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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

It is certainly true that there are a number of varied subjects for children in schools. There is an ongoing debate whether different areas like music, art, and drama should be given equal priority similar to academic subjects in schools. I strongly agree with this opinion because this helps children to have alternative career options and also they play the role of extracurricular activities for relaxation from their regular studies.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is said that many people are advising children to try their best in order to gain something. I believe that this idea brings various beneficial impacts towards the children, however, several drawbacks also could happen.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a organization.What might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed.

In this recent era, Nowadays all youths want to become entrepreneurs rather than work in a company. In this essay ,I will discuss the reason why people are interested in working independently along with the disadvantages of this statement by taking some examples from newspapers and journals.

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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that using animals as lab rats for medical development is necessary, while others say that it is an inhumane act and should be abolished. Even if they are useful to humans, I believe that the beast should not be treated like a simple scientific experiment.

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Urban problems Many cities have become less pleasant places to live in recent years. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, gathering the comfort of a house to live in was a bit difficult. There are several factors that cause this to happen. In this essay, I will explain the causes and provide solutions to the given topics.

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Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

We live in this age where computers are massively used for any activities that are involved in any human's daily life. Some people believe that the creation of this machine is the most crucial thing in mankind's history due to its multiple functionality and ability to generate more advanced technologies. On the other hand, people state that computers are dependent on other technologies.

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Prison is the comman way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, crime rates have surged dramatically and committing misdeeds also has become so normal for offenders in most countries. It is argued that confinement is one of the best measures for guilt to resolve the issue. While others believe that ensuring a quality education to inmates is a great option. I completely agree with this thought and believe that providing ample amount of education, support and vocational training along with imprisonment prevents the criminal from committing the crime in future and afterwards helps the offender to be a responsible citizen.

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Some people think It is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays friendship is a well-discussed topic among communities. A group of people believes that real friends should be same-minded. However, another group has a notion that buddies could have different opinions and views about a common topic. this essay will discuss both sides and reach a conclusion.

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As technology develops, more shopping and business is done through the internet while communication face to face becomes less frequent. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays technology is growing drastically helping companies to expand their reach to customers living in different countries of the globe but this has even affected one-on-one communication between the seller and the buyer so does this ever-growing development have a positive or negative impact? This essay will discuss both viewpoints with some examples.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in rural areas. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

Every man comes to this question sometimes: what is the best place to live? Living a active live in a busy town or having more relaxed lifetime in the remote area. Today we are going to discuss both sides.

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Many people spend all their money as they get it, rather than saving for the future. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative situation?

Lately, many topics are being seriously discussed among various individuals and groups, and one prominent topic is money. Spending money recklessly is a trend among people, and saving is being ignored, in the succeeding paragraphs, the reason why this situation happened and whether an advantage or disadvantage in this case are to be discussed.

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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Nowadays, people must obey the rules and laws of the country they are living or visiting. However, some individuals find it difficult and pointless to follow these things.I support the idea of following the rules and laws.

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The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?

The ubiquity of advertising in today's world is undeniable, it has permeated to every aspects of our daily lives. From my perspective, eventhough it sometimes brings to us the misinformation or the exaggeration of that product, it has some advantages that help us live in the cruel global market like nowadays. I totally disagree that advertising will be banned with some following reasons below.

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Some people think governments should make university education free, but others think students should pay fees by themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

By all means, education should be free. The purpose of learning itself has already paid for the cost. The concept of learning can be transformed if we change the beginning. When we pay for a course upfront, the lecturer is obligated to teach and pass the pupils. Conversely, the pupils have the right to be made understand and to graduate.

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Some people say that the best preparation for life is learning to work with others and be cooperative. Others take the opposite view and say that learning to be competitive is the best preparation. Discuss these positions, using concrete examples of both. Tell which one you agree with and explain why.

Nowadays, a number of corporate organisations encourage employees to work in groups to complete working tasks collaboratively. However, some believe that it is not necessary as working independently stimulates competitive skills. This essay will explore both viewpoints, and provide my opinion in conclusion.

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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the increase of people migrating to urban areas has led to numerous traffic and housing problems. This dilemma could be solved by relocating big enterprises with their factories and workers to rural areas. I completely agree with this point of view due to two primary reasons.

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many corporations expand their business to remote areas. Many people hold the view that relocating concerns to rural areas has potential benefits to economic growth and equitable development, while others hold a different perspective. This essay will explore how the benefits of this issue outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people think that it's easier for adults to learn skills (Ex: Computer skills) by themselves. Others think they need the help of a teacher in a classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion as well.

In this rapidly evolving world, technology become part of everyone's lifestyle.Whilst some folks believe that learning new skills by themselves is much easier and less time-consuming, with the help of technology. I firmly believe that people should consider teachers for understanding new skills in the initial phase, to get proper feedback and explanation of the mistakes during their training.

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POPULATION: The number of people who decide not to have children has increased greatly Do you think this is a positive or negative development

In today's rapidly evolving world, population become a topic of discussion among the people. Over the last few years, you can see a gradual surge in the graph of couples, who don't want to become parents.This is a situational topic, the effects of less population depend on the country and their a sum of the living beings in that province, In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this development, with a brief conclusion.

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Many people leave their home country to study abroad nowadays. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, it is common for many people to travel to answer country to continue their studies. This essay will explore some of the benefits and drawbacks of this recent trend.

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