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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free Do you think the advantage of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums in all Countries are the best place to show educational and historical information about that country or even other Countries all around the world.Some museum-goers believe that there should be no entrance fees for galleries as these are heritages of the country and belong to all individuals,Whereas others disagree.I partly agree that admission to free museums can be helpful for students and low-income families but overall, I stick to the idea that museums can not protect their artefacts without charging people.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal some people however, think that other type of progress are equally important for a country. discuss both these views and give your own opinion;

In recent years, global investigation through economic improvements become on the rise. There is a wildly-held perception that financial progress is the most crucial issue rather than other improvements. From my personal perspective, there are many measurements like educational or health relative ones, being vital for the progressed community as equal as economical.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. Do you agree or disagree?

with the rapid development in technology, a sea-change has been noticed in the transportation services across the world. It is asserted that authorities ought to invest money for the development of railways instead of roads. However, I disagree with the aforesaid notion and reasons for this are mentioned in the subsequent segements.

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Formal exams are used to assess srudents at the end of each semester in many countries.Why are these exams used by schools and universities? What other types of assessment are possible? Give reasons for your answer along with example.

Formal exams are included in many education systems across the countries to assess students' abilities. This is often done by the end of a semester when the students are being tested on all of the materials that they learned in the previous 6 months. Although it is true that most exams occur only once or twice a year. Yet, there are many other mini-assignments that usually students have to go through during the semester period.

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Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or

Many people hold the view that plastic bags should be prohibited because they cause a lot of environmental problems. However, replacement plastic bags can be a hard and impossible issue, so I think plastic bags should not be banned.

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In many countries, children are engaged in part-time jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There are a lot of countries where children work in different half-time jobs. Some people believe part-time work is on behalf of the children as they can learn real-life earlier while others think this situation can negatively affect the youngster`s psychology. I believe that the disadvantages of this trend vastly outweigh the advantages.

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Some say that news has no connection with most people's life and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Some individuals are of the belief that there is no connection between news and the majority of people's life, accordingly spending time on the press such as reading newspapers and watching the news on TV is a waste. This is a viewpoint with which I partially disagree for a number of justifications.

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Some people believe that the teacher has an important role to play in educational success while others think it is the student that matters discuss and give your opinion.

Teachers play a significant role in building a personality of a child, therefore it is argued by many that in study career educators act as a backbone for students, however, others believe that it depends totally on a scholar how they carry their growth. In my opinion, trainers are the best role model for the pupil to be followed I'll further elaborate in this essay below.

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Many children these days have their own mobile phones what are the advantage and disadvantage of it.

It is an irrefutable fact that a large number of juveniles nowadays have their own cell phones.Although,many may see it as a positive phenomenon but it is not a trend without drawbacks.Both the benefits and darker side of this existence would be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Mobile phone and the internet could have many benefits for old people. However, this age group uses technology the least. What are the benefits for old people of using mobile phones and the internet? How can we encourage them to use this new technology?

The world has made massive progress in the field of communication and technology. Mobile phones and the internet provide numerous benefits to people of all age groups. However, it may be most useful to the elderly generation. Sadly, this generation uses these phones the least. This essay will discuss the various benefits of this technology and will also provide solutions to increase technological engagement among older folk.

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TOPIC 3: Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase his popularity?

Although riding a bicycle is so clearly a good way to protect the environment, not many people around the world prefer this type of vehicle. There are a number of reasons for this trend and various measures could be taken to improve the issue.

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Do you agree that virtual reality will help the development of society?

Virtual reality has been giving numerous benefits in so many areas, helping society to enhance the quality of their lives. The presence of virtual reality is a game changer in some fields of study and careers. I strongly agree with this statement and will give some of the reasons and samples ,especially in the medical and architecture area.

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Plastic bags are use widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people support the argument that plastics bag should not be allowed to be used anywhere due to the negative effects that they cause on the environment. I totally agree with this idea for some reasons.

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Topic: Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this gender equality era, there's still some myth in the society that male is genetically more competitive than female. However, in my opinion, competitiveness is not related to any of human's sex. Historically, many women have achieved some highest acknowledgements from the world, so do the men. Thus, this essay is going to try to prove, that anyone can achieve something through perseverance and an equal (not gender-biased) chance.

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Some people believe that only the government can bring about significant changes in society, while others think that even an individual can have a lot of influence on society. What is your opinion on the above statement? You should take about 40 minutes for this answer and write a minimum of 250 words.

it is often advocated that the leadership of a country holds the supreme power in its hands to be able to change society for the better and get rid of all its cons. However, this view is flawed in my opinion as I believe that without the cooperation of every individual, there is only so much the government can do for society’s betterment. The government can make strong policies and can mobilise resources for their execution, but the policy only yields the desired results when it is acted upon by all members of society. If the policy has been set in place, but no one acts in accordance with it, then it will never be able to achieve its stated primary objective. For instance, of late, many countries have come up with policies aligned with the goal of achieving lower carbon emissions by 2025. However, the individuals living in those countries assume a reckless attitude and hardly abide by the policy for curbing climate change. Hence, without individuals’ cooperation, the government can...

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Information technology enable many people to do their chores outside their workplace (e.g at home or while travelling) do the benefits outweigh the disadvantages

Advanced technologies provoke the incremental population who work from a distance nowadays. Despite some downsides derived from such trends, such as procrastination at work; and less communication in teams, I personally agree that the merits of working from cyber outweigh the disadvantages.

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea. The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going, which means that the resident population already pays money to these sites through the tax system. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel. The governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to visit them. If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go ...

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Nuclear power is used both for weapons of mass destruction and the production of cheap, clean energy. Do the advantages of nuclear power outweigh the disadvantages?

Nuclear power has been a controversial topic for many decades, with proponents arguing that it provides a source of cheap, clean energy, while opponents point to the risks of nuclear weapons, accidents, and waste. In this essay, I will weigh the advantages and disadvantages of nuclear power and argue that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

There is no denying the fact that the word crime, especially in Western countries has been a hot topic, without a doubt, the analysis depicts that it been degrading recently, however, individuals still have concerns about their safety. Further paragraphs will highlight the major reasons and potential solutions for this cause.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Happiness is considered in terms of wealth and investment these days. It is said by some folks that a major reason behind being extremely joyful is the possession of excessive amounts of money. This essay will discuss the predominant reasons behind being joyful by elucidating the monetary value and other elements of life which can bring pleasure. People are living more stressful lives these days. There are several factors which affect the measurement of enjoyment. Firstly, when individuals have financial security, then they tend to be more calm and are in a more delightful state. It indicates that they are free from any financial liability or burden. Secondly, money gives them the power to fulfil their dreams. For instance, they can pursue their luxurious hobbies or can maintain their lavish lifestyles which makes them happier. Therefore, by managing their lifestyle with financial resources, they keep themselves happy. On the other hand, as per a very common saying, happiness is a ...

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