of the most important part of every countries to show their culture and ancient times.Meanwhile,some museum around the world have no permission fee.On contrary,some museums have entry fee.I think there are some merits and demerits in both of them.I am going to discuss both in this essay with some releavant examples.

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Some people think that children should follow their parents’ advice, however, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people claim that kids do not know the proper direction to choose, parents play a role in giving instructions and recommendations to their children, while others think that it is not necessary. In this essay, I agree with the topic and I will discuss both views and give my opinions in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that government should be held responsible when problem of homelessness and unemployment arise. Do you agree or disagree?

Homelessness and unemployment are the main problems that many countries of the world are going through. There are many factors responsible for this situation including the government. Many people believe that the government should be fully responsible for this. I don’t agree with that , the reasons for the increase in unemployment and homelessness are numerous and it cannot be one reason alone nor can the government alone be held responsible for this issue.

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our life. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative trend?

It is generally acknowledged that the demand for robots is going up, therefore, the lifestyle starts to depend more and more on the technology industry. With great expectations for the next few years, these innovations may simplify or even make a revolution in some life sectors, such as education, health, transportation or even parenting.

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Some people prefer to live in a house while other feel that living in an apartment has more advantages. Discuss Advantage and disadvantages

The discussion about the accommodation issue is becoming overwhelmingly popular among the poblic. According to some, people ought to live in house, other people belive that there are more advantages for citizens living in apartments. In my opinion, apartment and houses are both have advantages and disadvantages aspects.

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These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, more and more people have changed their shopping styles from the in-store shopping to online purchasing. There are sort of advantages and disadvantages of e-commerce, while I believe that the advantage of on-line shopping outweighs the backwards.

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Parents should not pressure their children to choose particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose path they like. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Employer should focus on personal qualities over qualifications and experienced when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In today's modern world, in many societies, focusing on visual qualities instead of qualifications and experiences to hire one as an employee has become widely common.In this regard, I strongly disagree with this point for a number of reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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some people think that public health is the responsilibility of the government while others think that people should be responsbile for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A healthy lifestyle is essential for personal well-being. As per people's views, it is the responsibility of the government to provide quality services,on the other hand, individuals should be held accountable for their energy.

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Some people say that children should play games which require teamwork such as football and basketball whereas, some think they should be doing individual sports such as swimming and running. Do you agree or disagree?

Sports play a vital role in our life.A group of individuals fathom that kids should play football ,cricket and basketball because they need teamwork ,while others believe that games like swimming and running are good for children.I completely agree with the first statement because teamwork can teach valuable things like leadership,good communication,strong bonding and so on.

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The cost of living is higher in many countries. What is the effects of higher prices to individuals and society? What is the best way for people to deal with this problem? I

TOur agency is excited to develop and conduct a marketing communication campaign for the new computer laptop by the well-known manufacturer in Uzbekistan. With its latest energy-efficient laptop battery technology that can last up to 21 hours with a single charge and its powerful processing CPU chip, this new laptop is set to revolutionize the market. We will work to develop a suitable name for the product and ensure a good marketing and promotional mix for the product.

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There seems to be a common agreement that women are better at taking care of children compared to men and thus they should put more time and energy into baby caring. I totally disagree with this statement and I believe that women should be viewed equally with men in work and life scare.

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In certain countries famous festival witch attract million of people on site. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such popular festivals

The popularity of international festivals has increased immensely over the past few decades. These festivals, sounding benign and all entertaining at first sight, have also brought impediments on their own. Therefore, the focus of the following paragraphs will be to examine the success and failures of organizing kind feasts.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self empoyed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

There is no doubt that being self employed has been increasingly popular among today's individuals rather than working for firms or traditional workplaces in recent years. There have been various principal causes of this trendy phenomenon as well; however, some drawbacks shoud be taken into consideration.

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Some people think that schools should focus on academic subjects like algebra, history, and physics, but others think that schools should spend time focusing on practical skills like time management and banking. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Educational system has always been a subject of discussion. There has been a lot of debate going on whether schools should focus on academic subjects or on practical skills. In this essay I will be disputing the beliefs of both sides and expressing my thoughts about this issue.

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The statement that "women are better at childcare than men" is a stereotype that has been perpetuated in many cultures. However, this assertion is not based on any scientific evidence or empirical data. While it is true that women have traditionally taken on the role of primary caregiver, this is not because they are inherently better at it, but rather because of social and cultural norms that have reinforced this gender role.

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Some people believe that old buildings should be replaced with more modern ones. Other people argue that we should protect old buildings because they have a special value. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many old buildings are demolished nowadays due to various reasons, the proponents believe that such phenomena could benefit the local areas, be it the improvement of city image, and the prevention of safety hazards. However, I personaly agree that the value of traditional building should not be overlooked, since it could passing down the culture to the next generation.

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The visuals give information about the number of spacecraft launched by various national governments between 1957 and 2007 and the purpose of each mission

The provided charts indicate the amount of spacecraft and the reasons for them being launched by different countries during a 50-year period between 1957 and 2007. Overall, the vast majority of space missions were launched by the Soviet Union/Russia. The main purpose of all the launches was communicating.

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The creation of the nature of human women is discipline, sacrificing themselves and doing their job deliberately compare to men .the majority of men are hard and difficult to approach. so it's true ,the women are focusing on raising the children .from the below paragraph I mention

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