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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Intelligence is most important qualities that a leader needs to have. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

It has been argued that intelligence is the most crucial tendency to be a leader. While some people believe that, others, including me, consider that other personalities are equally important.

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To meet the growing need for food for the increasing population, the country should make use of edible insects as food. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

Every person on this planet is sure that humans are invading the Earth in a way that both food resources and land won't stand that tremendous rise in population. since mankind occupied a lot of agricultural lands the crop-producing area has been diminished consequently.

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Write about the following topic. Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent days bullying has been a major concern as the number of bullies is rising day after another due to many factors , this essay is going to state the main reasons for this dilemma and the possible solutions .

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem

Nowadays, most people are of the opinion that exercise doesn't have much relevance in their daily activities and as such they develop problems in the long run.we will discuss extensively the problems that can arise from this and its possible solutions.

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Art and creativity are vital for cultural and social development. However, funding for creative artists is a contentious issue. While some people believe that governments should provide financial support to painters and musicians, others argue that alternative funding sources should be utilized. In this essay, I will explore both viewpoints and provide my own opinion.

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Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The extinction of some plants and animals is believed by some to be the main problem of our time. However, others argue that there are other more important global concerns. I am convinced that the extinction of plants and animals, as well as other global issues, are equally important.

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As technology advances, traveling to space is likely to become an option for holidaysmakers in the future. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of space tourism?

Technology is basically a systematic way of doing things and in the upcoming days with the help of this mankind will have a great choice to visit outer space and explore numerous things which they never experienced earlier. This essay will examine and emanate the pros and cons in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays, the quality of education is very low. Some people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers; others believe that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Despite considerable efforts into developing the quality of school education, it is still far below our expectations, unfortunately. To solve the issue, one of the proposals suggested by some pedagogical experts such as monitoring the qualification of educators, is controversial in our society. Although this suggestion could be beneficial for categorising teachers’ levels in terms of their teaching contents. From my perspective, however, its predictable outcomes are likely to be pessimistic. (68 words)

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It is important for individuals and countries to think about future rather than present. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that is relevant for people and countries to think about their future rather than the present. In this essay, I will discuss why I agree with this statement.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this present world, the majority of people do lead not a very healthy kind of lifestyle. And due to this reason, some people claim that government should provide more sports facilities, in order to fix it. But others think that sport is not enough. This argument is supported and refuted by many people. But I concur to think that both of the groups have good reasons for supporting their decision.

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Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

In many countries around the world, it is common to start going to school at six or seven years old. Some people think that this is a reasonable age for children to start their education life, while those who disagree point out that commencing school earlier gives children is more advantageous for children. In my opinion, it is more beneficial for children to start their school on the suggested day when they are slightly older because only at that age are they cognitively mature enough to receive formal education.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many sugary products are sold in markets so that people especially children consume them in big amounts. In my opinion, this has had a harmful effect in several areas.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their oroarams used for direct teaching purposes.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the use of computers on a daily basis in the contemporary world. For this reason, they should be established in the classrooms, and certain programs utilized for educational purposes.

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Nowadays, it is much easier for people to prepare food. Do you agree or disagree with the statement that it has improved people's lives?

With the advancement of technology, it is much easier for individuals to prepare food. Some people contend that this change has negative impacts on our daily lives, however, I agree with those who argue that its benefits far outweigh its disadvantages.

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Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly argued that life in the city is more convenient and interesting than in the countryside . Personally, I can neither completely agree nor disagree with this statement for a variety of reasons.

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Many people belive that schools should teach children to become good citizens and workers rather than independent individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and relevant examples.

Society has an idea that children have learned to become better citizens and workers at school. They believe that place can shape their character to be more socialise in the future than an individualist.

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Many children are encouraged to do part time work by parents? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

In this contemporary era, many offspring are motivated by their guardians to do part-time jobs so that they can be self-reliant and learn new things. In this essay, we will elucidate the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

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Some people feel tha manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging.Discuss bothe views and give your opinions.

Quite a number of individuals think that makers and shopping malls have the duty to cut down the pay for wrapping furnishings . Others believe that consumers should prevent purchasing items with a lot of covering.

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More and more people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes and other items. What are the reason for this. Is this a positive or negative trend?

It is unquestionable that a myriad of individuals are choosing to own material things produced by some famous brands. Although this behaviour can be caused by the necessity to be accepted by the society presented by some people, it also may harm local companies when it comes to financial aspects.

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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express their thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art is truly based on the expression of the creator. Thus, some people truly admire this creativity and think that it should not be hindered by applying any sort of restriction as it will affect the thoughts and ideas being produced by professionals. I believe that the freedom to express is necessary but there should be rules and regulations as well in order to preserve the sentiments of various cultures and religions.

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